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Carmelo vs maz
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Claims he dont know how to set this shit up (even tho he been here 2 years), and he didnt give me no rules so, I'ma leave it at default. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-05-06 at 03:57 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
I'll accept the battle right after you do Maz, So hurrah....
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maz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-06 04:56 PM.
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Carmelo has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-06 05:02 PM.
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aite safe man but about the 2 year thing... check my last post it was like 1 year and a bit ago man...
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LOL...Lets go Maz...
opener: view ya past and the battles or the vast majorty you've had 3 to be exact... .......Where as I got the credentials to son you like your Dad Here: Quote:
^ Lets reveal what you conceil in your little rhyme book you'd prolly make more hits throwin ya puns witta blind hook this shits TEXTbook to me, & your clearly the queer emcee I must be the ''teachers pet'' cause you aint correctin-me* now your collectin 3...losses, burn n fire you like bosses you could have a statue in your honor ............................and your presence still aint colossus the way I floss-is..somthin you can never be familiar with your production could gimme a beat.. ......................................and its what I'm killin-ya-with use your tools against you fool...then take 'em to school.. Maz loves me so much... ...........I could have him on '' all fours '' like a bar stool... I'm in pocket like pool, your scarface before the coke Hopin to be tight as pac.. ....................but only if your walkin on that thin rope Basically theres no hope, ya production is a failure to mankind One read of your rhymes and Even I knew ya out your damn-mind closer: thinkin you can contest with the best...its just not right... You could be in chuck noriss' jeans... ......................................and you still wouldnt be tight! Yup. |
Ait'e man here it is... good luck...
Yo Carmelo... amma make this quick and dispose you like a CONDOM/ my punches will leave you feelin like IRANIANS gettin BOMBED ON/ hold on.. it's STARTED.. Like aladdin and his CARPET/ I travel miles making victims like you into my TARGET/ am cold HEARTED, so PLEASE... EMCEE'S don't like ur lyrics so ur WASTING EM'/ your not ENTERTAINING EM', ur ego's bigga than newcamp STADIUM/ homosexuals u be DATING EM', i got proof but i aint NAMING EM'/ So send your shitty LYRICS boi ill eat em up like SNIKERS/ Ur body oder smells worst than Paris Hilton's NICKERS/ Ur words are small like ur DICK IS, so pay ATTENTION/ Ur just a thick shit with low COMPREHENSION/ not to forget to MENTION my lyrics fucks everything it TOUCHES/ CLUTHING ur thoughts then FUCKING your mentallity in CRUTHES/ cuz my scripture slithers slowly and attacks you LIKE A COBRA/ inner POISON keeps on GROWING ETERNALLY taking OVER/ what a JOKA!... ur tht fat bitch on da pitch hu cud never play FOOTY/ Lost a few pounds then got rich but still got BULLIED!/ you don't even know i fist fucked your mother CAMELO/ yo stay MELLOW! but don't forget to giv her my HELLO/(lol) haha my lyrics portray STARDOM but ur probs gettin a HARDON/ I'll type this 4-line leave u sayin 'i beg your PARDON'/ |
Respect Camelo...
...Uppin 4 Votes... pz |
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Your verse was aight too, homeboy. Lets get some votes on this bitch... |
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Uppin 4 votes peeps...!!
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Damn, these people really dont like to vote do they....
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YO man we need votes, eveyrone c'mon give some votes for cryin out loud!!
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Voted For: Carmelo
alright outta the past 5 battles, this was the dopest one yet. i was laughin at some of carmelos lines, most of them was dope. maz had some dope lines too, but wasnt getin/feelin the one about alladin and his carpet? dont know that got into play, but anyway your both had some different and wide vocabulary, and both rhyme schemes were better than average. even thought that text cant really flow, carmelos did while i read it out loud.. (try audio melo) but ima give this one to carmelo cause i thought he had funnier and doper lines overall.. alright peace |
Voted For: Carmelo
i voted fo u u had ok stuff but was ok better than his cus u had punches and flow and finisher otha guy u had structure ur rymes was ok but was beaten no hate rtf to my battles |
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Need more votes peeps..........
