.:Live by the gun FT Scott Eti:.
 

http://www.soundclick.com/2kn

Scott first verse, Poetic Artist second

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2708293

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2708297

wtf?!

just played the track and my verse is alot louder than recorded or played in windows media.
If anyone knows why soundclick player plays shit louder let me know. it makes it sound like my verse clipped the entire way though -_-

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shiittt...Dope track, damn..flow was nice..both verses were good, but yeah i agree Poetic Artist's verse is a little bit loud but still nice verse..dope concept n all

overall-9/10...no doubt..

thanx bro uppin.....

uppin................

always loved this beat man !!

quality is decent....yea..is a bit loud..dubs r a touch off...kinda hard to hear what ur saying at times....flow is ehh...emotion is decent...but delevery is not their

can't hear the 2nd dude....


not bad tho

thanx bro for feed!

did you play it in hi-fi?

^^LMAO


Yea...like Hi Fi is gonna fix the flow, delivery, and emotion.


LOL...sorry ass

here you go again dissing me.

bro your openly gay, any insult from you is easily looked past.
idiot.

Yea...but you still suck.


PERIOD.


And I'm a better rapper.

tah tah :nono:

OH...for the record, if you want to fix ur levels, try opening your ears and adjusting them. Then again, if you opened your ears, maybe you wouldn't post this garbage.


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nah,your not better,simply know how to mix better. Huge diffrence.

How does it feel to be out rapped by a "faggot"?


I know...I'd be bitter too.



How many lists are you on?


You're as blind and dumb as leady. You think you're better cuz YOU say so? Okay, then I'M BETTER THAN EMINEM, NAS, and JAY Z!

Wait, someone has to validate it, right?

Guess what, NO ONE, NO ONE on this site has you in their top 10. I'm on MOST top 10s and quite a few top 5s.

STFU and elevate Mr. "No one will help me learn to mix"


u suck...There are 1000000 tutorials...Can u read?

ahh you called me stupid,yet you claim i say im better?






^did I say anywere "Im better", i simply noted mixing skill levels. Oh yeh, why the fuck would I care what anyon eon RV thinks, im simply tryna learn how to mix so I can start putting tracks out in my local (that people are waiting for) not tracks for the net like yourself.
So yeh, I honestly dont give a fuck about impressing anyone on the net, im simply tryna learn so i can continue making offline moves.
Im not tryna master mixing to impress RV, im making music for me.

saying "ur not better" is the same as "im better than u"...So, save the bull spit...Of course you should THINK you're better than every other emcee. But, realistically analyze where your skills are and someone elses. Cho basically said everything needed work. Then, your question was, "Did you listen in Hi Fi?"

^Bro...Hi-fi won't fix any of the things he said were wrong.

bro,cho was talking about scott's verse, he said he didnt hear mine, hence why I asked him if he played it in hi-fi,cause if my tracks arent played hi-fi,you cant hear vocals. Then your ignorant face came in running your mouth making yourself look stupid.
get the fuck out of here.

And still you made a thread in the LL when there's an audio assistance section.



good bye



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so what? a thread needing help. You make at least 5 threads a day about shit that has nothing to do hip hop let alone rap.
But
wait
your the one who wants this site to be "all about rap" arent you.
fuck up out of here.

Yea

but

I know how to mix too.



Good night.

you are childish bro, raise up.

Mhmm.. I know this beat.. Just cant put my finger on who dropped on it first...

First verse: Flow needs to be a bit more consistant.. Beat drowns out ya vocals at some points, did you do dynamics processing? Maybe try to amp it up with a hard limiter tool bro... Same as I'm about to tell Ysdat bro, try and smooth out ya vocals a bit.. You sound almost like ya trying to hard...

Second verse: Better than I heard you drop on ya last shit.. I think you've outgrown ya mic man.. You should look at trynna get a shure58 or something that will allow you to open up your vocal range a bit more... You should look at the way your delivering your verse when you rap, try to cool it down a bit and give your voice a more smooth and less angry sound to it...

Third verse ????... I recon there should of been one... and a hook to lead out on.. Kinda finished a bit weird...

But its cool...
Wasnt a bad track.. Jus could do with a bit of improvement on the production and delivery.

thanks bro..



^thast the mic im running thru a pre amp, i was told it should be high quality.

i think my main problem is mixing, i had it locked with a low quality mic,but with pre amp and mic,its all new to me. So its a learning curve,which is cool.

I have a really versitile flow, just gotta sort the mic out first so I can relax a bit more.

thanks again.

Just remember to always use your own EQ settings.. NEVER use pre-sets...

Mess around with that shit untill you got ya stuff sounding exactly how you want it..........

btw-- rtf on the new track I posted if you get the chance...

yeh, i been told that no preset wil ever match my sound. Its all about personal settings in the end.

thanx for the beef n no feed :\