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Gay Bashing(Q diss)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224845
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224404 meh, 30 minutes worth of work, fuck the crackling towards the beginning, im at my boys n his cable is fucked up but thats the best take we got n i couldnt be bothered doing another one incase the crackling was even worse, n i got lazy on writing aswell so i freestyled after abit just to pass time n keep it goin lol lyrics are on the page http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3683142 |
shoulda chose a diff beat and a ghost writer.....
this was More than Horrid.... trully a display of how talentless you are. that 20 second accapella ending.... aint even rhyme!!! aint even make no sense... juss UK jibberish..... straight up trash to the enth degree!!!!! i only peeped this cuz i wanted to see what you was workin wit in this beef between yall..... but dogg..... dont do it to yourself mayne..... jusss...... stop it.... werd. |
once again proving you are on his nuts.
his diss was average, it had no punchlines and no real disses, mainly just name calling, an average flow and monotonous delivery with a trashy hook.... and you concidered it dope, and you was the only person that concidered it dope, go figure. your in his crew so i expected nothing more from you. |
lol @ the end didnt rhyme yes it did rhyme, maybe u need to go look up the word "rhyme" in a dictionary and find the meaning of it lol
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LMAO...Thanks Tito...I was wonderin if this was even worth a listen. Now I know it isn't. lol |
atleast i actually had REAL disses, and not just mutlies with the odd name calling, fact remains, tha q lyrically got owned, even with a freestyle with absolutely no thought put into it on the end.
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aww ya fell off at that beat slow down "your from the land of the queen"eh you do get kinda jumbled with ya words and why is that shit so crackled ionno what cable has to do with it yea the beat choice is monotonous but AWWWWWWW MAN I LITTERALLY FELT EMBARRESSED FOR YOU that ending was the most complete trash ending ive ever heard as for your ending yes i do beleive it was a freestyle cuz it was fuckin horrible and the rest of it that u claiming was a freestyle is only because u know that shit is garbage and need a cover up please tell me where your played out punchlines were?
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the cables got a loose connection inside it i dunno, not my equipment, that shit at the end was actually freestyled, but arent you in tha q's other internet crew???
im starting to notice a trend here :thumbup: |
ahhhh come on leady dont blame internet crews on ya discomfort on the mic ...best thing about ths track was the air in between ya lyrics .......
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lol nice accent =P haha.. the beat is cool... i like the beat, good for a diss beat.. multi's are nice but your diss lines werent too good.. ur mic's quality isnt bad.. but the static is ahhhhh!!!! lol.. overall.. jst try harder next time lol |
lol @ dis-comfort, im far from uncomfortable on the mic, i was abit un-easy of the crackling n how much it was gonna effect the verse plus i was reading the written lyrics as i was recording where as normally i memorise them.
yeh i know the diss lines arent the greatest, but basically, to better his, all i needed to do was actually have some lol it was that simple. |
k some unbiased feed here........
punchlines were better than Q's.... that static shit pisses me off lyrically it wasnt anything insane..but there were some decent punches...mainly through the start/middle of it.... you can kinda tell your freestyling at the end....but your a pretty good freestyler.. overall..i think neither one of u came hard as fuck...but if i had to pick a "winner"...it would be you....simply for the fact that you had better punches....other than that...nothin really stood out that could make someone immediately pick you or Q as the "winner"....meh just my 2 cents i guess... |
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i agree 100% i know this was nothing amasing, but it did its job, and funy part is, iobviously spent less time on my diss than q did on his, but yeah man i freestyle quite alot so i get my practice, but that was pretty half arsed really, i couldnt be bothered thinkin bout what i was sayin really lol |
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the slow down killed you.... you needed some practice with that part... some decent punches thrown in there... work on ya flow... shyt's kinda off... beat is classic... shoulda did it more justice.... i was expecting a heater the way you were talking in Q's thread... his was easier to listen to....
shyt was aiight... nothing amazing... shoulda came way harder ... at least the energy was there... say what ya like but i liked q's shyt better.... that's honest feed... i don't dr anybody.... just tell it like i see it... if ya woulda roasted him i woulda said so... oh... and the freestyle portion was the worst.... don't do that again....just being real |
again ur in his crew, i KNOW ike isnt bias on this for the fact me and him have beefed several times in the past.
