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Hot new one..."Sweet Leady, Sweet Lady"...u figure it out
http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox
^^Click on "Sweat Leady, Sweet Lady" Beat: Clockwork Productions Hook: All Q verses 1 & 2: Tha Q Concept: not an all out diss to Leady, but just a slap Holla atcha boy 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224813 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224660 |
u obviously didnt listen to "its leady" and ud kno how to pronounce my name properly, wow you finally got a decent flow, ok you just suddenly started rushing lines to fit em so yeh flow needs improving still, delivery is meh, pretty boring, lyrics are ok, your rhyme scheme is better than ur disses... lol @ bald, even thought ive got hair on my head and need a hair cut, but nevermind... lmfao @ crew is faggots, how hypocritical coming from an ACTUAL fag, that hook is pure trash.
meh this was blah. |
meh havent listen to u in a min.....lets see...
man...i dont like the hook at all... kinda seems like your vocals are a bit high...then again i just woke up and im not thinking completely straight... i dunno man...u just still gotta work on throwing a punch line and just overall dissing...its not your thing...im being honest...not saying that cause i dont like u....the diss shit just isnt your cup of tea... just bein honest........not hatin |
errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrr up
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^hahahahahahahahaha thas tha truth... eitha u fulla shit or u uh hypocrite |
solid diss track........rhyme scheme wuz real good........tha hook dun fit him u should get at leady's arrogance shit like that.......but yo good track.....waitn to hear leady's reply back......
pz ~1~ |
thats if i decide its worth my time, ive got one line that would end this kids whole shit so ya know.
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ahahahhahahaa...DUH STFU You ain't got to be "gay" to be a "faggot"...Like you are a sissy. yea...get it? :gfy: |
faggot originally being a derogatory term used to insult gay people, but nice try on being smart.
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
*sits back while others up my thread* |
and maybe then youll realise, like my last track, nobody is liking it :thumbup: hahahahahahaha
so far youve had one person say it was decent, my weakest track yet had one person saying it was dope, haha go figure. my reply coming 2moro. |
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haha!!!!
GET EM DOGGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JEA JEA fux all the hate on the hook! i love that shit! that was fresh!... got it stuck in my noodle now damn it!.... this Track Owns UK's own... WERD |
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prime example of a dickrider :thumbup: ive heard of crew love, but OYD takes it to a whole new level. |
personally i wasn't feeling the hook... but the rhyme scheme and flow and shyt was mos def on point!!! best flow i've heard from you yet... and of course leady gon' hate on it cuz it's about him and dude obviously dislikes for other reasons than the music...
but yeah... shyt was kinda loud on da hook and i couldn't make out what you said at the end of it... beat was different.... kinda wierd for a diss track but ya pulled it off... lots of energy and ya adlibs are waaayyyy better than what ya used to do....(uhhh.... uh huh... etc) |
no i wasnt hating, i have given him props for previous tracks he has done, despite not liking him.
my opinion on him does not determine my view on his music. but his flow was decent, yet in-consistant at times, delivery was monotonous and boring, it lacked animation, and the only good thing on his lyrics was his rhyme scheme. seriously, kids need to quit riding dudes jock strap. |
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uh uh uhu yea whu oh lol...preciate feed 1 |
well check this tonight...hopefully
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wow q....less then expected...you sound like you tried to put too many words in a ya verse....sounds rushed....not what im used to hearin from you....the hook is catchy...no problems with it....second verse is a lil better with teh flow....they lyrics seem to be alright....nothing stands out, but like i said for him nothing sucked....i mean id say you won cuz his wasnt really taht well put together...but i expect more from you...and you know you didnt come hard with this one....you can do better
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