iLFS vs Papa Paramik
 

Aight, here we go all. The final battle.

Rules:
20 lines
No crew votes
No tribe votes
No recycling
No biting

Now, you all have exactly one week to check in and drop. This battle will remain up until April 14, and I will be checking it every other day if not daily. On April 14 11:59 PM, if the battle is not closed, then the person with the most votes will win. Even if the battle closes with the other person winning, they will not receive the mic. If it is a tie, I will give 12 hours for it to be broken, if it remains tied, then no one will win the mic.

Good luck.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 04-01-06 at 08:37 AM

Must drop verse in 5040 minutes after check in.

ok......
juss checkin something....l./..............................

iLFS has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-06 11:44 PM.

Papa Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-06 07:54 PM.

Damn Rev why you got me killin Paramik again,
Bout to get locked up for beating on gay men,
My punches pimp this dude, he's my manwhore,
When he's makin me my money is the only he rolls on the floor,*
But enough with the gay jokes, shit is makin me vomit,
So I'ma take you thru the steps of Basic Paranomiks,
First off you gotta battle some herbs and noobs,
For example look at Boomer he tried to rhyme terds and boobs,**
Step 2 in the process of the B.P. is to be free constantly,
This dude is so open it's like his asshole is screaming 'FUCK ME!',
Damn another fag joke but I can't help it I got solid proof,
This thread makes me think he wants to collab with Q in the booth,***
So where was I at, Step 3, and that's simply to think you're cool,
A loner, came on RV to try get all his Net buddies to get drunk afterschool,****
Step 4 is to be non creative but ask other to do your shit,
A Retard Story, I got a name, "The Life Of Papa Paramik',*****
Anything you throw at me, I'll disreard, so this step is the last,
Simply put your career is like Gym Class, you can't help but pass,



*His Subtitle is 'ROFL! ROFL! ROFL!'
**http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142156
***http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223372 - Tha Q is supposedly gay. Figure it out.
****http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224527
*****http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223091

Fuck I need to do this.............................................. ...

Vote up fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!1
Blaber Jabber.

Nice battle. Should be good. Hopefully............

Voted For: Papa Paramik

Ight In my opinion paramik got this but it was close as fuck i had to read it over 3 times each and choose which lines i like from each IlFS ur best was

Step 4 is to be non creative but ask other to do your shit,
A Retard Story, I got a name, "The Life Of Papa Paramik',*****
Anything you throw at me, I'll disreard, so this step is the last,
Simply put your career is like Gym Class, you can't help but pass,

and paramik heres ur best lines

You can bite and have your D/R’s, but I am still taking the win bitch.
Be on the ground with a temper tantrum….
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦and still not under-stand my shit.
You a fake everybody knows that, like Omish people save ya energy.
I’d like to be thought of an asshole so I can better shit out ya delivery.
See, he aint worth it, think you strong? stop with your beat jokes.
I’ll paddle the canoe to greatness, while you die of a heat stroke.

obviously u came harder paramik ur punches and personals vs ILFS in this one u took it easy.

Voted For: iLFS

ok...I really didn't like any of your verses but If I had to pick...Id choose LFS. his verse was kind of weak but paragarbage was off in all aspects and actually thoaght it was good which made him sound ignorant of his own wakness. gay jokes are played out though. try being a bit more creative wit your ur word play and vocab. understand ur voter aint simple minded and we like to read something that'll catch our eyes.
My vote goes to LFS

please return the favor wit an honest vote in any one of my battles in my sig. thanx

Don't vote on shit you don't understand.
You barely gave a feedback. shouldn't even be counted. w/e.

Ok. I didn't like your verse. deal wit it and elivate. theres no point in really getting mad. Mr 305. quit acting ur age and deal wit it u fuckin jit. I didn't vote based on who I thouaght was more popular...I dont know any of you so this is my honest vote.

Youi didn't even leave a good vote.
Your just saying im off in all aspects.
Your not even explaining fully.
And I'm a jit? Fuck bitch i'm 6'2.
But w/e it's counted.
Post here again and your gay.

