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Technical 04-20-06 10:00 PM

§ick§eed vs Technical
 
Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-21-06 at 10:00 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Technical 04-21-06 05:31 PM

c'mon nigga..check the fuck in..got me wastin credits..check in..then I'll check in

System 04-21-06 08:11 PM

§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-06 08:11 PM.

§ick§eed 04-21-06 08:12 PM

calm da fuck down lil nigga.................get a life then come scream at me, worried bout wastin credits lmao breathe dunn

Technical 04-21-06 08:40 PM

lol..I just posted that bcuz I know you'll respond when u saw that I dropped a post..lol..aite lets get to this ish..

System 04-21-06 08:41 PM

Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-06 08:41 PM.

§ick§eed 04-21-06 09:13 PM

Ite My Fault Homie..................LOL..................Ima Drop Lata 2nite

§ick§eed 04-21-06 10:11 PM


Hurting Feeling§ 1o1

Suffer From Cock Strains, Distrout Name...Cuz Technically, Ya Not FAME
Voicebox Came, At The "CRACK Of Dawn"...And Its Presently HIDE"ING"!! *
No Sound Erupts From Ya Still, I Could Kill...U Verbally W/O Saliva Or Grill
Ya Heat Dyin So Chill, I Knoe "FOUL-CAN"not Provide W/O "Blowin On Bill" **
Textual Performance Far From "Tom".....Tho We Technically "Cruise-In"
Past Ya BARRYMORE Depictions Of "Rose-Art" & Onli Flowers Is "Drew-In" ***
Physically Barry Dis Dude, In His Own Morality, Substantially Wreckin-In
& Deafening, I'm ALADDIN....Ur Da "Genie-u§"....3rd Wish?? I Fuckin Win! ****

Onli Reason U've Beaten So Many Rapverse Rookies<--Exactly, Ya Cheatin
KO? Arms High...Thats Ur Reachin, Da "[T]echs [L]eft [C]orpsed...............
.............................................& Dats Death, "Metaphorically Creepin"!! *****

Break-Down
*crack is ass, ass is called "hide"...dawn signals da end
**birds have bills, foulcan=bird...wen u "foul" da ref "blows" da whistle
***drew barrymore
****if hes da genie, i'm aladdin...i get 3 wishes, my 3rd wish is 2 win...he has no choice but 2 grant it lol
*****TLC's song "creep", afta he loses dis battle he'll be "corpsed"...but he dead be4 the battles even over

Technical 04-21-06 11:13 PM

You a Heavyweight here? man like CONGRESS CREMATORS i BURN RANKS..
yall aint gon see a SICK SEED like I OWNED A DISEASE FREE SPERM BANK!!..
you good? dats like TEMPER TANTRUMS EXPOSED cuz that's an OUT-RAGE..
him elite? he couldn't make TOP 8 DISCUSSIONS on a MYSPACE PAGE!!..
say you soul clappin, but RELAYIN WITH SCALES only way u RUN WIF POUNDS..
Sick mainstream? even in PLANT GROWTH, SEED IS UNDER-GROUND!!..
you suck in text, only time u got HARD LINES is if I put ur BRAIN ON THE CURB..
blow up? only time SEED LEFT THE GROUND, is when peeps is FEEDIN THEY BIRDS!!..
you facin Technical? it's like GIVIN A HYPOTHESIS cuz a W for u is INPROBABLE..
watch me MAN-HANDLE SICK like an ALL MALE RESIDENT HOSPITAL!!..

Golden shellz 04-22-06 12:04 AM

Voted For: Technical

My vote goes to Tech in this one

Pretty good battle none the less

Technical___
His verse flowed really well. He had more hard hittin punches than Sick. Better personals aimed directly toward him, and understandable.

SickSeed___
Good verse also.You really tried to get at Tech i can tell.
Not really as many punches as Tech tho. Although you did add a few personals to liven the verse up. Your structure wasnt as good either.

Overall vote- Technical

§ick§eed 04-22-06 10:15 AM

I Checked Ya Style...........You've Neva Spit This Way Before But Wateva............I'll Get You Back :)

Technical 04-22-06 01:07 PM

^ Glad to see you doin your research on the kid..lol..nah but I been away from RV for like 7 months man..shit happens..uppin for more votes..

Ryan Hughes 04-22-06 01:44 PM

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 
Checkin the Polls....................................

In-Vision 04-22-06 02:54 PM

Voted For: Technical

vote goes to technical for the first bar, and first bar of his verse alone......sick seed had absolutely nothing...and technical had one bar....

god damn the sites quality has gone down

Technical 04-23-06 01:48 PM

^ ummm wateva man..thanks for voting...upping...............

