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Tempa vs David Lama
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10 lines due in 10 minutes check in ASAP g/l No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 04-07-06 at 02:50 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Tempa has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 02:22 AM.
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David Lama has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 02:24 AM.
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I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”… My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you… If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude… Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts… You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss… Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick… You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”… Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog… But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off. |
I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel |
Voted For: David Lama
yo this was good battle for a short lil time to drop. Tempa and lama both came good on this so its kind of hard to decide. U both were on point with structure, flow, punches, and personals. Im giving this one to lama though cuz I felt like his punches were a lil more effective. some lines had me laughin like a mu too. good shit though. |
good looks.. 1-0
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sorry for freeposting but id appriciated it if you would leave an honest vote in atleast 1 of the battles in my sig
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Voted For: David Lama
tee hee it seems like you really are the dude from RM, good drop Vote removed |
awwwwwww, fuck, my bad, meant to leave feedback. =/
Holler @ strobe |
yea thats me.
I doubt you'll meet many people named David Lama in your lifetime, let alone the net lol. its my real name by the way. |
Why the hell did you come to RV then? Most of these nigez is gobbage.
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when I'm bored I battle at random sites. I like having a couple quick battles a day or every now and then
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Voted For: David Lama
I got this. I don’t care what shorty say cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather ALL NICE VS PLAYED WORDPLAY AND STRUCTURE. EAsy vote. V./ lama |
Voted For: Tempa
I got this. I don’t care what shorty say cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days aight he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs decent name-play my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at nah, fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather eeeeh ok i guess we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel nah, weak ending I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”… My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”… aight My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you… If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude… nah Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts… You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss… eeeh ok Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick… You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”… decent Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog… But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off ok ending decent battle but i think temp just edge it out bearly |
This was feedback posted for David Lama
............................checkin the polls David........
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word. up for votes ..................................................
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Voted For: David Lama
I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”… My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”… played n weak wordplay My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you… If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude… no Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts… You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss… eh Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick… You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”… ok Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog… But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off. no I got this. I don’t care what shorty say cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days eh he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs ok my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at eh fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather ok we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel eh Lama had two ok bars, Tempa had one. This wasn't a great battle but Lama got this by one bar. v/ David Lama |
Uppin for votes.....................................
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This was feedback posted for David Lama
Lmao @ all nameplays owning this battle.
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Voted For: David Lama
Lama I got this. I don’t care what shorty say cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days nice opener he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs ok nameplay my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at heh, cool fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather decent nameplay again we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel good closer Tempa: I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”… My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”… no, bad opener My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you… If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude… wack.. Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts… You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss… no punch Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick… You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”… wording is bad, you cant expect to say whole bunch of shit that somewhat relates and think its a well-worded punch Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog… But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off. weak.. V-Lama, for obvious reasons |
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come on people.................................................... ...............
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The pain the agony..lol get it over with lol. Uppin.
Fuck text lol...*Retires the Pad and opens cool edit* Ahhh, much better. |
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Temp, if your happy to close it just post the link in battle closings and it will be closed early.
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Voted For: David Lama
I got this. I don’t care what shorty say cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days EHH ALRIGHT he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs LOL my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at AIGHT fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather LOL we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel ...NOT FEELIN IT I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”… My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”… WAAAACK My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you… If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude… DEAR GOD...DUDE,STOP THE QUOTES IMMEDIATE,ITS FUCKIN GAY N UR WORDPLAY? IS FUCKIN GARBAGE Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts… You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss… SUCKS Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick… You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”… WACK Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog… But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off. ....ALL IT DID WAS RHYME,THERE IS NO PUNCH WITHOUT FURTHER EXPLANATION VOTE=DAVID LAMA |
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