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Deape S. Flowze™ vs (X)eed
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 03-23-06 at 09:26 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Deape S. Flowze™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-06 08:28 PM.
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(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-06 08:31 PM.
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nigga, u cant get the top, quit callin yaself a champ when ya not
cause i'll "place seed(ceed) in the ground" like "planting a crop" you stand in the spot of being weak, rv's hating your style, son you wanna perform, i'll "shoot X while he on stage"... ....................................like the "Islamic Nation did Malcolm" i hold hatred, i'm violent ..idont get confused, ya keys are weak you exceed all expectations? RV expected you to be wack ............................................why you aint exceed from that? dont even rap, you wack and you know it, you wont go far you like "trash wishing it could be somethin else" ..........................."you dont wanna be garbage, but you are" never be flawless with the bars, you dont phase me, u will lose in skills, only time we'll hear about "ceed(seed) growing"... ....................................is talking bout a "baby in the womb" |
"deep" as flows even if he could "mobb' his styles still amataure
kids quite low. tryna "dick" "ass" deep as a "hole" keeps goin.............................. but thats how far he goes.. commited to be a "stayer", but way "over" his "period" "rushin" like a river,"floss" like "bacteria" still quite leniant dumb "ass" still "lickin" to be slowly "quiet" famous good at ............"lettin one go" quite slowly from tha anus lookin down i made a "B.I.G." hole in tha man's "lil" head "kim"s his real name. hes goin...down... wit a "notorious' death kid's small he be "runnin' before he even took his 1st step.... |
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g.... .6. 10 lines... u fuck tard |
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you know u lost roflmao..that is 10 lines..i just wrote em a different way ..uppin ..!!
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Voted For: (X)eed
IP: "deep" as flows even if he could "mobb' his styles still amataure kids quite low. tryna "dick" "ass" deep as a "hole" keeps goin.............................. but thats how far he goes.. well nothing rhymes there... but o well... it started all right with the mobb and deep line but you just kill it... commited to be a "stayer", but way "over" his "period" "rushin" like a river,"floss" like "bacteria" still quite leniant ok wtf... you would have been better not to write that. that line gets a 0/47265092749 on any day dumb "ass" still "lickin" to be slowly "quiet" famous good at ............"lettin one go" quite slowly from tha anus lol... pretty funny line there... good to have a funny line in a verse somewere... keeps the reader interested... lookin down i made a "B.I.G." hole in tha man's "lil" head "kim"s his real name. hes goin...down... wit a "notorious' death alright wordplay here... you need to strutute it better... kid's small he be "runnin' before he even took his 1st step.... good line here... but you needed another line before it leading into it... struture is alright... you need to think your bars through first tho... you've killed every bar except for you "fart" bar by writting bullshit.... THINK. good closer tho... pretty good... nigga, u cant get the top, quit callin yaself a champ when ya not cause i'll "place seed(ceed) in the ground" like "planting a crop" nigga... <- DONT use that word... it's not needed and is wasting space, alright intro... you stand in the spot of being weak, rv's hating your style, son you wanna perform, i'll "shoot X while he on stage"... ....................................like the "Islamic Nation did Malcolm" If your going to drop a line and have a pause to make your punch more effective.... make sure its a good punch in the first place cause thats pretty lame i hold hatred, i'm violent ..idont get confused, ya keys are weak you exceed all expectations? RV expected you to be wack ............................................why you aint exceed from that? first of all dont say shit like "i hold hatred" i couldnt actualy give a fuck if you hold hatred or if your holding your balls.... in a battle you need to focus on your oopsition not on yourself... but good punch here none the less dont even rap, you wack and you know it, you wont go far you like "trash wishing it could be somethin else" ..........................."you dont wanna be garbage, but you are" Good punch here... nothing special never be flawless with the bars, you dont phase me, u will lose in skills, only time we'll hear about "ceed(seed) growing"... ....................................is talking bout a "baby in the womb" weak closer... saying stuff like... "you will lose..." is just stupid extra bull crap and you trying to make things rhyme... DONT DO IT your shit flows like your constipated... mainly becuase you have to many words in your bars!... having your last line droped with a pause.... should only be used once on a really good line... you used it for all of them which is a waste and made your punches less effective... You need to work on your vocab I would say that looking at this battle deep flows you have the better verse but your style and lack of vocab and severe lack of flow just kills you... ceed your verse had some good ideas in it but you really need to learn how to set them out better ok and you'll be very dangerous.. deep... shorten your bars... ceed.... learn to spell... overall vote goes to xceed... you won me over with your fart line... deep you need to work on getting more interesting things in your verse... i could basically predict what you were going to say... ceed you were a bit more random and interesting... no hate... peace :thumbup: |
any problems with my vote... create the battle...