§ick§eed 04-23-06 01:57 PM

Na Its Not Called Research, Its Called........Lookin 4 Personals But Its Wateva, I Havent Gotten Ah Battle On Here In How Long........Rusty Shit


UPPIN

Raw Proof 04-24-06 01:44 PM

This was feedback posted for Technical
 
Im giving this one to Tech cuz sick didn't really make sense on his verse. honestly I didn't even want to read it all. he tried his shot at maltis and it just back fired cuz he didn't really throw in no punch or personals to it. Tech used a lot of wordplay and personals although I.
didn't like his format to much at times. some times his line were a bit too long but over all he got this in all aspects of the battle. I dont have 100 post yet so I cant vote yet

Technical 04-24-06 09:07 PM

Dam I shoulda put the voting ish at 20 posts..lol..but yo c'mon are you shittin me? do yall guys ever vote..UPPIN

The Creator 05-10-06 05:39 PM

Voted For: Technical

SickSeed
Suffer From Cock Strains, Distrout Name...Cuz Technically, Ya Not FAME
Voicebox Came, At The "CRACK Of Dawn"...And Its Presently HIDE"ING"!! *
^wak
No Sound Erupts From Ya Still, I Could Kill...U Verbally W/O Saliva Or Grill
Ya Heat Dyin So Chill, I Knoe "FOUL-CAN"not Provide W/O "Blowin On Bill" **
attempt but still wak
Textual Performance Far From "Tom".....Tho We Technically "Cruise-In"
Past Ya BARRYMORE Depictions Of "Rose-Art" & Onli Flowers Is "Drew-In" ***
^wat the fuck? super duper wak
Physically Barry Dis Dude, In His Own Morality, Substantially Wreckin-In
& Deafening, I'm ALADDIN....Ur Da "Genie-u§"....3rd Wish?? I Fuckin Win! ****
^just cuz the word might sound like a multi..dont mean its good for the verse. u can actually lose point for wak shit..

Onli Reason U've Beaten So Many Rapverse Rookies<--Exactly, Ya Cheatin
KO? Arms High...Thats Ur Reachin, Da "[T]echs [L]eft [C]orpsed...............
.............................................& Dats Death, "Metaphorically Creepin"!! *****
^this shit is too long to be so wak at the end.

Technical
You a Heavyweight here? man like CONGRESS CREMATORS i BURN RANKS..
yall aint gon see a SICK SEED like I OWNED A DISEASE FREE SPERM BANK!!..
^first lines wak...2nd picked it up.
you good? dats like TEMPER TANTRUMS EXPOSED cuz that's an OUT-RAGE..
him elite? he couldn't make TOP 8 DISCUSSIONS on a MYSPACE PAGE!!..
no....
say you soul clappin, but RELAYIN WITH SCALES only way u RUN WIF POUNDS..
Sick mainstream? even in PLANT GROWTH, SEED IS UNDER-GROUND!!..
played
you suck in text, only time u got HARD LINES is if I put ur BRAIN ON THE CURB..
blow up? only time SEED LEFT THE GROUND, is when peeps is FEEDIN THEY BIRDS!!..
^ why do ur lines start wit a questions? thats played my the 2nd bar.
you facin Technical? it's like GIVIN A HYPOTHESIS cuz a W for u is INPROBABLE..
watch me MAN-HANDLE SICK like an ALL MALE RESIDENT HOSPITAL!!..
Wak

Technical gets this cuz he tried in this battle and actually put something down. I already explained wat was wrong wit it.

V/ Tech

please return the favor wit an honest vote in a battle in my sig

O//^\\EGA 07-19-07 04:15 PM

Voted For: Technical

hands down like a push up......Tech got this.... delivery and concepts where more clear to understand, personals.... heh forget about it..... tech got it, although they were nameplays i mean they were still personals..... he hit much harder

structure id say was tie and flow id say the same..... wordplay def goes to tech as well..... dude is pretty damn skilled ill give me that.... sick was coo but alot of his delivery and concepts were a lil complexed than needed if u gotta explain ur punches and personals u must do it at a minimum, and i mean that in a way where u gotta state some facts in the beginnin statin some history about ur opponent..... u shouldnt have to explain ur punches at all if ud deliver em right and simple.....but effective

V- Tech.....hit harder.....more direct......more personal.... more enjoyable

JWILD 07-21-07 10:09 AM

This was feedback posted for Technical
 
Straight up if I could vote I would vote for technical for 2 main reasons...first I couldn't follow sickseed's punchlines...probably my bad but hey I don't have a vote yet so ya know still elevatin in here...second Technical totally killed it with the mainstream/seed/underground punchline.

M&rk 07-22-07 02:59 AM

Voted For: Technical

you suck in text, only time u got HARD LINES is if I put ur BRAIN ON THE CURB..
blow up? only time SEED LEFT THE GROUND, is when peeps is FEEDIN THEY BIRDS!!..
vs.
nothin

ya'll got crazy styles. ya'll need to read some better battles and learn how to word your shit better. like with out usin "like" or question marks or capitalizing your shit. ya'll got the wordplay down u just gotta learn how to word it clearer


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