Upping


Vote damn..............................

This was feedback posted for iLFS
 

Battle will be closed in 8 days...................

Voted For: iLFS

Damn Rev why you got me killin Paramik again,
Bout to get locked up for beating on gay men,
No wack attemp of a punch 2/10
My punches pimp this dude, he's my manwhore,
When he's makin me my money is the only he rolls on the floor,*
Ight nice personal 7/10
But enough with the gay jokes, shit is makin me vomit,
So I'ma take you thru the steps of Basic Paranomiks,
Lol I found it funy 7/10
First off you gotta battle some herbs and noobs,
For example look at Boomer he tried to rhyme terds and boobs,**
Lol nice personal 7/10
Step 2 in the process of the B.P. is to be free constantly,
This dude is so open it's like his asshole is screaming 'FUCK ME!',
Lol nice lol haha 8/10
Damn another fag joke but I can't help it I got solid proof,
This thread makes me think he wants to collab with Q in the booth,***
Lol nice wordplay 8/10
So where was I at, Step 3, and that's simply to think you're cool,
A loner, came on RV to try get all his Net buddies to get drunk afterschool,****
Lol nice personal lol wack wordplay 7/10
Step 4 is to be non creative but ask other to do your shit,
A Retard Story, I got a name, "The Life Of Papa Paramik',*****
Nice lol 7/10
Anything you throw at me, I'll disreard, so this step is the last,
Simply put your career is like Gym Class, you can't help but pass,
Lol nice closer 8/10

Overal: 62/90

vs.

You can bite and have your D/R’s, but I am still taking the win bitch.
Be on the ground with a temper tantrum….
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦and still not under-stand my shit.
Eh ight 6/10
You a fake everybody knows that, like Omish people save ya energy.
I’d like to be thought of an asshole so I can better shit out ya delivery.
No 5/10
See, he aint worth it, think you strong? stop with your beat jokes.
I’ll paddle the canoe to greatness, while you die of a heat stroke.
Eh 6/10
Don’t think your important man, cause really, your nothing special.
But I think I can help your flow out, by bursting your blood vessel.
Ight 7/10
You love to dickride me man, but don’t mean go fight for the seater.
If you aint gonna measure up to me, then you probably be me, turd. (metered)
Its ight 7/10
Your really mental, so I think that you should rearrange the brain.
But I don’t need to be out in the meadow to see ya brain is plain.
Eh corny 6/10
Much of a joke, you aint gon survive RVS, near to cracking me up.
And If you hungry for fame don’t bite me……
………………………………………….. …. or I’ll resort to stabbin’ these fucks.
Ight 7/10
Now your just pissing me off, this’ll end in a fucked up nasty scene.
And sure go and recycle ya spit, But I don’t mean drink your urine!
Eh ok 6/10
You can leave me blind, but I don’t need to see that you finished.
Because if you pop eyes, I’ll punch your gut and take your spinach.
Gay 2/10
This match is over L, and I’m saying the words like “Bye" and “See Ya!�
Cause if it’s quality not quantity, fuck then your shit must be diarehea.
eh 5/10

Overal: 57/100

Clearly lfs had the betrer verse

Please rtf honestly in my battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=225837

Coo coo. Uppin for more votes. Let's git er done. lol

vote up kids...........................................

uppin vote dammit.........................................

Battle will be closed in 7 days...................

Battle will be closed in 6 days.........................

Ignore the 2 hours late I was.

Battle will be closed in 5 days....

