~Ace~ vs Young Blaze
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

WHO EVER LOSES LEAVE RV FOR GOOD......~1~


DON'T DUCK DIS SHIT EITHER

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-09-06 at 12:49 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

~Ace~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-06 02:47 PM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-06 08:59 PM.

Lmao...at this.....Peace son


Wat a fag....kid dances wit men..how u tryin to..act hard
when more dudes shuffle wit the ace....than cheatin in cards
Dude ur wack...an thats a fact..dont play dumb
I hit ace wit such a uppercutt he fell back,
.............to the deck of cards he came from
kids Punchs are played...ur gay an wack...its a shame
He stays wit more cum lines...than wats around his name
Your raps used for toilet paper..i kno ur a noob jus tell us
i dropped a flush on ace so many times,
.......worldseries poker players were jealous
You'll never get picked up...at least i ride wit a crew
Truth is even the grafix heads in e-style would beat you
Since ur free i got...a new crew comin..u'll have a open place
It's called a crushin blow...
........droppin his nose from his face

Upppinnn..........................................

Yo i cant even see ur shit wtf is up wit dis computer.....UPPIN anyways

Uppin dis shit lets get some votes up in dis shit.....

..............uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp p

This was feedback posted for ~Ace~
 

Since da limit is 500 imma just drop feed..


Young Blaze...ya StruCture was Horrible....I don't know what the hell was what... at the beginning ur shyt aint rhyme...so from my point of view ya shyt was horrible...Ya Personals suCked... and ya Closer...was just stupid....up ya game, do some cyphers, then step back on the front lines, right now u need to be training..

Ace:

ur shyt, was simple as hell...but it was better than blaze, chop ur shyt up, create multis, and you'll be decent... this right here

"I'll have dis dude silent after dis like i took his mouth"

creative, but boring...lame...

but overall ya verse, had more structure, and rhythm,

keep it up

GooD LUcK..

^^^^Thanks uppin dis shit lets get some votes pplz

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

If I Had Enough Post Id Vote Young Blaze
Cuz Overall He Had A Better Verse

^^^^WACK uppin dis shit where is tha votes at up in dis bitch...

Uppin U Fuckin Crack Heads........................

^^^Lmaooooo at this wat a wweaakk vote....my structure was bad u dont even have structure.....an my personals suck lol....get out of here an take ur 03' style of text wit u

HAHA u jus mad i whoop dat ass kid.........UPPIN PLZ

upppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Lmaoooo........................................... ..........

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

E-style ...Hoes! :shoot:

HAHA yall wack dawg i know u betta den dat leave dem wack motha fuckaz cuzz....UPPIN

You dont know me at all ''cuzz''


and I know that Blaze done owned you in this motherfucker, its E-style hoe, ride or get rode on.....

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

tite ass verse my nigga i see you merkin em real eazy its nuttin huh lol

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

Yo Young Blaze Gets Diz Fo Real Hiz Verse Had Those Hot AzZ Punchez Dat Be Scare'n Niggaz Fo Lyfe

Yo I Culdnt Vote Cuz Of Dat 500 Post Bullshit My Bad Whoodie

Upppppiiinnn........eazy.......................... .

Voted For: ~Ace~

ight here's my break-down on diz battle:

Young Blaze

Felt ur verse wuz pretty weak. Ur flow wuz nothing special. Had some decent shit. Like..when more dudes shuffle wit the ace....than cheatin in cards was good. Sum lines were pretty dumb. Like tha 1 u used as an closer. I see it was an attempted postion play...but it didn't work much. OVerall it was ok..2 say tha least.

Ace

Ok...your flow, was good. Ya lines seemed 2 come across betta 2 me den Blaze's. U had plenty of decent lines in diz 1..overall i liked it all. Mainly cause u were tha only 1 to captialize with less played lines. So tha wordplay, creativity, meta's, multies & overall betta verse goes 2 u.

So..I got to give it Ace.

vote- Ace

oh yeah ace rtf in my battle here
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=224402

iight will do cuzz thanks for tha vote and stay up.....UPPIN DIS SHIT =

Lmaoooooo....wat the fuck is wit these noob's.....dont kno shit ur verse suck dude....everthing u had was played

ok iight i might be gettin noob votes but at least im gettin votes all u gettin is crew members in here tellin u dat u won.....uh no shit there goin to say dat there in ya crew homie and tha otha 2 r dick ridin noob so jus sit back and be OWNED!.....uppin dis shit

Lmao......"be owned".....ur shit is wack.....................

Yo I Dont Have 500 Posts To Return Da Vote Mayn Drop A Diffrent Link Fo Me

^^^HAHA there is ur boy blaze tha one u voted for in dat battle and u told him to return tha favor or u was goin to have ur vote removed......HAHAHAHA wut a bitch got to threatin somebody jus to get somebody to vote for ur broke down ass......UPPIN DIS DUDE IS FAKE

Yea dats wuts up next time u battle somebody make sure there a noob becuzz u need to elevate......UPPIN DIS SHIT

Voted For: Young Blaze

i voted for u cus u had better rymes and flow and punches

ace ur lines were ok , u had structure but u didnt have the rest it was a ok battle boys

no hate rtf to all of my battles

yo iight thanks for tha vote homie.......uppin dis shit, and u really know i won tho haha

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

ace- not sure why the fuck you said you would do this battle cuz you threw almost no real punchez just sayin this is this and shit. you need to elevate ya game cuz right now you dont even have good conceptz.

young- your first bar won this for you. the only punch i saw after readin ace's, so you win. only thing is work on structure from what i can see. i read a little bit more, but you are solid.

v- young

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 

koo battle, aint been herr 4 a min, koo min, juss checkin out battles

Yo uppin dis shit dont be sleepin i want dis battle to hurry up and be done

Voted For: Young Blaze

shit this was a one sided battle

Flow (Structure):
........ The flow was tied on both, nothing interesting
Punchlines (Hits):
......... Young Blaze Had more and better punchlines, some personals which halla my vote for him
Wordplay (vocab):
........... no elevated vocab but YB played yp some words in his punchlines

YB has the vote