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EyeDentdy vs Castro
Battle Rules:
10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-06-06 at 08:14 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
Castro has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-06 08:15 PM.
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EyeDentdy has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-06 01:09 PM.
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u been waiting to battle me ...fuck it...I dont mind the facts...
cuz Im so raw...this nigga castro....had to hide his stats... its T.O.N. all day...yeah buddy...right on... but uh...u only 15 dawg....so go get a permission slip befor u sighn on... cuz wat kind of nigga request 2880 minutes after check just to write his raps? the type of nigga whose aveture looks like he trying to fight off rats... cuz "up till this point" I aint know who the fuck you was... till I heard u need to have AIM sex just to get ur dick sucked.... dawg lol...u broke up wit a girl that u aint never even met... but u only 15 though...so...its ok, since u aint hit puberty yet... so go outside and get some sun...today...leave the net early.... cuz 3698 post on a website really just can't be healthy... yeah I did my home work on you dawg. u kind of sick homie. Explenation... 1. he hid all his stats-where he from and records 2.I dont know if any one can see it but it says T.O.N. all day bellow his name 3. this kids only 15 4. he put down 2880 minutes just to drop a verse. 5.his av really does look like its trying to fight off rats.lol 6.Up till this point is a open mic shit he wrote. 7.he actually posted some shit with him trying to have Aim sex with some girl who apperantly did'nt want to. 8.he also broke up wit her in the aim shit which is retarted. 9.last but not least...3698 post on any website followed by a 4.74 posts per day ratio really isn't healthy at all. |
I’m so sick, straight ill, Doc said my sickness was more than contagious
Makin him have “EyeDentdy” crisis like a mentally retarded patient Talk about patient, shit I’m the one that was patience You was probably prewritin so much wit all the time you was wastin You’s a butt ass nigga all you fuckin do is duck Shit I’m a bout to just tell you just battle me and shut the fuck up You’s a fake ass nigga, claimin you born in the Bronx around drugs and cops * Closest you ever been near drugs and cops was wit ya moms and pops Cuz ya mom’s a crack head ho and ya dad’s a straight up pig You and the life you live is the same both a straight up bitch Tell you the truth you aint street, come in my hood and get knocked down You’s probably some fat fuck pot head on the comp. straight on “lock” down ** * Read his biography of his profile ** his avatar |
lol i'm a give it up to you but it was computer aim shit lol.w/e upin.
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Voted For: Castro
aiight I would usualy do the whole long ass thing but uhh. Fuck it. Overall I think Castro took this because his verse was easier to read, had better flow and slightly better consistency. Though Eye had better punches, Cas's were thruout his verse. I just felt that overall his structure and flow overmatched Eye. |
ight bet 1-0.....
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Voted For: Castro
Castro - Ya verse wasn't too impressive. You had good structure bat that's about it. I didn't see any multi's and not even 1 good punch. The opener was iight but the rest of the verse was weak. Up your vocab. and keep elevatin EyeDentdy - I dunno bout your verse either. Your punches hit a little better than castro's but they still weren't that great. As far as multi's, you didn't have em either. Your closer was weak, should of ended on a stronger note. It didn't really rhyme. Early and Healthy? But i'm gonna give tha vot to you cuz your verse was just a little bit better. Booth of ya'll keep elevatin, good battle. Both of ya'll return tha favor thanx Me vs. David Lama Vote switched |
^^^ Yo try to get that changed i accidently posted for Castro instead of Eye my bad peeps.
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just so u'd know. befor I spit he had his stats hiden and his name and other sht was diff.
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Voted For: Castro
Didnt really anjoy this battle. ... But Castro gets my vote. He had more punches,it flowed better,and 'some' of his shit was original. And im not a big fan of people who write explanations after the verse,even though this aint a real head 2 head battle,if ya'll ever do try to battle somewhere off the net,you dont get a 3min explanation time after the battle. So try to keep it as realistic as possible. |
thats a retarted vote. I only explained it all becouse some people vote on personals that have actuall facts behind them. every thing I say on my verse has some sort of truth behind it. I could really care less wat ur a fan of. just try to explain a lil better next time. if u gotta battle u'd like me to vote on...just drop a link.
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Voted For: Castro
very weak battle from both sides. EyeDentdy; u been waiting to battle me ...fuck it...I dont mind the facts... cuz Im so raw...this nigga castro....had to hide his stats... Very weak opener, not really a punch anywere in sight. Its a personal,but its weak bro. its T.O.N. all day...yeah buddy...right on... but uh...u only 15 dawg....so go get a permission slip befor u sighn on... you cant spell. cuz wat kind of nigga request 2880 minutes after check just to write his raps? the type of nigga whose aveture looks like he trying to fight off rats... slight personal again, and again cant spell. cuz "up till this point" I aint know who the fuck you was... till I heard u need to have AIM sex just to get ur dick sucked.... Weak, not even a punch. dawg lol...u broke up wit a girl that u aint never even met... but u only 15 though...so...its ok, since u aint hit puberty yet... meh, better than other attempts at punches but nothing great.\ so go outside and get some sun...today...leave the net early.... cuz 3698 post on a website really just can't be healthy... didnt rhyme,weak closer. didnt help your verse Castro; I’m so sick, straight ill, Doc said my sickness was more than contagious Makin him have “EyeDentdy” crisis like a mentally retarded patient decent opener. Good play on his name. Talk about patient, shit I’m the one that was patience You was probably prewritin so much wit all the time you was wastin Ok attempt at wordplay, but could of [played it out a bit better. You’s a butt ass nigga all you fuckin do is duck Shit I’m a bout to just tell you just battle me and shut the fuck up didnt really get this bar, seen as he was the one who made the thread.lol You’s a fake ass nigga, claimin you born in the Bronx around drugs and cops * Closest you ever been near drugs and cops was wit ya moms and pops meh, this is weak. Cuz ya mom’s a crack head ho and ya dad’s a straight up pig You and the life you live is the same both a straight up bitch Tell you the truth you aint street, come in my hood and get knocked down You’s probably some fat fuck pot head on the comp. straight on “lock” down ** these four bars didnt end your verse well. but seen as you opponent dropped weak. you just scrapped through. |
This was feedback posted for EyeDentdy
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are u for real? 1 - 3. and the verses aint wak either. I dont spell check shit...are u actually taking points for that? be real in this shit. every battle ya'll vote on... u try and make it sound like u the illest mu fuckas on the net by saying that every things wak and shit. if the battles are so wak...dont vote.
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Voted For: EyeDentdy
vote: eye more creative castro you need to elevate likes the verses but i think eye came a little bit harder |
hit my battles up you dont gotta vote jus check em out
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This was feedback posted for EyeDentdy
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why bother dawg. my verse dont make much sence since u changed ur av man. lol. fuck it. uppin for this old ass shit.
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Voted For: EyeDentdy
I think Castro's verse was better here....His verse had harder punches and flowed well so it was able to read....wordplay was good and your verse needed less explaining. |
Voted For: EyeDentdy
aiight nice battle: opener: Word metas: none punches:tie creativity:word, cus he went indepth to git his point across personals:neither were very good, but word took this as well, seeing as he did his research close: word-cux it was hot, cast-man dis a battle you were cool at first but i lost instrest torwards the end i almost did'nt read it(no hate) overall: word came out hot v/words ahgod ps: rtf/ and im turning 16 on the 30 niggah |
where i wrote "word"
i meant EyeDentdy mah bad im tripping hella hard |
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