Voted For: Papa Paramik

You can bite and have your D/R’s, but I am still taking the win bitch.
Be on the ground with a temper tantrum….
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦and still not under-stand my shit.
ummmmm.....no....the werd play didnt werk
You a fake everybody knows that, like Omish people save ya energy.
I’d like to be thought of an asshole so I can better shit out ya delivery.
.....that was ok.............
See, he aint worth it, think you strong? stop with your beat jokes.
I’ll paddle the canoe to greatness, while you die of a heat stroke.
.....it rhymed....but thats it....lol
Don’t think your important man, cause really, your nothing special.
But I think I can help your flow out, by bursting your blood vessel.
..............ok............
You love to dickride me man, but don’t mean go fight for the seater.
If you aint gonna measure up to me, then you probably be me, turd. (metered)
....good werd play....but the punch suck....its a contradiction...........
Your really mental, so I think that you should rearrange the brain.
But I don’t need to be out in the meadow to see ya brain is plain.
.......boooo....that was wack...
Much of a joke, you aint gon survive RVS, near to cracking me up.
And If you hungry for fame don’t bite me……
………………………………………….. …. or I’ll resort to stabbin’ these fucks.
........ummmmm....no another waste of space...
Now your just pissing me off, this’ll end in a fucked up nasty scene.
And sure go and recycle ya spit, But I don’t mean drink your urine!
.....ummmm...........no......terrible
You can leave me blind, but I don’t need to see that you finished.
Because if you pop eyes, I’ll punch your gut and take your spinach.
ewwwww.......no........
This match is over L, and I’m saying the words like “Bye" and “See Ya!�
Cause if it’s quality not quantity, fuck then your shit must be diarehea.
....lol....wouldnt diareha be the quantity....

paramik......5/10






Damn Rev why you got me killin Paramik again,
Bout to get locked up for beating on gay men,
ummmmmm....aiight i guesss
My punches pimp this dude, he's my manwhore,
When he's makin me my money is the only he rolls on the floor,*
......I dont git it......made no sense?
But enough with the gay jokes, shit is makin me vomit,
So I'ma take you thru the steps of Basic Paranomiks,
ummmmm.....filler
First off you gotta battle some herbs and noobs,
For example look at Boomer he tried to rhyme terds and boobs,**
........that wasnt even a punch or anything?.....
Step 2 in the process of the B.P. is to be free constantly,
This dude is so open it's like his asshole is screaming 'FUCK ME!',
ummmm....i guess....ok...should be werded better
Damn another fag joke but I can't help it I got solid proof,
This thread makes me think he wants to collab with Q in the booth,***
.......wack punch.....git off the gay shit......
So where was I at, Step 3, and that's simply to think you're cool,
A loner, came on RV to try get all his Net buddies to get drunk afterschool,****
........another wack line..........
Step 4 is to be non creative but ask other to do your shit,
A Retard Story, I got a name, "The Life Of Papa Paramik',*****
........barely ok........
Anything you throw at me, I'll disreard, so this step is the last,
Simply put your career is like Gym Class, you can't help but pass,
.......booooo @ the closer...........

Ilfs........3/10



vote/paramik


wack battle...........werd :thumbup:

You've got 3 days. If it's tied no one wins the mic. So get people to vote you all!

Voted For: Papa Paramik

Don’t think your important man, cause really, your nothing special.
But I think I can help your flow out, by bursting your blood vessel.
You can leave me blind, but I don’t need to see that you finished.
Because if you pop eyes, I’ll punch your gut and take your spinach.
This match is over L, and I’m saying the words like “Bye" and “See Ya!�
Cause if it’s quality not quantity, fuck then your shit must be diarehea.

VS

First off you gotta battle some herbs and noobs,
For example look at Boomer he tried to rhyme terds and boobs,**
Step 4 is to be non creative but ask other to do your shit,
A Retard Story, I got a name, "The Life Of Papa Paramik'

I got para taking it just, and elefes didnt go 20, follio :love:

Hey. Daubs can't vote. Shame on you. Go to your room, no dinner tonight. lol

lmao
Get this shit done. I'ma hit the crib kids....

Battle is closed in 2 days........................

Battle is closed tonight...........................

Papa Paramik wins the mic.

You can choose to keep this open or not.

Close This. Give me the win plz plz...................

This was feedback posted for Papa Paramik
 

Energy and delivery...uhm...they dont' rhyme. I'll rhyme your face, bro!

Voted For: iLFS

You can bite and have your D/R’s, but I am still taking the win bitch.
Be on the ground with a temper tantrum….
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦and still not under-stand my shit.
WEAK,N I CAN TELL BY UR "STYLE" THAT U ARE FROM RB,ITS SAD THAT THERE IS NO ORIGINALITY THERE....................

