Don't Say My Name
 

my computer crashed and i lost a lot of my raps....so this track basically came from scratch but whatcha gonna do....gettin back to work on my mixtape and i think this song has potential to be on it....just lookin for some GOOD feed....if i need to re record it just let me know or if i need to change anything with it just let me know...thanks in advance....

www.soundclick.com/eastsyde

holla if you wanna collab




links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684615

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684621

uppin this shit

still uppin....

wake up and leave me some feed....please

still no feed....damn shame

Beat is sick as hell, send it to me.

Flow is rushed in a few spots, emotion is bad, lyrics are decent, it has potential, but you need to fix up ya flow. Did you make the hook?

what's wrong with the flow....i get a lot of "hate" on the flow and i don't know why...and no i stole the beat and the hook was on it...thanks for the feed

still be uppin....

can't really do too much about my voice....lol....it's all good though thanks for the feed

alright like rev. said beat is sick its a em beat...your lyrics are cool.....your flow is decent...you sound like u been rappin maybe 2 months right? this dont too bad for just starting keep goin

lol naw actually i've been rappin for like 3 years technically but i've been grindin for about a year now....i'm gettin the hang of it....rappin aint easy...thanks for the feed uppin

bumpin this shit

Listenin, this that eminem beat with nate dogg right? i duno i think so...flow is str8 fam..quality is a let down cant knock u on it...delivery is pretty nice, lyrics are kool=, nice presence..u need to dynamic process this..wait this another nate dogg song hook mixed is nice...pretty str8 joint famlay

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224779

can u rtf

I don't like beats like this. They make my flow choppy. But, you handled it. not bad there

Ilike there delivery of the hook


Flow could be a tad smoother, but it fits the beat

not a bad track


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if you gonna spit to a beat spit origanly and dont try to creat images of other rapers cause you'll always be over shadowed by the original so i dont like it

I like the beat, however the vocals are too high in volume dawg. The lyrics are fine, but the flow sounds choppy in parts. The quality is aight just turn the vocals and it will be tite.

Try working more on the flow bro!

pz
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...836#post2695836

thanks for the feed....i'm still lookin around for an OG beat....if anyone got some beats i can use then holla at me...uppin this