vinceness_deala vs TaShay
 

Battle Rules:

6 -16 linez max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No RyDing.



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-12-06 at 10:26 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

TaShay has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-06 09:57 AM.

vinceness_deala has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-06 10:01 AM.

santana said he's crack, but me i'm coke
i get deeper in ya head than that dick in ur throat
i read ur rhymes and its as huff as that green that u smoke
i'm on the grind shorty and u know i can't be broke
u shoula known from the start
u knew i was gonna hurt ur heart
but i ain't gonna say 2 much so do what u do
the games over already u lost, u got screwed
it was already set up for me to win
if u want me 2 i'll chop and screw u again

man i had to turn my back on her verse, cuz i was reading it and her shit couldn't get worse
i'm the gift and the curse, so u should fuck with me.
if not u can suck my D......I........C
K's is what i spray all day
yo shit is outta date, i'll knock ya head off ya shoulders and send it in a milk crate
fuck wit me, shorty u must be crazy baby
my rhymes is on crack, and ur shit is lazy baby
u ain't know, u fuckin wit a 80's baby, i'm hot and i ain't saw u on the board lately, don't cry
cuz u ain't gonna see not tear in my eyes

*This has to be a Joke* ha..

*sTEPZ TO DIZ HERB*
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Your LyRiCs are all~a~game even if ya verse was set~a~flame, U Still coudln't HeAt~~TaShay..//

ConFront ya ass with hard~hitting~FiSt, u only slapping me like uz really~a~BitCh, throw LoW 'blows' till u get ovar~ian~cyst..//*Tumor in the Ovary*

U got Nothin~to~Throw, Like bad~hoax, I laugh because yall whole verse is simply~a~joke..//

U JuSt Givin braggin~RiGhtz, like FaKe VirGinz, U only ACtin~TiGht, I Won This BaTtle, BYE~BYE....

*dROPZ MIC*
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This was feedback posted for TaShay
 

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Voted For: TaShay

lol this is a simple battle 2 vote tashay obviuslly won comin wit harder punches metaphors better flow better every thing vinceness_deala had all nursery rhymes

tashay takes it eazily

thankx.....for the vote....more feed and votes please..

its a game to me, but u still got played/ u want me to get serious i got metaphors 4 days/ i'm hotter than ur pussy/ u keep talk shit i got a 9 that'll leave ya brain gushin/ i'll eat u up, piss and shit you out/ if i catch u riding thru tha hood like u got clout, i'll send u meditatin in the sky on one of them clouds/ don't piss me of, cuz i'm like pms/ i'll have a double barrel in yo pussy unda ya dress/ i don't think u comin back from that/ u betta go sing in a choir b4 u get clapped back.........................

Excuse my back, she tryin to be in a rap race but ain't ran not 1 damn lap. u can't be serious

blah......Vote Up...and get this ish closed....i will return tha damn favor..

This was feedback posted for TaShay
 

pollz again checkinu out for the hwc tryout................

lets get it goin, put ya votes on line so i could eat somebody else up. i know ya'll don't like me and want me gone. shit if i wasn't me i would hate on me 2. i'm gonna stay tha shit til somebody put me in tha pot. holla

Voted For: TaShay

man i had to turn my back on her verse, cuz i was reading it and her shit couldn't get worse
i'm the gift and the curse, so u should fuck with me.
if not u can suck my D......I........C
K's is what i spray all day
yo shit is outta date, i'll knock ya head off ya shoulders and send it in a milk crate
fuck wit me, shorty u must be crazy baby
my rhymes is on crack, and ur shit is lazy baby
u ain't know, u fuckin wit a 80's baby, i'm hot and i ain't saw u on the board lately, don't cry
cuz u ain't gonna see not tear in my eyes

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Ya whole set up was weak....

punch game is non existant, and you didnt use one dope personal. you got alot of work to do, yo...


Your LyRiCs are all~a~game even if ya verse was set~a~flame, U Still coudln't HeAt~~TaShay..//

ConFront ya ass with hard~hitting~FiSt, u only slapping me like uz really~a~BitCh, throw LoW 'blows' till u get ovar~ian~cyst..//*Tumor in the Ovary*

U got Nothin~to~Throw, Like bad~hoax, I laugh because yall whole verse is simply~a~joke..//

U JuSt Givin braggin~RiGhtz, like FaKe VirGinz, U only ACtin~TiGht, I Won This BaTtle, BYE~BYE....

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I aint feelin your structure, seperatin bars like that...looks ugly to me...

you had some aight rhymes tho, wordplay is far better than this deala dude lol

just need to land that final punch of the bar a little better and your good to go

vote-shay.

rtf on my battl wit Antic, yo.

y'all stay up too...Peace.

carmelo i ain't gotta rap i got cash, so nigga like it or not u can blow it out ya ass/

blah....up dis shyt....man.... i just voted on like 5 battles..

omg.......up diz shyt..damn.....



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sorry tashay but this is the end/ we coulda been friends/ but now i gotta rob u for ends
you thought i was gonna jump off the dock cuz i lost/ hell naw i'm gonna open ur legs on tha block so u can get tossed
and u leave u runnin...........like game/ i done read all ya post and they all sound the same
i would give u a punchline/ but it would be a crime/ u'd be depressed in the crib snortin up lines
just know i gotcha u gonna cry when we battle next time

lmao...up dis shyt mane... vote the hell up please.

Voted For: TaShay

Your LyRiCs are all~a~game even if ya verse was set~a~flame, U Still coudln't HeAt~~TaShay..//
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U JuSt Givin braggin~RiGhtz, like FaKe VirGinz, U only ACtin~TiGht, I Won This BaTtle, BYE~BYE....

vs.

Nothing

Tashay's best bars were rather played to me but still it was the best part of the battle...

v/TaShay

Voted For: TaShay

done deal.... vince...ya shyt was trash and ya got done in by a female who just started rappin....lmao .... best line in the whole battle:

U JuSt Givin braggin~RiGhtz, like FaKe VirGinz, U only ACtin~TiGht, I Won This BaTtle, BYE~BYE....

*dROPZ MIC*

damn homie... she dropped da mic on you.... in a text battle!!!!!!!!! buaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! *dies*

seriously... vince, ya need a lot of work.... punches, set-up, wordplay, multies, rhyme style...the works man... and it's not that tashay is a great rapper cuz she's not..... she just did enough to outshine you and i give her props for that... for a newb she's actually tryna battle anybody who's willing to throw words... you may be doing the same... i don't know... but if she keeps up at this pace you won't even be a thought the next time y'all battle each other... step ya game up big man and keep writing...you can only get better

you woulda outshined HER with this drop.... but..... see above

Voted For: TaShay

vinceness_deala

Felt ur verse wuz pretty weak. Ur flow wuz nothin special. Had sum played shit. Like..if not u can succ my d-i-c shit is basically played out nowadays. Sum lines were pretty dumb. Like tha man i'ma turn my bacc u used as an opener. I see it wasn't a good wordplay especially wit tha gift & curse right afta it...but it didn't work much. Diz Line 'i'll knock ya head off ya shoulders and send it in a milk crate' was prolly tha only decent line..but even that wuz worded poorly.

Tayshay

Ok...ya flow, was way betta den deala's. Ur opener didn't rhyme 2. Sum of ur lines just seemed stupid 2 me. Only decent verses were 2, & 4..wit tha throwin low blows & fake virgins, actin tight shit. Mainly cuz dey were tha only 1s to make some sense.

So..I got to give it Tayshay.

vote-Tayshay

oh yea rtf in my battle http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=224402