You a fake everybody knows that, like Omish people save ya energy.
I’d like to be thought of an asshole so I can better shit out ya delivery.
WACK

See, he aint worth it, think you strong? stop with your beat jokes.
I’ll paddle the canoe to greatness, while you die of a heat stroke.
SUCKS

Don’t think your important man, cause really, your nothing special.
But I think I can help your flow out, by bursting your blood vessel.
EHH OK I GUESS

You love to dickride me man, but don’t mean go fight for the seater.
If you aint gonna measure up to me, then you probably be me, turd. (metered)
U ARE STRUGGGGGGLING TO RHYME MAN.....SERIOUSLY

Your really mental, so I think that you should rearrange the brain.
But I don’t need to be out in the meadow to see ya brain is plain.
GARBAGE

Much of a joke, you aint gon survive RVS, near to cracking me up.
And If you hungry for fame don’t bite me……
………………………………………….. …. or I’ll resort to stabbin’ these fucks.

U COULD HAVE MADE A HALF DECENT PUNCH WITH "IF U HUNGRY FOR FAME BITE ME" BUT THE SECOND PART OF IT JUST RUINED IT,U DONT KNOW HOW TO WORD UR PUNCHES

Now your just pissing me off, this’ll end in a fucked up nasty scene.
And sure go and recycle ya spit, But I don’t mean drink your urine!
AGAIN,U COULD HAVE SAID RECYCLE UR SHIT,AND EAT UR FECES...WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER THE URINE ONE JUST KILLED THE WHOLE PUNCH MAN

You can leave me blind, but I don’t need to see that you finished.
Because if you pop eyes, I’ll punch your gut and take your spinach.
WACK

This match is over L, and I’m saying the words like “Bye" and “See Ya!�
Cause if it’s quality not quantity, fuck then your shit must be diarehea.
EHH I GUESS I KNOW WHERE U ARE GOIN WITH IT,BUT IT JUST CAME OUT ALL WRONG






Damn Rev why you got me killin Paramik again,
Bout to get locked up for beating on gay men,
My punches pimp this dude, he's my manwhore,
When he's makin me my money is the only he rolls on the floor,*
But enough with the gay jokes, shit is makin me vomit,
So I'ma take you thru the steps of Basic Paranomiks,
First off you gotta battle some herbs and noobs,
For example look at Boomer he tried to rhyme terds and boobs,**
Step 2 in the process of the B.P. is to be free constantly,
This dude is so open it's like his asshole is screaming 'FUCK ME!',
Damn another fag joke but I can't help it I got solid proof,
This thread makes me think he wants to collab with Q in the booth,***
So where was I at, Step 3, and that's simply to think you're cool,
A loner, came on RV to try get all his Net buddies to get drunk afterschool,****
Step 4 is to be non creative but ask other to do your shit,
A Retard Story, I got a name, "The Life Of Papa Paramik',*****
Anything you throw at me, I'll disreard, so this step is the last,
Simply put your career is like Gym Class, you can't help but pass,

...DUDE THIS IS NOT STORYTELLIN TIME....THIS WAS WACK!! I THINK THE ONLY THING I'D EVEN CONSIDER A PUNCH IS UR CLOSING LINE THE REST WAS GARBAGE....



THIS BATTLE SUCKED ON BOTH ENDS.....BUT IF I HAD TO PICK ONE,I'D HAVE TO GO WITH PAPPA PARAMIK,CUZ AT LEAST IT WAS A BATTLE VERSE,NOT A BEDTIME STORY.
HE HAD ONE "OK" PUNCH AND SOME OTHER ATTEMPTS AT PUNCHES ,MEANWHILE THE OTHER DUDE HAD ONE PUNCH AT THE END THATS IT....N THE STORYTELLIN JUST KILLED IT......
VOTE =PAPPA PARAMIK

Wtf?why Does It Say I Voted For Ilfs? I Voted For The Other Guy Get It Straightened Out Yall

Not to worry the battles already over....
Not much trying....