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twenty9 03-14-06 04:14 PM

twenty9 vs JC REAL
 
Battle Rules:

8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-17-06 at 04:14 PM

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System 03-14-06 05:45 PM

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-06 05:45 PM.

System 03-15-06 11:24 PM

twenty9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-06 11:24 PM.

dazy 03-16-06 07:46 PM

quick drop cus im gone all week.........

29 third time ur facing me, both other times, me 2-0
i'll beat some sense into u & knock off that cheap afro*
u talk like u know everything but ur dumb as shit
ur just like when ur in a fight, u throw a punch and u still can't hit**
yeah we come from the same town but u never reppin'
u a man on a mission? nope just another fool steppin'
u just a racist basterd, realize im fucking cuban***
u fucked ur mom and still never loss ur virginity to a woman

*- 29 has a afro, im making fun of him cus he hates when people calls it a afro
**- comparing his punches as him in a fight , he can't fight
*** - im in a group that only hispanic people are in and he thinks im not cuban

twenty9 03-17-06 01:42 AM

JC REAL is tellin everybody that he is quite Hispanic,
cuz when he found out he was white, he began 2 panic/*

You’re just a bitch, that’s what I am telling them,
u a pussy, you wont even start medelling with glenn/**

Ya try to act toughly but you really just a fairy,
bitch you roughly remind me of the Wild Cherry/***

ya scalp can finally see, it is no longer blind,
I WOULD split your wig except I it can’t find/****

* he is telling every1 he is Hispanic but he is white.
** www.dontfuckwithglenn.piczo.com should explain it ( I fought glenn)
*** Wild cherry had a hit called Play that Funky Music White Boy.
****he is going bald

twenty9 03-17-06 01:53 AM

im not a racist. are you callin me racist cuz i don't lie about my ethnicity?

Valerie 03-17-06 02:59 AM

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 
....................omfg wack as a motherfucker..........

twenty9 03-17-06 03:01 AM

^ and the winner for bitch of the year is..... Blac0ut, wow, y arent i surprised?

Valerie 03-17-06 03:26 AM

yea kid got that right i am a winner cus outta us 2 im the best here so stfu herb.

KOOL COL-B 03-17-06 06:58 AM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
pollz........................................ werd

Raw Proof 03-17-06 11:59 AM

Voted For: twenty9

your both super garbage. rapverse has really let itself go since I last logd of this shit. your hitting with dumb ass inside joke that only make you two giggle like little girls while you stare at each others computer screans... 29...your last bar was retarted but you get my vote cuz of your flow and structure. ur oppenner, closer, punchlines, and everything else needs works.
v...twenty9

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

twenty9 03-17-06 02:37 PM

^thanx..... i guess......................................

dazy 03-17-06 05:40 PM

wat the fuck that aint a vote he didnt say shit i dont care that he voted for u but he didnt explain.............uppin for votes

dazy 03-17-06 05:55 PM

o and 29 i aint going bald u dick my hiar has been like this fo ever so yeah fuck u

twenty9 03-17-06 08:26 PM

^^^^^^^^^^uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.......... ..................

Nick Knack 03-18-06 09:34 AM

Voted For: twenty9

29:
you need to up your shit. you had some ok conceptz, but you fucked it up with your wording. the bald line could have been a lot better. work on making effective punchez.

jc:
you almost had this, but ya punchez didnt hit hard enough. when i saw the starz i figured there was a personal, instead you were just explainin some eazy and simple punch. work on makin good personalz.

v- 29

dazy 03-18-06 12:17 PM

uppin fo votes................................ shit ...........................

twenty9 03-18-06 05:25 PM

uppin............................................. ...................................

Nucentz 03-21-06 04:41 AM

Voted For: twenty9

yo both your rhymes were gud im learn alot from both verses but my vote goes to twenty 9 sho some love vote on my battles

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

scanz 03-21-06 10:28 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

ok my vote goes 2, structure was ok on both of them. (lil better 29) but the punches were better on jc.s on 29s those punchs could b used for lots of ppl. fairy and wild cherry. hmmmm nver saw the dude but im sure it looks like jc. anyways vote= jc.

oh yea 29. that post for gleen thing didnt come up so that didnt help much.

dazy 03-21-06 10:38 PM

thats for the vote scanz......................................

Young_law 03-21-06 10:57 PM

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 
wow............................................... ....................

Young Blaze 03-22-06 11:46 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

You’re just a bitch, that’s what I am telling them,
u a pussy, you wont even start medelling with glenn/**

Vs
9 third time ur facing me, both other times, me 2-0
i'll beat some sense into u & knock off that cheap afro*
u talk like u know everything but ur dumb as shit
ur just like when ur in a fight, u throw a punch and u still can't hit**

V/Jc.....this was a close one but real came wit more consistent punchs that were harder hittin than twenty....good battle....RTF...In my sig...Or this will be removed

(X)eed 03-23-06 04:58 PM

Voted For: JC REAL



IP:

quick drop cus im gone all week.........

29 third time ur facing me, both other times, me 2-0
i'll beat some sense into u & knock off that cheap afro*
u talk like u know everything but ur dumb as shit
^^^
prtt weak opner..... but beats tha other fella... .

had better flow.. alot better punches.. tha other fella.... u jus need 2 wrk alot harder..

ur punches are weak as fuck.... no offence ai... just keep at it

dazy 03-23-06 10:06 PM

upppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnn fo votez............................

dazy 03-29-06 06:37 PM

uppin the mafuckin up................................................ ........

Valerie 03-29-06 09:37 PM

rofl twent got owned by a herb...... LMFAO :bored:

CRiSS-CROSS 03-29-06 11:28 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

rofl rofl rofl im voting on this battle because it made me laugh to hard that both verses sucked so bad.. dont use real life personals, because u have 2 explain them, and explaing your battle is gay, i should be able to . think of some not played out concepts and tap some multis into in jeez. jc real got this because i wanted to shoot myself in the head when i weant 29s.

dazy 04-02-06 10:14 PM

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dazy 04-03-06 08:18 PM

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Triple_N 04-03-06 09:19 PM

Voted For: JC REAL



K..not much of a battle here

Breakdown:

Flow: Twenty
Structure: Twenty
Personals: JC
Punches: JC
Creativity: Tie
Vocab: Tie
Multie use: Tie
Metas: JC

Both yall came pretty weak....JC's opener was the closest to a decent line in the whole battle....No hate at all...an no favortism either cuz I wasn't feeling either one yall to be real but I had to vote for somebody an I voted JC, I feel he BARELY, I REALLY MEAN!!!!!!!!!!BARELY edged this one out....1


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