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"Hetero-Phobia"...new dopeness from ya boy...pls peep
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^^Click on "Hetero-Phobia" Beat: Not sure who produced...Thank to Cho for finding it for me Hook: Written and performed by Q Verses: 1, 2, 3, Q Intro: A Preacher is denouncing gays from the biblical book of Leviticus while the choir eggs him on with a rendition of "Amen". Then, the message is reversed and the first verse kicks in. Concept: I saw a movie called "Almost Normal" where homosexuality was the "norm" and heterosexuality was unaccepted. It inspired me to tackle that theme as a song. I recognize that not all straight people are homophobes, but I took the extreme on this song and made gay people heterophobes to make the bigotry more noticeable. Outro: The straight character in the story, Kyle, is being harassed at the prom. Holla atcha boy 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226525 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226519 checked |
Listenin' dayumm...tha intro is real talk, thats very clever...lyrics are tha best ive heard from you, flow is very good, dayum Im realy lovin' this song....i respect you fo makin this song nigga...im likin da story your makin in da 2nd verse lol makes people think..I really enjoyed how you flipped the story..damn this is da best song rv has had...easily...i really respect u fo this song..hook is good too...quality too is good...3rd verse is good...like tha story again...n how u flipped it damn i really like this song...kyle came with a chick..fuckin wrong haha this is so real...this is summin special...and outro is real too i feel this all tha way thru...my first ever but:
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lol, love tha beat man
good approach...contraversial shit here....like the vocals u laid on the hook...nice lil story line n shit...will proly make a few heads think bout some shit...concept n all was good..don't b tryna straight bash me tho !! |
This shit is hot man.....definitely. Hook is nice, wasn't feeling it that much the first time I heard the hook, but then it grew on me :D
This track bangs man....everything from the flow to the delivery to the lyrics....solid :thumbup:™ |
this is a hot as track im lovin it the very good story it fits your voice perfectly
i give it a 10 out of 10 on creativity the lyrics i give you 9.5 great lyrics the theme was just increadible you are being so original i love that over all i give you a 9.7/10 your i like how you where straight forward with your lyrics |
yeah most def. a dope track dog... i am a breeder... so what ... anyway ...theres not much i can tell you to do about your quality except go to a studio.. but how you flipped the script and its as if the norms of society are reversed is the sickness. the story is good too... thanks for shoutin me out in the song too... i'll be a breeder .. as soon as some bitch gets naked around here.. damn ... where all the hoes at... i'm right here with some dick for you come and get it bitches... (women only) not you bitch ass rappers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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beat fits perfect with your words...your flow is on point...voice and emotion stays through out the song...clear message, lyrics were ridiculous....def one of the best on Rv... 10/10.....
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shits dope loc. shits deep, makes u think. good lyrics, dope beat. nuthin wrong wif it. lmao @ my short ass feedback :S but i got nuthin bad 2 say :cool: so werd
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man this here should be song of the week, hall of fame, or whatever the hell man...most innovative track I've ever heard here or anywhere else online, PERIOD...I don't really do this cuz I never think about but I'm voTing this "hot" on your paGe cuz this is definetly a 10/10 beat's tyte, flow and lyrics are sikk...definetly a track that makes you think and to me THAT is the mark of a track that's good on a creative level and that's what we need much more of |
ight listenin..
flow-5/5 nice shit on beat original presence-5/5 delivery-5/5 lyrics-5/5 real talk i was thinkin about shit like this the other day..good concept not too much to say im really feelin this song real talk overall 4.9/5 |
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incredibly creative a unique approach from the common threads being soen in the rap game glad you using ya noggin and doin you thats when ya tracks shyne the most completely different aspect from a different often unheard side of things nice job here!
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Hmmm wow..actually is the best i've heard from you..the quality seems most clear and your delivery is at its best and able to hear every lyric u spit. all ya verses were good ...my favorite was the second tho...lol@the chorus..str8 bashing.. meaning? hetero bashing? lol. but this shit is hott on real ...this is indeed new dopeness..
