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ll J-Knight ll 03-05-06 09:20 PM

ll J-Knight ll vs TaShay
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
due date [march 6 2006 12:00]


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-08-06 at 09:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-05-06 10:46 PM

TaShay has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-06 10:46 PM.

System 03-05-06 10:57 PM

ll J-Knight ll has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-06 10:57 PM.

System 03-05-06 10:58 PM

ll J-Knight ll has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-06 10:58 PM.

TaShay 03-08-06 12:21 AM

All Shyt, Anotha ByTch trying to Put my Game To Test..//
J 'knight' only a 'PaWn' When Diz 'Queen' Throw puChes at his Chest(Chess)*..//

Look at Ya Avatar, ya Hero's a Cartoon Character..//
only time u da shyt, when you wipe ya FaCe' with used T'oliet 'Paper'..// *lmao*

Your Nothing, to me, why u waste ya Tyme Challanging me...?//im already battling Vetz, , and im a FuCkin NewBie..//

Like Money, I Stay Dirty When I Flow*....//
Shyt, this aint even a MaTcH, U might as well pull a No-Show!!! ..//

*Explantions*

Knight Pawn, Queen= Pieces in a game of Chess. Queen Tops both pieces...


Money= Money Is Dirty, when it keeps flowing aka...circulating around the world...

ll J-Knight ll 03-08-06 07:33 PM

your a bitch in metapause cuz heat flashs are the only time ur hot~
this battles a jail theme ur gettin rapped 4 every bar u drop~
and u can picture me as a monster from doom~
or the matrix, neo bendin u instead of the spoon~
shawty basically im way to intellegent~
rippin the clip through ya clit n ya crucal ligament~~
and laugh while ya facel exprssions turn diff color pigaments~
Im way to hot to catch defeat~
so i gotta trap the heat, so i vent the vocals~
tashays rap skills are half ass like that soccer commercial~ ( the soccer commercial were the guy streaks on the feild)

TaShay 03-08-06 11:09 PM

uppin for Votes... People please Don't Keep Me Waiting...


Good LuCk.....

*Antic* 03-09-06 02:28 PM

Voted For: TaShay

Vote- TaShay

Weak battle, really.

Flow- Tie. Nothing impressive or stand out to put one above the other.

Punches- TaShay. They hit harder, though both catz had too much self-glorification shit in their drops. Stop talking about yourselves and just throw punches.

Personals- TaShay. She had the only personal in the whole battle in her first bar. Nice shit. J-Knight had the typical disses used against a femcee, nothing new.

Multis- Tie. Weak.

Wordplay- TaShay. The only wordplay happened in her first bar. No wordplay from J Knight.

Weak battle, workin' on not mentioning yourselves in your drops, it just wastes bars that could have punches in them instead.

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TaShay 03-09-06 05:12 PM

ugh........ok....next battle itz on.......if one mo person say im weak lol imma explode beyond preportion.........shyt......thanks for the critique though....and vote...


Up diz IsH.

Dirty Nigga 03-09-06 05:42 PM

This was feedback posted for ll J-Knight ll
 
Just peepin your verse homeboy...and the polls...

good luck to y'all...

B. Magik 03-10-06 03:07 PM

This was feedback posted for TaShay
 
waaaaaaaaack.......

TaShay 03-11-06 11:33 AM

okay........u wasted time to type that....uz a fuCkin IDioit......newayz...Up..

B. Magik 03-11-06 02:21 PM

Ahahaha. I'll own you. Shut your mouth.

TaShay 03-12-06 08:51 AM

Own me then bytch....actions speak louder than words... up!

TaShay 03-12-06 06:46 PM

up///up....yp...and away with this damn battle....get it closed...favor will be returned

Confucius 03-12-06 06:54 PM

This was feedback posted for TaShay
 
pollz.............................................

TaShay 03-13-06 05:16 PM

up...up..up..upp..and away,, why u lazy fuckz wont vote...shyt...i na voted on da whole damn boards..

TaShay 03-14-06 07:49 PM

Up.. Diz Shyt mane.... ...... ....

Payn 03-15-06 12:24 PM

Voted For: TaShay

J-Knight

Felt ur verse wuz pretty weak. Ur flow wuz nothing special. Had some decent shit. Like.. tayshay's rap skills & half ass like soccer commercials is hot it'z was good. Some lines were pretty dumb. Like the one you used as an opener. I see it was an attempted menstrual play...but it didn't work much. OVerall it was ok..but 2 say tha least.

Tayshay

Ok...your flow, was good. Ya lines seemed 2 come across betta to me den Knight's. U had plenty of decent lines in diz 1..overall i liked it all. Mainly cause u were tha only 1 to captialize witout goin 10 lines.

So..I got to give it Tayshay.

vote-Tayshay

vinceness_deala 03-15-06 02:43 PM

This was feedback posted for TaShay
 
chi town chi town yea its my city/ i'm a shit starter call me the internet 50/
tasha u heard chris brown run it, stop flowin u shoulda been on malibu's most wanted

ll J-Knight ll 03-15-06 06:55 PM

wow ya wack nigga get the fuck out the fourm...............

Blackmage 03-16-06 01:05 AM

Voted For: TaShay

This is how the battle went for me...