his was easier to listen to with a trashy hook like that and monotonous delivery n average flow, suuuuure, fact remains its a DISS and he had next to no disses. i had disses, thats what i was going for, fuck spending more than a few minutes for some 2bit netcee, seriously. |
Ok Some More REAL Feed Not Fake,Nut Hanging Shit
Yeha,Your Flow Is 100% Better Than Q's Feeling Your Delivery,Suits The Beat Well,Good Beat Choice Punches Are Koo,Nothing Standing Out But At Least You Had Punch lines Lol Feeling Your Emotion,Good Flow Switch Ups Lol@Internet 50 Cent Line Your Diss Was Far Better,Good Shit |
yeah... i dont see why they hatin that harsh....i thought the shit was illy... he likes to down loads.. I LOVE THAT FUCKIN BEAT...
like the accent that shit is dope... i cant really tell who is better between the two .. the slow down parts could have used one or two more takes and they would of been money... i like this shit... sorry to say for oyd crew |
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i commented on the hook... i wasn't feeling it... and i said so... but hey... call it like you see it.... if you can't see that he had a better flow then you think too much of yourself... ya track wasn't bad and i didn't trash you like other kats did... i stated what i thought needed work and you interpret it as nut hugging......lmao... i sweat no one... not even my own crew members... i support them to da fullest, yes... but if they need to hear sumn negative to help fix a track then i'm all for it... like i said in the previous post and any other track i've ever left feed on... i give my honest opinion... always...period |
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Talk about nut huggin :nono: |
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Word...no doubt Anyone who isn't a Q hater can see that...But, UNF is on some Q hatin --ish right now. So, what he says is irrelevant. This track got just about the same type of feed his last track got = garbage. nuff said. |
lol.........i can't check this ATM cuz im in class..but..will get @ it later....
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I was feelin realy was the lyrics..punches were nice..pretty funny here n there...flow is okay...kinda basic def summin u didnt spend alotta time on tho...it was a solid diss but the freestyle bit that shit jus fucked up..u talkin bout bangin his chick n shit shudda stopped it at the end of ure written...u had nice multis with that lyrical, myrical shit...however when u finished writing shudda ended it imo..flow was str8...punches were okay sum funny..didnt hear Q's diss to u..but I feel this wasnt your normal standard..1
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...848#post2697848 can u rtf |
all i got to say is .... the only people who liked this diss.... are UK heads.... which can get past the Marlon Brandow God Father speech patterns... soundin like you speakin through a mouth full of semen...
werd.... and juss cuz i dont like you dont mean im on Q's dick.... it juss means.... that for one... I dont like you ( your style) and two.... Anybody on the Roster would deficate on what you call lyricism.... SO STOP IT!!!!!!!! your throwin yourself under the bus cousin... FO REAL!!!!!!!! |
no they arent just UK heads, actually, theres only ONE UK head thats liked it so far, go figure. and i stopped when i read upto there... oh n the british guy he actually comes from america originally
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you taking this criticism thing to heart.... mellow out and try taking some advice for a change.... again... ya had a few lines that were straight... but lyrically, skillfully, and flow-wise you had nothing to offer... if it was based on just those three categories i'd have to say you got, well.... trashed... you got some skill... but like da rest of us, there's always room for improvement
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DUDE leady you said the word do it and mic like a 100 times
u atleast had punches your quality sucked |
yep deff quality problems....i mean okay lyrics n punches....nothing special but then agian nothing sucked.....
