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yea..i only went to T....don't like it...finish it..damn...gota b BOREDDDD to do this shit man http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684964 Ecko http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684983 chief |
holy sheeeeppp shit
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holy sheeeeppp shit
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Honestly kids really need to listen up to this track cuz its ill as hell ...the concept was dope and the attemp was even better
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thx man...good looks..i proly jus drop wayy to many trx at once
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heard this in production...was impressed by it...def. worth a peep
You decided to literally use all words with a certain letter...I wouldn't have minded hearing a few "a"s and "thes" in there to balance it out though...as it stands, you drop lots of fragments and single words...I could stand for a united theme good creative drop though... Makes me wanna attempt it 1 |
deffinately a tight track, shoulda gon to Z but that woulda made ti dope beyond reasoning
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hmmm i think that i heard u flow this concept in a yahoo cyph one time w/ oyd n shit. yea ive heard this concept alot so im not givin u no points on originality, that blackalicious alphabet arobics is tha illest tho... lol back to tha point, this track.... flow is aight, i dunno if this was tha best beat for it, seems like ur tryin to fit ur bars in real fast. def would sound better without all tha adlibs, or just turn them down, cuz it sounds fresh wen theres no adlibs, but then wen they come in it half annoys me. shit is aight tho.. it just seems like ur sayin a bunch of words tho instead of tryin to m ake a story or sence ya know. but that mite b tha point, its pretty tite at that jokker part lol... yea its def pickin up, the l's were nyce... m's aight.... kinda fall a lil to me at the end of the m's and into tha n's damn this shit is long lol watchu do like 6 bars for each letter? sumtimes ur rime scheme reminds me of rugged man lol but trust thats a compliment. w/ sum work this shit could b tite... y u stop at t tho? u couldnt think past that.. seems like u just gave up at the end man.. i dunno this was aight to me, nothin really wowed me tho. but with sum tweaking it could b real nice just drop those adlibs or fix em or sumn
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thx man....actualy i worte this a while back n diddnt realy have time to finish it while i was recording............
but thx ppl 1ne |
personally i think this concept is played...i've seen too many people try to do it or do it poorly...this was a decent track coulda been done better but let's face it you're no papoose who did the shit perfect...i'ma give it a 7/10...you did a decent job don't get me wrong
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yea..........like i said i wrote this a while back..after pap but b4 most others...and jus seen someone do it text so decided to record mine...
but thx |
lsitenin....
....damn this would be pretty hard to do, so rpopz for attempting it....i agree, you would have to be bored to do it, lol....flow is decent...of course the lyrics are nice, their in alphabetical order! lol.....but yea diope drop man, keep it up |
thxxxxxxxxxxxxx ppl
and rey...i cant listen to shit till i get my net at home up [new appartment] but i'll hit that up wen i can |
this is a pretty terrible attempt at an already played subject, seriously flow is terrible, voice isn't interesting, its just hard to listen to, i turned it off...brutal
BRUTAL reverb makes me throw up on this too |
not too thrilled with the topic... it's been done a few times... kool attempt and i can see you were bored with it... i'd get bored too... shyt's long as hell...lol.... like the beat.... tried to decypher some of what you were saying... hard to keep up... not sure if most made sense to me or not.... glad it's an OLD track...lol... ya more recent shyt is waaaayyyy better.. werd.... but you fam and i supports a bruh, no matter what, nah mean?.... OYD, Stand The Fugg Up (STFU)...lmao *wow... i can already feel how i stole the thunder from the whole STFU shyt...ctfu*
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^^ thx man....
and to jpol....lol....jus lol..... give it up man.....ur not good at ANYTHING...so kindly stfu and btw..was no reverb |
haha either their was reverb or you're stuck in an echo chamber, but you most likely don't know what that means...and thanks for the compliment i would never want a fan as dumb as you. I've been doing shows for two years now, paying shows bitch...so don't talk to me peon boy
ps keep the internet fame dream alive, and keep rocking your e-crew 'thug' period. |
doing shows for 2 years ... and getting paid?!!! for that lost emcee shyt?!!! playing in mom and pop stores? or clubs or whatever the fuck ya myspace says? ... my son spit the alphabets better than you spit that shyt... c'mon man... ya skill is subpar at best and i doubt if you could beat anyone in OYD... who'd you battle to get ya wins?...lmao... omma be real with you for a minute... YOU ARE A TRASHGUTTA EMCEE.... and that's real.... be out clownboy
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Lol @ "I only went to T"
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ha, damn i remember when i used to do this shit for practice....that was back in 00' - 01.....pretty good...i agree wiht q, fillers would make it less choppy....i didnt hear the papoose one....oh well....not bad...this is only the brinks of bordem....wait till you get to the point...where you do this shit, and try it with multi's and have a subject given to you by anyone...great track tho....yea i can see with how much you drop, that you would get bored alot...good shit tho...keep it up
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^^ thx man
and poll man.....im not gona agrue 2 pages about some shit man....you=trash kiddo..and their was no reverb man....i used reverb like twice in my life...and this wasent ona the times...if u got ANYTHING else to say,RECORD it and make a DISS track u homothug PUT UP OR SHUT UP.....know your role man....u was GARBAGE wen u left and STILL are,jus came back w a big ass ego man.....make a track or stfu .... |
Lol @ "I only went to T"
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