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Nostradamus Mixtape -- From the dawn of time.. (full downloadable cd)
www.soundclick.com/nostradamus1
Word... Wasnt gonna bother posting this here.. Most the tracks were written mid to late 05 so they aint new, Gonna start workin on a second, even better one real soonish.... Got cats handin it round all over the gold coast n all sorts of shit poppin off.. But yeah.. Enjoy cunts.. PS: If you are The Q, Leady or certain other people (you know who you are...) Dont even bother.. I know exactly what your going to say before you even say it :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225502 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225534 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225550 |
I really liek the stuff your doing on here fam its nice
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only thing i can say that i dont like...
is your presence.... i think its good in the song with triple n....but other than that...the other songs seems like your presence isnt as good for some reason...may be vocal levels.....i dunno honestly.... other than that....shit is pretty good |
Vocals prolly needa be louder or something...
Maybe I'll look through it tonight and make some fix ups..... |
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why what would they say nos? |
Listened to all of the songs on this mixtape, and this is what I thought of it:
1) First thing I noticed you added alotta work into this mixtape, I could tell cos you found the time to take out loads of acapellas etc. like the anthony hamilton and placed em right, I really enjoyed that song btw. 2) This is my only bad comment - Youre accent, Is a lil putting off to me as an American however as I kept listening, I would enjoy it much more, so keep doin you 3) Your lyrics are nice, breath needs a lil work, but still decent, ya flow is good I really like.. 4) My Top 3 tracks: What I Live For ft. Anthony Hamilton In My Stride Nothin 2 Lose ft. Triple N 1 |
Nos, wheres your 2 links?
*LOCKED* lmao |
Ughhh....
Fine... I'll give some feed tonight.... -----_________-------- |
Theres 3 for ya........:rolleyes:
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not bad, sometimes your lines end sounding a little awkward/un-comfortable but thats not every line just a couple lines in a few song, other times ur flow sounds slihtly awkward aswell but again only from time to time, yeah i agree that your presence is lacking also i feel your deliveryis lacking animation/variation so your delivery does become abit boring at times, ;yrically its good, some nice multies n rhyme schemes goin on so no majour qualms there, some of ur beats are weak though, but thats a difference in taste thing.. yeh it aint bad, but u are lacking in ur delivery n presence, not bad at all tbh, but at the same time it aint amasing, good luck on the next one.
P.S.. i know your prolly gonna bitch and moan about this crit, im just being real, just cos i dont ride ur jock like most people dont mean im hating, just take what i say and use it to make the next one even better :thumbup: |
No actually I got no problems at all with what you said...
Except for the beats thing.. There mostly problems I already know about and am working to fix by the next cd... So yeah.. |
nice1... the beats thing is just about preference really, they arent wack in the production sense, just some of them arent my thing thats all
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peepin Genis....
damn homie!.... aight check it.... your vocals is right dude... i noticed you got some sort of accent?? but you make that ish work for you.... like you barely notice it.... see if Leady and UNF and other niggas wit accents learned how to rap wit em.... theyd be aight... Actualy your voice is kinda hard... i like the way you approached Genisis... 7.7/10 let me peep one more joint right quick.... hold up... My stride: intro is diffrent... i like it... underground... yea... the vocals could be upped maybe 1.5... for clarity... the bass drowns the vocals a tad.. not much though... good flow so far to the hook... feelin it... on some F the main stream ish... dope.. on the second verse... your pronunciation slacked a lil... and the accent took over in a couple spots... hook... third... haha... Damn... mad words rollin ... lol... dope... this was the hottest verse on here...i like this joint for reals... 9.5/10 |
Good shit man, but yeah, I think you might need to up the vocals a bit.
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first off, nos has a heavy accent, except a few words come through with a yank twang. second off, i KNOW how to rap, simple as that, except a few narrowminded pricks on this forum, aint NOBODY think i cant rap, especially with my accent, infact im allways told i use my accent to my advantage, so little hating wack fucks like you need to check yaself, grow some skill and especially originality and then come and talk, and wheres this diss u said u was doing for me??? lol go figure, boi is shook. |
Checking a track...
The Genesis- Flow is pretty good. It's kind of repetitive, but it's still good. Lyrics are decent...basic at times, but decent. Your voice still reminds me of Tupac's, but your delivery and presence is lacking, and it's noticable. Breath control is noticeably lacking at times as well. Overall...it was better than what I last heard from you. Impressive, but nothing too specail. Just keep working on breath control and delivery, and you will be a recognizable head. Keep it up. |
Thanks 2 everyone leavin feed.
Keep it commin.. |
Props on the mixtape son....why only 7 tracks tho?..shoulda least had 10..a solid double digit number....see u opened wit 10 deadly venoms...an re-recorded it...def an improvement....good track....Genesis was koo..anthony hamilton one...ya vocals was being drowned out by beat IMO...drops in ocean..props on beat choice, I always loved that beat....I got the DL of same beat an wit hook off limewire lol....however vocals was low as well..but liked the fast flow...an all the multies..def enjoyed it...the next track lol u already know what it is lol.....Peace....eh...I've heard so many fucking remixes of this song that I'm jus sick of it...so it kinda hurt my enjoy of this track cuz u picked one of the msot overused beats on mixtapes as of late....but with that aside...feeling the story...but prolly shoulda dubbed ya vocals or at least a echo...aside from that koo...overall its a good drop..katz should feel it.....1
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