Jay 286 Vs TeamOne
 

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check....... i got ya

i check yes!!!!!

except that i wasnt sure.... and when This motha fucka went ahead and dropped a lil diss against the kid.... i fired back...

i was tryin to take a break from Comp this week.... but since dude incited the Beef...

ahhhh w/e.....

Jay... Smash this nigga for me will ya?!

...OYD...


FUCK YOU

-Don Tito Bronsky

does that mean i have to try....ugh...

LMAO....

shittttttttttttt.... all im sayin is come wit it Jay....


Stomp a mudhole in this nigga man!!!

...Nothing Here I'll Come Back When Somethings Posted Rather Then Bullshit.

Looks like you decided to bullshit anyway :thumbup:™

-Enygma

i got so much school shit goin on....i dunno how im gon get my drop in time :/

fuckin bitch......... well screw this........ im goin no show verse.... sick of kids no showin and than me comin with shit

ha complainin n shit...fine i threw something together right quick....be a bitch and complain about it.....sorry i have a life in college....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=483253

go ahead you can drop now....

ps... you were barley worth the freestyle

yea, u say u aint got time but yet u "freestyled" 3 and a half minutes........ u just tryna pull some ol bullshit...... sayin u aint gon show, so i write a fuckin no show verse, and u come with WRITTEN shit........ u prolly freestyled the last 45 seconds at most

and w/e, i came wit a no show verse..... http://www.soundclick.com/olascripts

ps. i love how u have DOUBLES in ur "freestyle" ....... ok kid

haha word fux, those some mad freestyle doubles right there, haha you told me this kid was on yo shit n threads researchin you wasnt he? haha pullin some bitch type shit, regardless, fux spit a no show verse against some straight up sheisty shit, it was nice jay, u shoulda just spit it to begin with, without playin all them games about not havin time,

word

ight jay

Punches-3/5 they were ok not really that hard hitting but you had some nice lines
Flow-stayed on beat pretty much the whole way through id give you a 4/5 on that
Delivery-2/5 u sounded lazy as hell though kinda got me bored half way through its sounded like you were bored too.
Beat Choice-no comment..it was ok but ive heard better beats for battles

fux
Punches-3.5/5 i liked some of your lines they were a lil weak though like the ill change white tees headband and shoes so let me switch gears(or sumthin like that line) but nice try..
Flow-4/5 good flow i like how you rode the beat
Delivery-nice emotional good shit
Beat Choice- i like how you used that beat entee did good shit though i like it

honestly it sounds like they both were just bullshittin i dont even think this is really worth voting but since ive already broke it down my vote is gonna go to..........

vote=fux..sorry jay i think if you woulda came harder you woulda had this cuz fux's verse was kinda weak but yours was just weaker in my opinion...fux ive heard shit alot better from you..

p.s to both emcee's always treat every battle like you just got dissed horribly. u know come hard no matter what..i mean even in between classes you can write sum shit hard enough i mean you both had like almost a week to do this thats plenty time to put sumthin together..peace

dudes all pressed that i said i didnt know if i was gon have time like 3 days ago....n i aint say i freed all of it, and really how long does it take you to memorize shit, you hear it twice and you got it down....what i find funny is how only chi town heads come up in here and vote...let me see thats not bias at all, sayin 4/5 on flow when you fell off like 10 times at the begining....thats a fuckin joke man....stop buggin your home town buddies to check it out n vote for u

word on the real tho. you got a nice beat but its hard to listen cuz you struggle with breating too much

only one person voted?????????

Jay.......

never listened to you...but your not too bad...shits pretty good n stuff.....lemme break it down...

intro...meh..nothing creative..just talking......kind of a waste of track space i thought....

flow and delivery is nice......but none of the punchlines are hard hitting or creative...i liked the john bobbet line....shit was pretty nice...other than the first couple of bars...there arent many personals...

hmm...i thought the butthole line was wack man...no hate...but that brought the track down a lot.....i just didnt like it.....

flow is good except for a few parts...where u mumble your words a lil bit...very few though...overall flow was nice...

Overall...not a lot really stood out to me man.....the track was pretty good...i liked the beat n everything...but as far as a diss track...it was just ok...i think you could have been a lot more creative with the punches n shit.....



teamone.....listening.....again intro just talking...but u got right to the point so it was ok...

im loving the beat...shit is hard....

delivery is aright...flow is pretty good....i liked the switch gears shit....punchlines are decent....misdemeanor line is nice...

overall....i felt like u had more creative punches.......although the track werent too far apart...i felt like your few creative punches got you the W.....


VOTE: Teamone

flow n delivery were about on the same level and i liked the beats about the same....but Fux had more creative punches throughout his verse.......

damn enygma was right, no one got the rock line....eh oh well