hair bear vs shoosh
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-02-06 at 11:50 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Hair Bear has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-06 10:55 AM.

shoosh has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-06 11:36 AM.

Your faker than silicone tits, your getting death threats,
your see thru like cataracts like cadillacs your getting stretched,
i'll make you wanna take your last breath,
i blast techs and glocks till your heart stops so think again,
about approaching me,i will open you up like having surgery,
fuck you for your anti purgery on the stand at my court case,
yo fuck you B fuck your a bitch catching clips you making enemies,
your in the wrong place man about face and run away,
and pray to god that my gun dont spray,
i've got a tombstone ready for your fucking name,
my crews known to use chrome and i dont mean paint,
i'll smash you till your mangled and hang you till you dangle,
by your ankles and make you kiss my waist,
it's a waste of time tryna find your place in the rap game,
so give it up its enough its your fate,
to be a punk mother fucker without heart or brains,
and this victory's mine like your cash and dame,
the passion came to smash ya frame when you were saying,
i havent battled for a year man get off that train,
im quick to cause you pain now leave this battle at 1 and 1
cause you've been slain :shoot:

IP: 7B47 A1C4


Your faker than silicone tits, your getting death threats,
your see thru like cataracts like cadillacs your getting stretched,
i'll make you wanna take your last breath,
i blast techs and glocks till your heart stops so think again,
about approaching me,i will open you up like having surgery,
fuck you for your anti purgery on the stand at my court case,
yo fuck you B fuck your a bitch catching clips you making enemies,
your in the wrong place man about face and run away,
and pray to god that my gun dont spray,
i've got a tombstone ready for your fucking name,
my crews known to use chrome and i dont mean paint,
i'll smash you till your mangled and hang you till you dangle,
by your ankles and make you kiss my waist,
it's a waste of time tryna find your place in the rap game,
so give it up its enough its your fate,
to be a punk mother fucker without heart or brains,
and this victory's mine like your cash and dame,
the passion came to smash ya frame when you were saying,
i havent battled for a year man get off that train,
im quick to cause you pain now leave this battle at 1 and 1
cause you've been slain
__________________

wack fuck........

Voted For: Hair Bear

Goes to hair bear
Answer: Skill Question: What’s this ass wipe’s verse lacking of?
Only time you beat and draw blood’s when you’re jacking off
In closing, I’m proposing you refrain from getting cut down
The only time niggas can’t see you is when you Shut Down

VS.


Nothing,

your verse was so scrambled i could barely follow and your punches were either old, ineffective or just plain wack

By the way...RTF...Hair bear only though, no hate it's just a vote

upping this battle . . .

This was feedback posted for Hair Bear
 

...............Both of u came weak here.............

Voted For: shoosh

Your rhymes make me think, from when your shit is leagues beneath me....
I should shit myself...and use the PC screen as TP
^^^i have no idea what that means?
Answer: Skill Question: What’s this ass wipe’s verse lacking of?
Only time you beat and draw blood’s when you’re jacking off
^^^^this was just to damn forced!
I couldn’t reiterate your wackness with a stutter
You beating me’s like tryna feed Fat Bastard bread n butter
^^^^isnt feeding fat dueds bread and butter easy?
In closing, I’m proposing you refrain from getting cut down
The only time niggas can’t see you is when you Shut Down
^^^^that was...ummm?...i dont even know but it wasnt good!

overall....2/10....and structer was barely ok!
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Your faker than silicone tits, your getting death threats,
your see thru like cataracts like cadillacs your getting stretched,
^^^^very herbish but at least its a punch...well barely!
i'll make you wanna take your last breath,
i blast techs and glocks till your heart stops so think again,
^^^^^^what the hell was that!
about approaching me,i will open you up like having surgery,
fuck you for your anti purgery on the stand at my court case,
^^^OK this was a fill in...lol...jus a bunch of bull that means nothing!
yo fuck you B fuck your a bitch catching clips you making enemies,
your in the wrong place man about face and run away,
and pray to god that my gun dont spray,
^^^^what the hell is wit all the gangster...your on the net?
i've got a tombstone ready for your fucking name,
my crews known to use chrome and i dont mean paint,
^^^another herbish bar!
i'll smash you till your mangled and hang you till you dangle,
by your ankles and make you kiss my waist,
^^^^....lol.....more useless multi's
it's a waste of time tryna find your place in the rap game,
so give it up its enough its your fate,
^^^^^^^^WHAT!
to be a punk mother fucker without heart or brains,
and this victory's mine like your cash and dame,
^^^^^booooo...what a waist of words
the passion came to smash ya frame when you were saying,
i havent battled for a year man get off that train,
im quick to cause you pain now leave this battle at 1 and 1
cause you've been slain
^^^^wack closer you need to elevate alot....


overall.......2.1/10.......well at least you had something that sounded like a punch even though they were all wack....oh and your structer sucked.......



vote:shoosh

This was feedback posted for Hair Bear
 

Interesting battle emm,.... yeah checking votes !

