Mad Skillz vs David Lama
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-10-06 at 11:31 PM

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Mad Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 11:31 PM.

David Lama has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 11:32 PM.

I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does

got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1

hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2

ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3

got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4

u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat

iight any1 vote plz dis is a hot battle...........

iight sum1 vote cuz we styll uppin dis battle yo....

Voted For: Mad Skillz

both of ya'll garbage, i meant u got nursery rhymes like camron. mad skillz u got with a few of them lines. i see ur mad, but your skills are invisible

haha ayo vince lets battle den dont hate cuz i voted 4 david in ur battle wit him lol fukin bitch....

This was feedback posted for Mad Skillz
 

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Voted For: David Lama

I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
Decent enough. .
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
Alright. .
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
Ehh. . alright I guess. .
you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
Game over. . this was dope.
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does
Decent. .

vs.

got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1
Nope. .
hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2
What the hell?. . Nah, man. .
ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3
Just a statment. . that sucks. .
got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4
For your verse. . this was good. . in anybody elses verse. . this would suck.[]/b]
u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
[b]His name isn't Jersey though?. . :wtf:
~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat
Not a punch. .

Vote - Lam-face. . easily. .

iight 1-1 thanx 4 da votes fellaz styll uppin dis.....

iight man still uppin dis battle yo..................

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Voted For: David Lama

I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
STRAIGHT
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
EHHH
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
WEAK,RHYMES BUT NO PUNCH

you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
NOT FEELIN IT

I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does
DIDNT SEE ANYTHING FUNNY HERE



got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1
EHH OK AT BEST

hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2
NOT FEELIN IT

ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3
NOT BAD

got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4
NOT BAD

u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
EHH I'VE HEARD MANY VARIATIONS OF THIS..SO ITS PLAYED

~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat
WEAK


FIRST DUDE,I'VE SEEN U COME HARDER I THINK U WERENT TRYIN VERY HARD N KIND OF UNDERESTIMATED UR OPPONENT

2ND DUDE,PLEAE I BEG OF U,STOP USIN THOSE SQUIGGLY LINES FOR THE LOVE OF JESUS,
ITS SO FUCKIN ANNOYIN NOONE USES THAT ANYMORE,IT DOESNT IN ANY WAY HYPE UP UR VERSE,IF ANYTHING,IT TAKES AWAY FROM IT....STOP USING IT

SEEN A FEW OK PUNCHES NOTHING THAT BLEW ME AWAY BUT I THINK U CAME HARDER IN THIS BATTLE SO

VOTE=MAD SKILLZ

shit i posted in the wrong box,anyway get that fixed yall holla

vooooooooooooooote

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Voted For: David Lama

I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does

vs.

nothing

v/DL

thanks man.

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Voted For: David Lama

David Lama
I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
Decent, not that original.
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
Eh, not feeling this one.
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
Wording could have been better, decent.
you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
Haha pretty good punch.
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does
Nice closer.

Overall, this verse is solid. Some punches could have been worded better to intensify the punch, but better then most of the battles I read. Just work on wittier wordplay.

Mad Skillz
got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1
Bad punch
hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2
Bad punch.
ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3
Bad punch.
got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4
Bad wording and punch.
u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat
Self glorification and bad punch.

Overall, you really didn't have any personals or punches in there. You really need to work on your concepts, cuz your verse really didn't have anything to mention.

v- David

^thanks man. good looks

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Voted For: Mad Skillz


I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
ok.......
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
no......

Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
hell no.........

you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
meh
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does
blah...

overall this was preety weak.



got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1
meh..........
hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2
lol.......

ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3
huh?
got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4
no.............
u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat
no......
overall this was weak.....

mad gets my vote just.....

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Voted For: David Lama

ok ok ok where to begin

David Lama
Your verse i was feeling it you had good flow punches and personals on him. you kept my attetion throughout the whole verse.

Best bar
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does

Mad Skillz

ok you need to evelate son you had a few good punches but thay didnt all conect tro give that final Knock out blow. and when your only doing 10 lines you need to get it crackin and come out swing and not stop. but overall the verse waS FAIR .


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