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Aight
Intros Koo,Your Flows Nice,Especially On The 2nd Verse.Felt It mostly.Nice Story,You Presented Yourself With Your Delivery N Presence N Emotion Just Right,Your Voice Fits This Track Perfect.Good Lyrics,Real Deep Shit.Your Qualitys Koo Obviously.But This Proly Your Best Track,I Liked 2nd Verse Best.Jus Felt It Stoodf Out Overall: 9/10 Good Shit |
^^^^aiight no doubt
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damn....this shit is so damn real man... im really feeling this man ahahah i dont even know what to say....except fuck the haters homie
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pushing the envelope on this one...lol... concept is crazy.... controversial... needed in some ways.... thought provoking.... beat is decent... verses were kool... quality is what it is...lol... (still mad i can't get my mic yet)... most creative topic i've seen thus far... like how ya think outside the box and shyt... ya definitely reached a new level with this one... werd... pure hip-hop rigt there... take notes (gangsta rappers... bling bling artists... laffy taffy nursery rappers... and straight up garbage emcees....lmao... ya time in the game is up... belleee dat!!!)
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well...that's having faith in me...haaa...preciate it :thumbup: |
listening:...mic sounds a tad muffled...i unno if it's the beat playin up...verse in and ye it's cleared up...nice topic...role reversal...flow is on point rhyme scheme is decent...hooks cool...not overly feelin the beat purely coz it sounds so muffled...but it does fit wit the topic...in a way...spittin this i can understand why gay people get so upset...i mean listening to the topic in a way demonstrates your own frustration through role reversal...funnily enough it reminds me of sliders...but ye good track Q keep droppin
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Listening...
Beat's pretty good. Flow is on point...concept is original as fuck. Lyrics get the point across. Flips the homophobe thing right around. I didn't think the hook was too fitting, but I suppose other rappers have said "Bash faggots" and shit like that. The only complaint I have is that the delivery didn't seem to fit in some places. But overall, this is a very solid track. Concept alone makes this a great track. Keep it up. |
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wow this was unique, ive never heard ne thign like this, defintly good on the lyrical side, nice flow and everything...nuthin to really complain about, nice piece here definitely
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this was a baller track, i must say........ it was tight as hell..... i like the idea of the reverse in the beginnin
the hook wasnt that good wen i first heard it..... but it got alot better the second time.... it was def. the most original track i have heard on RV. Period. lmao it had that shock factor in it, too....... this is sum shit u should really be proud of dude..... i heard u sed u were alil depressed after makin the track, but this shit was seriously ill....... i felt all u were sayin even tho im a proud hetero, lol...... it made me think about how stupid it is to gay bash........ i mean, i dont do it..... but i usually felt like "let people feel the way they wanna feel" wen it came to people who hated gay people...... this shit is cool dude, pc -One |
HOOOKKKKK WAS FUCKIN DOPE....
really like that part verses where q...really couldnt expect any less but a good flow and good lyrics...i dont know but everyone else but this cat can tell a story like slick rick... as the straightest mofucka you ever gonna see.. this track was dope...i geuss i am not really focusing on the concept of the song.. just the overall quality of it...and the verses hook intro outo beat you scored big... dope song |
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haaa...well, preciate it 1 |
this is dope, nice fo real, message is dope, lyrics ar dope, flow is dope, shyt is dope overall, i love the beat, i love the intro, i love this track, this goes on the top 100 for my ipod *has thousands of songs* this is the type of song that should have a video
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more of religious impact...i got to respect your perspective.....
flow is nice it seems like your vocals are little loud..lol or is it my new headphone... but flow was good i cant say it was butter cuz i heard better trackz but i think in this track u got the message across cuz every line was focused on it...lol chorus am feelin it...i told u ama show some love my nig. |
^^This really wasn't intented to be aimed at any religion. So, I'm not sure what you mean there.
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idk if im going to feel this because gospel isnt my thing but its ok did a good job with it
wondering what that part says backwards? hook was cool lyrics throughout i loved them i didnt think i was going to feel this in the begginning but you told a pretty good story something that i might download |
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lol...this isn't a gospel song... Preciate the feed though 1 |
yeah this track is aiight..much better then i heard from you..you've improved...im feelin the quality...this track is pretty sick famz
7/0 sick shit |
^^man...dats wassup
u need to peep more! haa...I'll RTF asap 1 |
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