!~

Voted For: Hair Bear

Your faker than silicone tits, your getting death threats,
your see thru like cataracts like cadillacs your getting stretched,
WACK

i'll make you wanna take your last breath,
i blast techs and glocks till your heart stops so think again,
LAST BREATH AND THINK AGAIN....N HOW EXACTLY DO THEY RHYME?
DUDE U ALL OVER THE PLACE,U ARE RHYMIN LAST BREATH WITH BLAST TECHS..I DONT LIKE THIS STYLE AT ALL
SO I'M NOT EVEN GONNA BREAK ITT DOWN LINE FOR LINE JUST AT THE END

about approaching me,i will open you up like having surgery,
fuck you for your anti purgery on the stand at my court case,
yo fuck you B fuck your a bitch catching clips you making enemies,
your in the wrong place man about face and run away,
and pray to god that my gun dont spray,
i've got a tombstone ready for your fucking name,
my crews known to use chrome and i dont mean paint,
i'll smash you till your mangled and hang you till you dangle,
by your ankles and make you kiss my waist,
it's a waste of time tryna find your place in the rap game,
so give it up its enough its your fate,
to be a punk mother fucker without heart or brains,
and this victory's mine like your cash and dame,
the passion came to smash ya frame when you were saying,
i havent battled for a year man get off that train,
im quick to cause you pain now leave this battle at 1 and 1
cause you've been slain




Your rhymes make me think, from when your shit is leagues beneath me....
I should shit myself...and use the PC screen as TP
Answer: Skill Question: What’s this ass wipe’s verse lacking of?
Only time you beat and draw blood’s when you’re jacking off
I couldn’t reiterate your wackness with a stutter
You beating me’s like tryna feed Fat Bastard bread n butter
In closing, I’m proposing you refrain from getting cut down
The only time niggas can’t see you is when you Shut Down

...DUDE,SHIT AND JACKIN OFF LINES HAVE BEEN PLAYED FOR EVER!
...MAN UR PUNCHES ARE WEAK BUT FIRST DUDE'S VERSE WAS JUST SO GAY IT MADE ME WANNA KILL MYSLEF...IT DIDNT EVEN SEEM LIKE A BATTLE VERSE AT ALL HE WAS JUST RAMBLIN ON ....SO THAT IS THE ONLY REASON U GETTIN THIS WIN,N NOT CUZ UR VERSE WAS GOOD

VOTE=HAIR BEAR

This was feedback posted for shoosh
 

Why would you copy and paste and leave the IP ?
... Suspicious

Voted For: Hair Bear

vote d.P

Answer: Skill Question: What’s this ass wipe’s verse lacking of?
Only time you beat and draw blood’s when you’re jacking off
ok
Your rhymes make me think, from when your shit is leagues beneath me....
I should shit myself...and use the PC screen as TP
meh ok

^^Only ones I thought stood out for D.P

shoosh your whole verse sucked and didnt rhyme alot

nothing stood out.

v/ D.p

Voted For: Hair Bear

when u sauid wak fuck....I u was probably speak on behalf of both of cuz this battle was borderline shit. D.P. I noticed u change ur name...on behalf of R.V....thank u. I did like the way u started some of ur lines but then u droped it wrong. ur closer was decent but it could always be better. ur open was comical but it wasn't a punch at all. work on it and u'll be str8. Shoosh...get off the gangster shit...aint no thugs on the net dawg. I dont care wat no one says. we do this to get our skillz up and to keep bizzy when bored as fuks. u need to also work on ur structure, flow, metaphors, punches, and every thing else.

v...D.P. aka Hair Bear

could one of u please vote on any one of my battles. Id appreciate it on the real.

hey I already voted on this. so could one of u 2 return the favor wit an honest vote on a battle on my sig.

Voted For: shoosh

u had better rymes the other guys stuff just ryme the same werds at the end

shoosh-better rymes flow and structure

dp u lines were pretty bad could be better , structure needs help
keep on elavating

vote shoosh

Voted For: Hair Bear

easily won this battle with played concepts and big bolding
but the " wack fuck" took it for me