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Broadway 02-28-06 06:31 PM

Jay 286 vs Broadway
 
Battle Rules:

1-2min not includin intro and outro
any beat
due by fri anytime
house rules

g/l



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-06 at 06:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-28-06 06:32 PM

Broadway has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 06:32 PM.

System 02-28-06 07:21 PM

Jay 286 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 07:21 PM.

Jay Rose 03-02-06 04:21 AM

ummmmm yep... here's me posting my battle a day early....again.....i dont play around ....
track is called "carry the cross"
i spit 2 min of dissis the rest was just production shit, intro, outro chorus...cuz the chorus was general, it wasnt particularly for hit....ha fuck it whatever...peep the track, and put a vote down next to my name....

CARRY THE CROSS - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3577086

Broadway 03-02-06 10:35 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=498412

Broadway 03-02-06 10:37 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3580741

link wit lyrics posted

J Summers 03-02-06 10:58 PM

Voted For: Jay 286

ok ok ok...

broadway.. shit at the beginin was pretty unnecessary ok ok...nice beat i like weezy so shits tight but damn wheres ya emotion your vocals are mad high cuz you aint bien loud on da mic at all... your delivery needs help too but ya lyrics is aight you had that the punches was good, personals were above average

aight...
whoa whoa there aint no reason to d/r cats in a battle

aight damn like that flow ... this is how people supposed to rap on the beat.. yeah lyrics is nice emotion needs work but ya delivery aight... production bonus and sound quality you took this one pretty easily

Jay Rose 03-02-06 11:06 PM

shit that aint dickridin....i aint even talk to any of those people....im just stating my opinion....its how i feel...just tryin to get other people to step it up....

-Substance- 03-03-06 05:53 PM

Voted For: Broadway

For The Self Of Internet Rappin? i know broadway dropped harder punches.....jay, you got the rapper voice down, but a hook on a net diss? lol............broadway, your voice was a bit shitty on quality but you still had better punches

Jay Rose 03-03-06 07:18 PM

ahhh. i dont care who you vote for cuz i know i killed him in ever aspect and you might just be holding a grudge cuz i decided that production was important, but damn man....can a man get a lil feedback...not one word explinations?

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fuck u up!
Voted For: Jay 286

Summer...

flowin koo.. on the beat.. simple n strait forward...
ideas are decent nothing special..
delivery is pretty koo..best part of your verse to me..
punches rolled off decent..
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286...

flowin on the beat koo.. gettin up n down into it koo..slipped on some parts...
ideas are koo.. good appraoch with some but ended wrong =/..
delivery...not for me but koo..helped ur punches
Punches.. came off koo cause of the way u shott'em off..
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ideas..tie
delivery..tie
punches..286

overall.. Jay 286.. dude's verse just added up t more in he end.. had a better punch set up which was more effective here which was really the difference..pZ!



i mean that is feedback...so i can understand why you voted....not just cuz "oh yea for the sake of battling" so feedback please

Premanition 03-04-06 07:26 AM

This was feedback posted for Jay 286
 
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Jay Rose 03-04-06 03:01 PM

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The Jett 03-04-06 05:02 PM

Voted For: Jay 286

Ok....this was funny cus broadway's intro kinda hurt himself cus jay's clip in there(the one he was rippin on)destroyed his own whole verse.

Flo,delivery......punches....everything goes to jay. not close.

Jay Rose 03-08-06 12:29 PM

keep on voting people.....please.....i mean comon just vote you know you wunna

Broadway 03-12-06 12:05 PM

uppin for votes

Jay Rose 03-15-06 06:17 PM

uppin.....voteeeeeeee i mean just vote............

Jay Rose 03-23-06 11:46 PM

vote people.....i know i won this one....so vote dammit

Jay Rose 04-18-06 08:26 PM

uppin this shit...................................some one fuckin vote dammit

Jay Rose 07-26-06 02:59 PM

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Ezy187 07-27-06 03:09 AM

This was feedback posted for Jay 286
 
bro ur rhymes is kindah shakey and dude got u wit two lines

Czar Bishop 07-27-06 03:04 PM

Voted For: Jay 286

I mean... come on. Jay..... wow.

Broadway was like rapping in a low tone like his mom was making sure he didn't cuss in the next room. No hate, I'm just sayin......................

Jay's flow was sick.
The beat was okay.
Hook was... barley above wack.

Broadway...........
Your stuff was good but Jay was just barley above you.

v- Jay 286

Black Dragon 07-27-06 05:50 PM

Voted For: Jay 286

Um shit Jay won in every aspect of the battle.......

Production - Jay won in a landslide
Flow - jay's flow wuz way better and on beat...
Delivery- there wuz none from broadway....
Punches - Jay took it wit better ones......

overall - this battle wasn't all that cuz it wuz pretty much onesided......

Vote - Jay286

Jay Rose 07-27-06 05:55 PM

word one more vote n this thing'll finally be closed

ILL GEE 07-31-06 05:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Jay 286
 
lmao.... yo.... no comments... true broadway...wow.... no comment.. jay.... you better win this

Jay Rose 07-31-06 08:31 PM

i need one more vote.....this was way before i was even in oyd n i still crushed him....some one voteeeeeeeeeeeeeee

M&rk 08-03-06 03:45 AM

Voted For: Jay 286

i aint explain in much so if u wanna delete this honest vote suck my dick..
..
jay- chorus in a battle is dumb... but u was on in ya second verse.. that after the apocalyps line won u the battle along wit ya flow there at the end
broad- i can't really judge u cuz u prolly can't sho much emotion cuz ya mic is a piece of shit and would prolly pop if u spoke up at all, but yo u can't battle for real wit some weak quality like that... and yo ya flow was pretty wack hopefully just cuz u couldn't sho much emotion.. anyway get a better mic and kill it
..
till then theres my vote... and i dont want any cry baby shit


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