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Uppin this shit ..................................
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Voted For: Carmelo
Vote - Carmelo This one was one-sided... Flow- Carmelo. His structure was better, no stretched bars, consistent flow. Maz had some structure problems. Punches- Carmelo. His weren't played, closing punch made me laugh my ass off. Maz had some alright punches, but they just didn't hit as hard. Personals- Carmelo. Slammed his opponent hard. Maz didn't have any real personals. Multis- Maz. He had them, though they were weak. Carmelo didn't really have any worth noting, just some basic two syllable ones. Wordplay- Carmelo. Easily better wordplay, pretty much non-existent from Maz. So there you have it. Carmelo had harder punches, and some personals, with better flow. Maz was alright, but Carmelo was just a step above in just about every category. 1 |
Leave a link & I'll RTF, Man.........................
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Voted For: Carmelo
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^^ok then......
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Voted For: Carmelo
Yo Carmelo... amma make this quick and dispose you like a CONDOM/ my punches will leave you feelin like IRANIANS gettin BOMBED ON/ aight hold on.. it's STARTED.. Like aladdin and his CARPET/ I travel miles making victims like you into my TARGET/ ok but no punch am cold HEARTED, so PLEASE... EMCEE'S don't like ur lyrics so ur WASTING EM'/ your not ENTERTAINING EM', ur ego's bigga than newcamp STADIUM/ homosexuals u be DATING EM', i got proof but i aint NAMING EM'/ 3 line bars are never good, So send your shitty LYRICS boi ill eat em up like SNIKERS/ Ur body oder smells worst than Paris Hilton's NICKERS/ nah, weak Ur words are small like ur DICK IS, so pay ATTENTION/ Ur just a thick shit with low COMPREHENSION/ just flowin weak, not to forget to MENTION my lyrics fucks everything it TOUCHES/ CLUTHING ur thoughts then FUCKING your mentallity in CRUTHES/ aight cuz my scripture slithers slowly and attacks you LIKE A COBRA/ inner POISON keeps on GROWING ETERNALLY taking OVER/ nah what a JOKA!... ur tht fat bitch on da pitch hu cud never play FOOTY/ Lost a few pounds then got rich but still got BULLIED!/ nah you don't even know i fist fucked your mother CAMELO/ yo stay MELLOW! but don't forget to giv her my HELLO/(lol) i herd something similer to this from remmy martin... weak.. haha my lyrics portray STARDOM but ur probs gettin a HARDON/ I'll type this 4-line leave u sayin 'i beg your PARDON'/ weak ending danm... Lets reveal what you conceil in your little rhyme book you'd prolly make more hits throwin ya puns witta blind hook decent this shits TEXTbook to me, & your clearly the queer emcee I must be the ''teachers pet'' cause you aint correctin-me* aight now your collectin 3...losses, burn n fire you like bosses you could have a statue in your honor ............................and your presence still aint colossus aight the way I floss-is..somthin you can never be familiar with your production could gimme a beat.. ......................................and its what I'm killin-ya-with aight use your tools against you fool...then take 'em to school.. Maz loves me so much... ...........I could have him on '' all fours '' like a bar stool... ha good, I'm in pocket like pool, your scarface before the coke Hopin to be tight as pac.. ....................but only if your walkin on that thin rope nah, Basically theres no hope, ya production is a failure to mankind One read of your rhymes and Even I knew ya out your damn-mind nah, closer: thinkin you can contest with the best...its just not right... You could be in chuck noriss' jeans... ......................................and you still wouldnt be tight! aight ending, well you was more consistent with punches and was slightly more creative my vote is for you carmelo... * now P.M strobe plez carmelo * |
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