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Voted For: Deape S. Flowze™
(X)eed- your drop is weak bro, nothing really stood out, you tried to force the word play at the end,which came off weak bro. Your entire drop doesnt really make much sense. Deape S. Flowze™- your opener is good, proberly what won it for you, I didnt liek the way you closed it playin goff hsi name again, even though it was a diffrent style of name play, it some what made it seemed repeditive Best bars "deep" as flows even if he could "mobb' his styles still amataure kids quite low. tryna "dick" "ass" deep as a "hole" keeps goin.............................. but thats how far he goes.. VS nigga, u cant get the top, quit callin yaself a champ when ya not cause i'll "place seed(ceed) in the ground" like "planting a crop" http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=224955 |
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uppin plz..... jus shut this gay fuck down.. plz |
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Voted For: Deape S. Flowze™
nigga, u cant get the top, quit callin yaself a champ when ya not cause i'll "place seed(ceed) in the ground" like "planting a crop" vs deep" as flows even if he could "mobb' his styles still amataure kids quite low. tryna "dick" "ass" deep as a "hole" keeps goin.............................. but thats how far he goes.. weak battle,Deape S. Flowze™ actually dropped punches,other guy dropped weak as fuck and didnt hit any any aspect of a text battle. |
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uppin all votes will b returnd |
Voted For: (X)eed
really tight battle. good display by the both of you. deape. s flowze had a couple of great lines and i was likin the wordplay wit the use of ceed(seed). Xceed, you had a verse that flowed well and the punches made their point and hit harder. also the verse was better. a very tight battle, but xceed JUST wins this one |
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Voted For: Deape S. Flowze™
yo dis was a good battle really ddnt see no personals from xeed but danjur on da other hand had sum great personals da structure was a lil of by both danjure had da word play couldnt realy read xeed rymes so vote goes 2 danjure |
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wtf??????? ok............ uppin |
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Voted For: (X)eed
i vote for xeed cus he had better rymes an flow and some punches... other guy u needed some more elavation and u coulda won with ur lines ,u had structure .............. no hate...... |
This was feedback posted for Deape S. Flowze™
xeed lost.
I wanna see who JC voted for . |
Voted For: Deape S. Flowze™
you both need alot of of work. ceed especially. his shit made no sense at all and using the word dick in place of dig becouse it might sound a like is not exactly wordplay. I give my vote to writer cuz he had punches. his openner needs work and some of his lines didn't even ryme which is a problem if your rapping. but I understood his verse better and thats why he gets it. |
can one of ya'll return the favor wit an honest vote in my battle wit MC philosopher.
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uppin for the win ..!!
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Voted For: Deape S. Flowze™
nigga, u cant get the top, quit callin yaself a champ when ya not cause i'll "place seed(ceed) in the ground" like "planting a crop" good nameplay.. kinda predictable tho you stand in the spot of being weak, rv's hating your style, son you wanna perform, i'll "shoot X while he on stage"... ....................................like the "Islamic Nation did Malcolm" decent i hold hatred, i'm violent ..idont get confused, ya keys are weak you exceed all expectations? RV expected you to be wack ............................................why you aint exceed from that? ok dont even rap, you wack and you know it, you wont go far you like "trash wishing it could be somethin else" ..........................."you dont wanna be garbage, but you are" lol this was kinda funny, ok never be flawless with the bars, you dont phase me, u will lose in skills, only time we'll hear about "ceed(seed) growing"... ....................................is talking bout a "baby in the womb" again, predictable nameplay, but decent IP: "deep" as flows even if he could "mobb' his styles still amataure kids quite low. tryna "dick" "ass" deep as a "hole" no.. keeps goin.............................. but thats how far he goes.. commited to be a "stayer", but way "over" his "period" "rushin" like a river,"floss" like "bacteria" still quite leniant lmfao what? no this was wack. dumb "ass" still "lickin" to be slowly "quiet" famous good at ............"lettin one go" quite slowly from tha anus wtf... actually use a punchline, no lookin down i made a "B.I.G." hole in tha man's "lil" head "kim"s his real name. hes goin...down... wit a "notorious' death kid's small he be "runnin' before he even took his 1st step.... nope.. I seriously don't know how xceed even got 3 votes. You would have to be a complete retard to vote for that verse, V-Danjure for actually have punches and nameplay other than a wack verse. |
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