i mean is it just me or do UK rappers just sound like they struggle to get words out.....i mean for some reason it doesnt sound right when yall spit....stick to rock music...the beatles were sick...ha...oh well yea nothing too bad, that freestyle sucked....honestly.....stop repeating yourself...... not too bad cept ya quality...n my bias on a UK voice...but the lyrics helped a lil....time to peep q's verse.... |
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ROFLMFAO kid, i got flow, i got lyrics and i got delivery, i just dont waste time perfecting it for sum diss. yes i know im not perfect and i know what i need to improve on, but this was nowhere near as bad as U q CREW NUT HUGGERS are claiming, and thats fact. |
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you might wanna re-read my original post.... fuck it... i'm done with this... it's whatevers man.... make a good track and i'll give a good critique... better yet... link me to ya other shyt and we'll see wus up *bolded section* ... then wus da point of tryna diss someone if it ain't gon be effective?....wow... emcees nowadays disappoint me more and more with some of the shyt that come out they mouth |
I'll put the feed from Q's diss, *listening now*
Chorus - Haaa it's pronounced 'Led-E' like a pencil lead, it's catchy but gets redundant after a while... Lyrics - I'm looking for punches, but I can't find nothing... a few random comments like Leady having sex with his cousin, not really anything hard hitting; however, I know you try to look out for your flow which was straight, the 'hizome' line was creative. But yeah, you have to work on forming punches and effective ones. It's aight to have a good flow just get a good combination going, don't sacrifice actual disses for flow. Aight Leady, *listens now* No Chorus, nice beat choice, right off the bat the quality is weird.. Lyrics - There were a few 'gay' lines that's been used before, and the Owning You Daily lines been used a lot... However, you had some alright punches here and there. Quotables: "n i dont mean music when he likes to down-loads" "n he only started his own label cos nobody would sign him" You started falling off from this part and on (flow-wise): "listen man because you know im tough on beat im crushin him.... but hes got a crush on me... I wasn't into the freestyle bit at the end; I thought you should have left that out. Flow - Tha Q had it easy. Lyrics - Leady (when you diss you need punches/personals... Leady delivered.) Quality - Tha Q. (sounded clean throughout) Beat - Leady (more of a diss beat) Punches - Leady (2 punches to 0 punches) Delivery - Tie To pick the winner is kind of difficult because Q didn't have punchlines and his track was more entertaining than dissing, it was something you could just bop your head to. However, Leady's flow started falling off a bit and started to get a little boring for me towards the end, but he had punches. |
^^^thats REAL talk, again, i agree with that.
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i said that when i heard your music aswell, but lets not go there. |
Too be honest I 100 percent agree wit lady fiya
you both come nice too the mic but damn all this shit is un-neccasary and word @ OYD hating cuz there in Q's Crew...well I see a point at that well simply cuz the fact that thats normally what most crews do help out there boys right? |
^^^^exactly.
but hey, im used to heads tryna bring me down for my music, but its funny the same cats tryna bring my music down, are the same ones doing nothing past the net :thumbup: jealousys a bitch aint it. |
feed based ono song not topic*
...flow is decent...damn at the static....lyrics are decent, nuthin amazing or ne thign terrible....beat is pretty cool....this isntj bad at all but some things could be improved mayne... |
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lol... that's real cute... i'm tryna be real with dude and he still on the defensive... say what ya want about my music but if you gonna criticize then at least do it constructively... anytime you wanna exchange rhymes we can do that.... it's on you homie.... oh... and as far as the whole beyond the net comment...lol... i've never been "new" to hip-hop... go around W 4th and NYU and ask about the Oracles of Dialect, K.O.C., MegaHurtz, Black-Ops, Dougus Productions, Soul Feet Deep, Donnie Hurtz and D.R. Square, The Mysticians, Cyanide, and Animosity.... Not only that but Russel Simmons (ya know... the dude who owns Phat Farm and Def Jam) came to my crib to listen to my demos when I was barely outta high schol and 2 times the emcee you think you are... i keep connects... what you doing besides basement mixtapes? |
i perform all over, ive performed all over the UK, aswell as amsterdam n germany.
ive featured on other artists albums, got plenty of tracks on mixtapes released/based in diff countries round the world, got my first album in the making, aswell as a joint EP with a producer and a promo cd with a close friend, i got plenty of radio play around the UK, also had radio's ask for new songs that are in australia, canada and america. u mean the same cyanide from new york??? the same cat who has given me props for my music and respect and enjoys the shit that im making/doing??? the same cat who battled millz and got through to an internet vote to decide the winner cos the judges couldnt decide??? good for you. |
at least you know who cyanide is... that is one of my best friends and we tore down plenty of shows together... don't get it twisted ... it was respect as an artist... i KNOW my boy and we gave plenty of props to kats for doing they thing because of a mutual love for true hip-hop... but when dudes start getting beside themselves we tend to put them on the spot and make 'em show and prove... and if ya run into him again tell him D.R. said wuddup...
look... i ain't got no "real" problems with you, dude... you just took what i initially said and put ya own twist on it... i said it before and i'll say it again... i'm always fair when it comes to rating a track... ya flow was off at times... a few things seemed forced to me... granted, ya had punches here and there... but audio is also about how it sounds... if you don't care how it sounds then why should anyone else? |
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