Scott Eti Vs Technical Vs Golden Shellz
 

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"Sea Shellz & Hand Technics Diss"

something real quick cuz i need to write and recordin about 2hours! n i dont even know who these 2 are! sori bros!

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Lets get these votes in

Golden Shellz....
first of all steve nash is from canada you retard. flow isn't very good at all, you didn't it in a bunch of different drops, and sometimes thats okay but not here, it shows...quality is pretty good. vocals too loud.
disses aren't very good, 'around as many rings as patrick ewing', seriously? that's played like a m.jackson line...and why are you talking about people writting their rhymes for this when obviously everyone writes it down, including you. can't you flow more then one bar at a time...seriously this is annoying to me. embarassing game was the only line that was okay. you sound fat which is okay, but just throwing it out there...
flow. 6
punches. 2(i think you're kinda slow now from hearing this)
delivery.5
beat choice. 4
extras. 3
total. 20

Technical....
why talking in the background, either you are or someone else is, you're doubles are off time for a bit. too much reverb or echo in it, just doesn't make me happy, too low key, no emotion, a battle record punch, booo to you, why so many uk jokes that don't make sense, why is he bad just because he's from uk? 2 min and 2 seconds...bad boy...jokes...yeah. some pretty decent punches though. you could do better.
flow. 4
punches. 6
delivery. 4
beat choice. 3 i hate that beat, too busy, and the loop is way to short that it gets annoying.
extras. 4.
total 21

eti.
i don't overly like the beat. life or death? your punches need some seriously work dude, you sound pretty original, but the writting isn't at the level it could be. quality isn't great, but okay, you're emotion isn't up to level.
you called him twista and thats a diss? i don't get it?
flow. .
flow 4
punches 2
delivery. 4
beat choice 4
extras 1
15

winner is tech, although this battle didn't impress me

Technical won......... better punches, alil better flow and shit

2nd was SE

and 3rd GS

lmao at the steve nash line...... dumbass.....

i aint got time to explain but tech had some funny shit, but none of yall were tha good......

o wow..nice drops..and props on voting..upping

if team one is going to vote like that on my shit, i don't want his vote...thats on some bs.

mwahahahahah......winner gets me......hahahaha, i mean uhh
hahahahhah.....
"its the RV TORUNYYYYYYYY MANNNN" dude won....figure it out....

peace

i had to do this shit at 1 in the mornin i had just woke up..damn

ha...its cool, but what u layed wasnt that nice.....so i mean he came the hardest with his overused generic punches....im just laughin at my comp.

yea that was horrible prolly the worst audio ive heard so far.and i made it

not the worst i heard but not that well put together

spell my name right and than MAYBE ill respect anythin u say

stfu dude....... i usually give good feed, i sed I DONT have time to explain..... if u had looked at last time i was online it woulda shown u the last thing i did before gettin off rv yesterday was post in that...... but i figured there should be atleast more than 1 vote before this shit got closed

i voted too!!!!!

Typing as I listen......

Scott Eti - First thing I noticed was that your vocals are pretty clear. You have a pretty thick accent, bu tI can decypher some of the shit you were saying....lol. You don't sound too natural on this slow beat, but I think a faster one would have made you harder to understand. You had a couple of OK punches, but nothing that really stood out as dope as fuck, ya know. Your presence was kinda lacking. This is a diss track, try to sound like you're dissing someone.....

Technical - Your quality needed some help a little. Your Ps were hitting hard. You need some kind of pop filter. Or maybe just stand a little further away from the mic. You had some cool punches, but once again, nothing too great here. You had a pretty good presence though. I think you might have shined in this battle cause there wasn't the greatest competition.......you might need to step it up if you make into next week.

Golden Shellz - Not really feeling your beat off the bat. You sounded like you were cutting in too much too.....especially in the beginning. Your flow needed some help too. You had some cool personals.....you seemed to know the most about your opponents. Your presence needed some work too. I can tell from your verse that you are more used to doing text battles, which is OK. I think doing text verses helps keep you on your toes, but you just don't really seem to have too much confidence on the mic. Keep practicing though......you'll get better :thumbup:™

Vote - Technical......most well rounded in this one.