I Am God
 

this stuff is ill man...

i dont even know how to leave feed on it....honestly..

i always thought you were probably in the top 1-3 topical writers on the whole site...keep dropping...you never fail to impress...good work

Dam !!! This is the best verse I have read this year fams !!!

The opener was nice,... liked the flow nice inners !!

The Middle was great, kept the same flow and rhyming, really deep emotions
Vision,..

Fav barz,...
over indulgent with insults, gluttonous verbs strike..
and Lust can look like love if you wrap your words right..
Use my ability to boast of your petty accomplishments..
you still envy, compared to him, you really havn't accomplished shit..


And then the close,.. flowed well didn't lose anything,.. had dope vocab
emotions was deep and I like this bar,..

Hieroglyphics would better serve you, finding the worst ways to word it..
Wars and death become of me, the son of man's the son of me..
An hours absurd, to explain the beauty in a flowers facade..
The power of words, is also known to me as, the Power of God..

Deep !!! really like this verse fams stay up and keep writing.

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word i got you...give me a few minutes

Upin this for my fam I don't understand why it hasn't got any feed....
It's a dope verse.

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Cought a cold from this one from it being sick as hell. I like what you put on it. Everything was on point with it. 9/10. Keep up the good work.

uppin..........

Illy from philly...
Okay.. Oregon then...
Real dope.... a bit rusty though... to tell the truth...

Man, I thought this was ill as hell.

I'm not very good at topicals so my words don't hold very much weight in this type of shit, but the imagery and emotion merked it. I don't read too many topicals, but I still think that the way everything is written and put together is original as hell. Keep posting shit, for real. This was dope.

uppin this shit right here....are you SERIOUSLY not reading this?

This was pretty nice man. Nice flow and strong content, didn't really feel to heartfelt, largely in part to the lack of a real defined storyline. But you had some very brilliant lines, this in in particular was my favorite:

'a tear sheds for every predicate dressed in weaponry..'

Man, that was just insane to me, I loved that alot. Ya, everything was pretty on point, the lack of storyline just kind of dissapointed me. But this wasn't really one of "thoooose" pieces so, for what it was it was pretty flawless man. Gald to see you back and writing again.

thanks a lot for the feed man...yeah, i didn't really go with the story line on here.....that seems to be what I'm known for, and i'm sort of trying to create a more diverse identity i guess...but thanks again for reading for the feed...im glad you enjoyed it

Ya, if you want to branch off the title of "Storyteller" try just getting into real basic storylines but instead of working on sequentials, write in extreme detail. And I'd apreciate it if you could check out my Om: "When the Artist Cries"

uppin this shit for people....god damn...if you want feedback..leave feedback for me...i'll rtf if you link me

upping....fuckin tards...read it....or die..............

Em yea I said Illy from oregon.
But yea its dope. i'ma feed on your latest one Political Criminal.

^^ HA GOT YOU... NOW I KNOW YOUR ALIAS.... lol...

ASIDE FROM THAT...

YO R-evolution...
I have 1 Question PLEZ ANSWER THIS...

WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU BE DOING OR DRINKING OR LISTENING TO OR WATCHING WHEN YOU WRITE YOU OPEN MIC??

yo this shit was fucking retarted fam i gotta give this up to you DANM...
10 outta 10 * YOU HAPPY NOW I GAVE U WHAT U DESERVE *
i didnt think you was that sick with open mic i knew uw as good but danm u def killed this shit right here...

flow good...
concept sick...
vocab tight...

A WELL DESERVE PIECE OF THE MONTH... * IF THEY EVER HAD ONE*

Hit Me Up For A Collabo 4-real...

thanks for the love, from both of you

and ransum..this is just scratching the surface...i told you, i don't need to lie about my talent...it speaks for me....and i don't do anything special, this is just what I do....i'd be down to collab..just let me know.

and they used to have OM of the month...and year...won both of those, won the month a few times...and was nominated almost every time..i'm the only person in the HOF who is in their for writing...and writing alone..everyone else is known for being pretty good, and also helping out the site a lot...me..just being really good.

you def made me a believer in your open mic's....

but battles hmmmmmmmmm.....

hahaha....

im not gonna rain on your party live nigga....

hmmmm Revolution.....ever been on GEF ???....just wondering

o yeah and EXACTLY WHAT RANSUM SAID SICK ASS SHIT....on that "intellegent" level....foreal .....~1~

you can't.

Battles, you havn't seen me even come close to try.

open mics...i try.

I am better at battling.

never even heard of it.


thanks for the props though.

deep....

flow was good and consitent, easy to catch but in a piece which requires alot of thought it wouldnt matter cuz after evry line ud have to think of its relation to the overall topic anyway

vocab was great and the usage applied was on point......


my past haunts my beginning, and the rest of me..
my past fucked my present, and gave birth to my destiny..
the evil once manifested, i request it to rest in peace..
obsessed hatred began attested, now i'm pressed to weep..
a tear sheds for every predicate dressed in weaponry..
broken hearts and jaws, fists and tongues posessed with me..
(i get all of this here......and its tight how u know how the way God really feels when shyt goes down, u expressed his emotions thru words.......as if they were ur own, deep.....i like the last line cuz ur basically sayin that people say his name in vain...nice)
every language is vital to my existance, I strike a chord..
Emotions expressed, no one ever heard this type before..
(lmao def feelin)

I'm all powerfull, but I can't seem to try and stipulate..
rules where you can't manipulate to avoid all the shit you hate..
(soooo true)

I shine light on a situation, and i've rained on your parade..
Flash Floods of baths of blood because i'm chained to your decay..
(illness......good thought, u must of been high thinkin of this part cuz its true)

and Lust can look like love if you wrap your words right..
(heh amen)

Use my ability to boast of your petty accomplishments..
you still envy, compared to him, you really havn't accomplished shit..
(good example relatin to the definition of envy and the result)

Wars and death become of me, the son of man's the son of me..
(hehe i like this one too)

The power of words, is also known to me as, the Power of God..
(as this is the summary.......it basically a message to all those spittin.....that words expressed are words from God.....and man in a way should be careful at times on how the use it.....its like a delegation of authority in a sense.....*shrugs* means alot to the point where its scary but in the end ur sayin ur God in summary due to this last line......and hell thats all u really needed, the rest supported it)

I wanna battle you In Topical Some time but not in here the Voting is slow and all the vets are gone.

i was feeling it ,you right with emotion like me
give me feed on mines gods gift 2 da world - wiley d