Raw King vs Kings
 

Battle Rules:

min lines 10
max lines 16
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

verse due 30 minute after check in. good luck.

Minimum posts to vote: 160

Check in by: 05-12-06 at 05:30 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-09-06 05:55 PM.

ok kings...I tried to elevate just cuz u asked me to.lol heres my verse. good luck.

now where's ur crown at?...bitch...bark and I'll let the dogs get u....
U uncle Fester ass nigga....Zig Zag should've mopped the floor wit u....
U weak in a battle....not as Raw as the competition....
Trigger town wanted u gone...shit...even u signed the petitions...
so quit crying...u mad cuz u aint a vet...
u been here since 04'....god damn...u still haven't elevated yet....
Ur new name is Peasants...ask strobe to make it permanent...
u been here for ever....how many times have I seen YOU in the Tournaments?
u been here too long to not have achieved a thing...
nobody knows who u are?...yeah right...nigga aint u the burger King?...
fuck it...u don't have a ghostwriter thats been against the south....
so who's feeding u material? nah...I dont mean the dicks in ur mouth...
u a bitch....I can tell by the man boobs on the pics...
U told me to elevate...but fuck...u aint done none of that since...
so spit ur wak verse and let me body u...u fucking adolescent...
u underaged wit no skillz...thats why crews don't acknowledge ur presence...

uppin for Kings verse...I know he's around here some work...cuz junior high school is out so he must be.lol. just fucking wit u dawg....

Kings has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-06 01:25 PM.

Lol @ this piece of shit.

kid lets get down to buisness.

Kids wack I got 954 ways o nothin but pure rawproof.
Rawkings couldn't beat me if he collabed with 5 dudes.
and yea you stackin bodies in the south poundin em.
............... but to bad its only with Gay men!
gimme 5 minutes and Ill own you with a short 10.
........whats up with you takin your shirts off posein?
dude your ulgy just look and see how big your nose is!
Do i really Need I diss you on your e-thug Fez pics?
you couldn't kick a decent punch if your life pended it!!
...............Ill leave your wig split with sick punches.
couldn't murk anyone kid even if your personals packed crunches.

Fixed the spelling error . :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Kings
 

checkin polls

but kings i think you lost this

and by the way look in a dictionary to find out the difference between the words "depend" and "pend"

lmfao man i bet u 1$ u dont kno the punch or personal in there.

everytime i post your following me get the fuck off my nuts.


uppin this. :thumbup:

hay kings..thanks for finally dropping. this aint over no beef shit. In my opinion, ur verse was mediocre I guess. but good luck on the real man...lets get some votes in.

For all u idiots who dont know where i got the 954 from i got it from his myspace link along with rawproof.

and the nose punch and stuff is from his pics.

uppin this .

lol at boobs personal man i got a muscular chest dumbass. and I also laughed at how you referd to the same page over and over..... Dipshit. :bored:

quit swaying for votes...lets just be quiet and try to get some votes. like I said befor...good luck.

you should explain a punch if it's an inside joke

and you really are wack so back up nigga

DP > Kings on any given day....peace

lmao man yea im still in elavation but as soon as im done ill be sure to battle you.

and uppin this.

uppin this .

lets get some votes so we can get this thing over with please.

uppin this .

u change ur name more times than imigrant wit fake papers...can't decide on any?

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

Voted For: Raw King

Raw King:
now where's ur crown at?...bitch...bark and I'll let the dogs get u....
U uncle Fester ass nigga....Zig Zag should've mopped the floor wit u....
4/10 - OK Opener.
U weak in a battle....not as Raw as the competition....
Trigger town wanted u gone...shit...even u signed the petitions...
6/10 - Good Punch.
so quit crying...u mad cuz u aint a vet...
u been here since 04'....god damn...u still haven't elevated yet....
4/10 - OK.
Ur new name is Peasants...ask strobe to make it permanent...
u been here for ever....how many times have I seen YOU in the Tournaments?
4/10 - OK.
u been here too long to not have achieved a thing...
nobody knows who u are?...yeah right...nigga aint u the burger King?...
4/10 - OK.
fuck it...u don't have a ghostwriter thats been against the south....
so who's feeding u material? nah...I dont mean the dicks in ur mouth...
2/10 - NO.
u a bitch....I can tell by the man boobs on the pics...
U told me to elevate...but fuck...u aint done none of that since...
4/10 - OK.
so spit ur wak verse and let me body u...u fucking adolescent...
u underaged wit no skillz...thats why crews don't acknowledge ur presence...
4/10 - OK Closer.
28/80=35%

You had an ok verse, nothing that great. Used some OK's punchlines and personals. You had one good one in there.



.Theory.:
Kids wack I got 954 ways o nothin but pure rawproof.
Rawkings couldn't beat me if he collabed with 5 dudes.
4/10 - OK Opener.
and yea you stackin bodies in the south poundin em.
............... but to bad its only with Gay men!
4/10 - OK.
gimme 5 minutes and Ill own you with a short 10.
........whats up with you takin your shirts off posein?
3/10 - Meh.
dude your ulgy just look and see how big your nose is!
Do i really Need I diss you on your e-thug Fez pics?
2/10 - Bad.
you couldn't kick a decent punch if your life pended it!!
...............Ill leave your wig split with sick punches.
couldn't murk anyone kid even if your personals packed crunches.
4/10 - Good closer.
17/50 = 34%

You had a iight verse, nothing that special either tho. OK flow some OK punchlines nothing that stood out to me.


OVERALL: I give this vote to Raw for his one line that I was feeling. It was the only really good line in this battle. He did come with more lines which gave him the advantage. But he just flowed better and I feel he wanted this more then kings. Kings your lines were iight, it flowed well they were just not hitten him hard enough.

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Voted For: Kings

now where's ur crown at?...bitch...bark and I'll let the dogs get u....
U uncle Fester ass nigga....Zig Zag should've mopped the floor wit u....
U weak in a battle....not as Raw as the competition....
Trigger town wanted u gone...shit...even u signed the petitions...
so quit crying...u mad cuz u aint a vet...
u been here since 04'....god damn...u still haven't elevated yet....
Ur new name is Peasants...ask strobe to make it permanent...
u been here for ever....how many times have I seen YOU in the Tournaments?
u been here too long to not have achieved a thing...
nobody knows who u are?...yeah right...nigga aint u the burger King?...

v.s .

nothing really

shit was basically one sided. Raw king basically wiped the floor with kings. Kings, you gotta elevate a lot son. gotta start battling more talented people, cuz like this match, you'll learn from all the losses you'll prolly get. Then count the ABCS and shit. you'll learn son. just takes time. but raw had that raw ish. so yea...

v/Raw

Vote switched

thanks for the vote on this shit..its been up for a while and I thought no one would vote on it ever 4 real...

vote vote vote...........................................

lmfao set up a new one i wanna own you now that im elavated and now ur still shit.

lmfao. :bored: