Payn vs King
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-14-06 at 03:41 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

Payn has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-06 11:03 PM.

here's my official checc-in ...fucc dat long time fo 10-15 lines

King has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-06 12:05 AM.

listen u should do da math u aint avoidin' da wrath
you winnin? ha dis clown doin his job cuz he makin me laugh

unh you a no-go considered a has been
add an ed to ya name you bout to be past tensed

bitch you get slaughtered i aint takin it sof
you *suck in dis round kinna like i put da gauge in ya mouth

unh i'm jus breakin you off
fuk courtin ima ignore it an jus start takin you out

i'm fakin you out man you a disgrace in ya house
you aint raw even ya dog replacin you now

an da worst part about is i'm playin around
but ima treat you like a slut and start layin u down

i'm sprayin dese rounds try to dodge it u sure ta get shot
movin ya lips you a pussy who be talkin alot

but when it come to da clappin you stik wit da rappin
cuz i'll strike bak like jason in manhattan

jus sumthin simple...............i'm tired as fuk..................good enuff ta win

*suck in dis round kinna like i put da gauge in ya mouth
*=suckin dis round,suck in dis round, cmon now

Voted For: Payn

dis waz weak & payn waz mo creative but his verse culd of been directed @ abyway, but he still getz mah vote fo real

dat'z wazzup 1-0 my way word-up ....still uppin 4 more votes

don't sleep on diz battle

you trippin my verse was hella raw fo sumthin quik..............hell ill murda u weak ass dude

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Voted For: Payn

this was easyiley oon by payn all around better verse neither rapper come wit a special flow or nething but payn's punchlines hit much harder n i was into his rap king shit was kinda borin like readin a assignment my teache give me 4 english class but stay up

my vote ~~~~> payn

right ...right i will eazily take tha win cuz i merk yungin wit out tryin hard...lol

uppin 4 more votes.....

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Voted For: Payn

yo you ripped that kid soemthing crazy ....but you talked about a bunch of fake shit.....you dont tuck straps..........but sditll you verse was hella harder than his.......you had word play, metaphores and multies btuy oru verse didnt flow too good....othetr than that you ripped it

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Voted For: Payn

Hey Yo Da Nucca Payn Got Diz EZ

Hiz Vrse Wuz Dat Cracc, Da Punz Wuz On Point & Mettaz Wuz Nyce 2, U Killed It Farilly Silly.

King Yo Verse Wuz Coo, Jus Not Enuff Hard Hitting Punchez 2 Contest Wit Da Nucca Payn

Payn Getz Da Win Fo A Mo Entertaining Verse

word up dawg i appreciate dat vote ...much luv 2 ya

uppin 4 tha last & final vote 2 end a fake king's reign & knocc him off his throne

you can neva do sat.......dese dickridas can vote for you but ill take all them out.................dis was a practice round nigga............. i even said dat afta da rap.......................you aint seen king yet wut you saw was me at 11 sumthin at night tryin to hurry up and post some shit so i wouldn't be d/qed

This was feedback posted for King
 

BOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU........you suck kid........Payn got this hands down

fa sho mayne u should have voted & ended diz nightmare 4 a lil king

haha...LOL still uppin 4 diz last vote c'mon

bump ...bump still uppin 4 dat last vote c'mon y'all don't sleep on diz battle so i can get it closed up

Voted For: Payn

Dez Bars u bout 2 Come Wit I've prolly SEEN A MILLION TIMES..
..I Consider Yo Raps "Out Of Bounds", Cuz Dey All "Played-Out-Lines"..
^^^ight opener
..tha "girl" I fuks wit, hold 9's and Keeps "Knifes" tucked..
..so king i suggest u beware!!, Cuz Like Tha "Diamond" My "Princess Cuts"..
^^^decent
..On tha block im'a "Warrior", Cuz Like "Tim" i does it Tha "Hard-a-way"..
..When "Hollows" Pierce king "Skull", Call Em A "BIRD-Brain", Watch His "Thoughts FLy-Away"..
^^^Good
..He Askin "Dj's" 4 Feedback, & yes dey realized he's Wack..
..Its Like Tha "Hair Product", Cuz Dey Dont Even Wanna Throw On "Bee's WAX"!!!(Whoa)..
^^^Ight
..& if its Problems, Im'a "Rollercoaster", I COMES WIT "STRAPS"!!!..
..Dat Will leave yo body like "WAL-MART PRICES", "ROLLING BACK"!!..
^^^Decent closer


isten u should do da math u aint avoidin' da wrath
you winnin? ha dis clown doin his job cuz he makin me laugh
^^^Weak
unh you a no-go considered a has been
add an ed to ya name you bout to be past tensed
^^^No
bitch you get slaughtered i aint takin it sof
you *suck in dis round kinna like i put da gauge in ya mouth
^^^no
unh i'm jus breakin you off
fuk courtin ima ignore it an jus start takin you out
^^^no
i'm fakin you out man you a disgrace in ya house
you aint raw even ya dog replacin you now
^^^no
an da worst part about is i'm playin around
but ima treat you like a slut and start layin u down
^^^iight
i'm sprayin dese rounds try to dodge it u sure ta get shot
movin ya lips you a pussy who be talkin alot
^^^weak
but when it come to da clappin you stik wit da rappin
cuz i'll strike bak like jason in manhattan
^^^Noo

V/payn got this easy this is one sided he came wit fresher punchs an wordplay...that was consistent u get my vote....Honestly RTF in The Sig or vote will be removed