All Shyt, Anotha ByTch trying to Put my Game To Test..//
J 'knight' only a 'PaWn' When Diz 'Queen' Throw puChes at his Chest

vs.

your a bitch in metapause cuz heat flashs are the only time ur hot~
this battles a jail theme ur gettin rapped 4 every bar u drop~


Really i'd have to go with Ta Shay on this one because hers' was overall nicer, only one thing caught my eye in j knight's and that was metapause.

v/Tashay

yea...

Payn 03-16-06 12:43 PM

oh yeah tayshay rtf in my battle here

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TaShay 03-17-06 05:23 PM

up/./...up/.....up.....and away.. wiT this shyt

Nick Knack 03-18-06 09:44 AM

Voted For: ll J-Knight ll

tashay:
your really didnt have any outstandin shit. no creative punchez, and the few punchez you really had werent that good. work on ya shit.

jk:
i predicted about 3 of your punchez, the only line that was even close to original waz the last line. work on makin more creative punchez, but u had them so u get the vote.

v- jk

TaShay 03-19-06 09:42 AM

up..up...upp...up......and away.....finish IT.....(LMAO...MORTAL COMBAT VOICE)

K-9 03-23-06 03:03 PM

Voted For: TaShay

I'll give dis one to TaShay simply cause she had a good flow wit nice punches that hit the spot J-Knights verse was aight I guess but some of his rhymes was forced, and some of his shit didn't even make no kinda sense so I say TaShay
Breakdown:
TaShay Best line:
All Shyt Anotha bithch tryna put my game to test...
J'Knight' only a Pawn when this queen throws punches at his chess...

JKnight You had some good shit but I'd say you need to be more consistant wit yo shit and learn some shit don't go together and remember we have to read this shit you aen't flowin it to us
Bestline:
Your a bitch in metapause heatflashes the only time you hot...
This battles a jail theme you get (raped) for every bar you drop....
Good job bof a yall n keep it up
Oh Yeah return the fav

TaShay 03-26-06 08:08 PM

can i please get this shyt closed asap....thanks!

Wordz AhGod 04-07-06 02:57 PM

Voted For: ll J-Knight ll

this was an ok battle. 2 newbies going at so it was str8. j knight - liked ur verse cuz you had better punches n flow. but you need to be more creative then to just talk about her female qualities. u should work on your oppenners and closers too. ur verse gets a 5.5/10

Tashay...I liked your verse a bit too. ur flow was bit off. ur personal was good but you should put a lil more work into your punches. try to make each one of em count...they usually are the difference between winning and losing a battle.ur verse gets 4/10

could you please click on any one of the battles on my sig and drop an honest vote. thanx

LaTiNKiTTeN 04-16-06 05:37 PM

Voted For: ll J-Knight ll

IP:


your a bitch in metapause cuz heat flashs are the only time ur hot~
this battles a jail theme ur gettin rapped 4 every bar u drop~
EHH OK

and u can picture me as a monster from doom~
or the matrix, neo bendin u instead of the spoon~
WACK

shawty basically im way to intellegent~
..SO INTELLIGENT THAT U COULDNT EVEN SPELL IT RIGHT,OR THE WORD BEFORE IT LOL
rippin the clip through ya clit n ya crucal ligament~~
GAY

and laugh while ya facel exprssions turn diff color pigaments~
I BELIEVE THE WORD IS PIGMENT NOT PIGAMENT LOL@COMIN UP WITH NEW WORDS TO RHYME WITH LIGAMENT

Im way to hot to catch defeat~
so i gotta trap the heat, so i vent the vocals~
tashays rap skills are half ass like that soccer commercial~ ( the soccer commercial were the guy streaks on the feild)
WACK





All Shyt, Anotha ByTch trying to Put my Game To Test..//
J 'knight' only a 'PaWn' When Diz 'Queen' Throw puChes at his Chest(Chess)*..//
WEAK WORDPLAY

Look at Ya Avatar, ya Hero's a Cartoon Character..//
only time u da shyt, when you wipe ya FaCe' with used T'oliet 'Paper'..// *lmao*
WAAACK

Your Nothing, to me, why u waste ya Tyme Challanging me...?//im already battling Vetz, , and im a FuCkin NewBie..//
LAME

Like Money, I Stay Dirty When I Flow*....//
Shyt, this aint even a MaTcH, U might as well pull a No-Show!!! ..//
WEAK



GOD BOTH VERSES SUCKED ASS.....I REALLY WOULD PREFER TO JUST SAY ITS A TIE BUT IF I HAVE TO PICK I GUESS I'LL GO WITH THE FIRST GUY CUZ OF HIS FIRST BAR....NOT THAT IT WAS GOOD BUT IT WAS PROBABLY THE ONLY THING IN THIS BATTLE THAT I'D EVEN CLASSIFY A PUNCH

VOTE J KNIGHT

-Substance- 04-19-06 01:21 PM

Voted For: TaShay

this was an okay battle from knight's side, but def a nice battle coming from tashay. i remeber when we battled........good ish. you had a nice battle verse. some good punhces. lay off the // and * shit, it's anoying, it's a verse, not a internet decoration.........


vote/tashay


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