The World Is A Ghetto (ORIGINAL BEAT)
 

this track was produced by my home boy chef...beat is ill as fuck...on the soundclick page i'll rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2727592
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226913

uppin..........

......................

still no feed.....

hmmm... I took a listen to it... not big on critiquing audio...

but your quality was a turn off to me... but your words were iight... feeling ya on it...

Beat is iight...

Real track... 6/10

finally some feed....appreciate it

still uppin for some feed

make you a deal, peep my song and ill RTF on yours haha

uppin..........

how tacky is that...

BRO...don't fall for it..He doesn't return FEED, esp. if he disagrees with it.




neway...I'll drop feed on this in a few.





1

yea i don't play that shit...uppin

uppin..........

The World...


Vocals need to be EQ'ed better...

Love the beat...kinda porn sounding...but still good

flow is on beat...but you could have ridden it better

lyrics aren't bad

I like the message in spots

not a bad track...just smooth the flow out and work on vocal quality



1

right on for the feed....i've tried messin with the eq but i'm ignorant when it comes to it...uppin for more

yo this beat really sounds like some late 80's porno shit..lol

listenin
flow was cool it can use some work that only comes wit practice
lyrics were deep im feelin em i think if you wanna get technical you could use work on metaphors and bar transition but look at alot of peeps who dont have complex lyrics but still are good. i like it like this
presence was there could use some work on emotion this was a really emotional track that should come off in your voice
delivery same as presence i thnk wit some practice you could be really good

love the topic my only advice is to practice and maybe change beat sounds too much like porno music but its all good

keep spittin

i guess you could say it sounds like a porno type beat with the guitar in there...i wasn't thinkin that when i first heard it but oh well lol...thanks for the feed

uppin this.....

damn still uppin

jesus slow feed these days

STILL uppin....