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mR iKiLL. vs Raw King
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-21-06 at 06:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - win |
mR iKiLL. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-06 06:29 PM.
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Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-06 06:48 PM.
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U beating me nigga....u might as well rap urself in caution tape...
for gods sake...thats like fat people trying to skinny dip...Its not an option…...wait .... I know what this about….U mad cuz I erased ur vote?.... R u serious? Quote:
But on the real nigga….u on the losing team…don’t make me bruise ur spleen… Mutha fucka…"I’ll put an out of order" sign on ur computer screen.... I'll write 10....but I really only need 2 bars.... I use a lot of periods....thats how I explain how pussy u are...... I'll merk u...ur new name is "chalked up".....put it in ur sig.... even if I clap u like the STD....u still couldn't be this sick.... iKill. need a docter...there's something fucked up around em'.... cuz after this battle....all I'll be saying is Quote:
not sure why u declined the other battle I set up but lets make this a 3 - 0 equals KO and 4 - 1 equals TKO....good luck and no beef dawg. |
I spit plenty punches to pierce thru your brains 'with speed'
while dismantle your mantle with blazin rhymes until your neck drips with 'gasoline' My raps style drastic leavin niggas buried and wrapped up 'in plasti' Wit spit taktikz that’ll chop you up like cabbage and leave you turned over in caskets I'll slay my punches to his brain wit verbs that'll leave em 'drippin in sweat' Rippin organs and spittin verses thru his spine until each word is 'rippin his neck' Why even spit ?Your time is now to feel the pressure of a lyrical 'king at his best' One Versesend three shells thru ur vest and damage each splein 'thru your chest' I'll.scorch your team. and drag them acorss the patio until the 'porch is clean' i dont result to violence i just chop up your bars wit claws like 'wolverine' |
This was feedback posted for mR iKiLL.
viewin the polls .
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Up .
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uppin this shit. I dont expect big ass explanaitions
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Up .
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uppin uppin...........................................
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vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
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This was feedback posted for mR iKiLL.
LMAO @ text
hahahaahaha hmm...well, lez C-here..."I record in a studio"...But, I get it...u practice by doin TEXT on an i-net rap site? fake ass |
I dont get it? but could u actually vote on this shit? its been up for over.
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vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote....please....I'll be ur friend...and Ikill will come over and we'll play X box at ur crib on the weekends....lol..
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Voted For: Raw King
Alright, here's how it goes. Raw King came more personal. It's almost like I can hear the nigga spitting this shit to Mr. IKill. Mr. IKill: When it comes down to a battle it's safe to say the object is to diss your opponent. You just rambled on about breaking his neck. You had better structure, and a few multi's here and there, but no personals, no real punchlines. |
thanks dawg....this shit been up for ever wit out a single veiw...I apreciate it man....
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Voted For: Raw King
ikill- come now... no hate, but i would never be able to find ur flow... idk if it's how u typed it or what, but i can't catch the flow... didn't like the gasoline line... RAW-obvious personals, which is good, cuz otherwise i wouldn't know what u were talking about... u get it, cuz u didn't overdo it... nice, clean verse w/ hot bars |
thanks...I appreciate the votes that are coming in....this shit been slept on for a long time...upping for a few more votes and some feed backs...
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Voted For: Raw King
Close battle, good battle... kinda hard for me to decide.... iKill had nice flow and a lot of metaphors, but the punches didn't hit like he wanted them to. Raw King was a lil sloppy at the beginning, but cleaned it up towards the end. Bothe rapps weren't anything spectacular. So, I'mma have to give it to Raw King, cause I like the way he incorporated the qoutes into the rhyme. that killed 'em rite there.... vote- Raw King |
uppin for some good votes to get this closed please..............
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This was feedback posted for mR iKiLL.
seriuoulsy weak, no flow and it barely even rhymes
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this from some one wit a 2-8 battle record....wow....
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Voted For: Raw King
raw kings got this mu fucka........... this feedback |
need some feed back on this please............................................ .......
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This was feedback posted for mR iKiLL.
polls,,,uppin.....................................
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This was feedback posted for Raw King
Your structure was fucked up as anything, but your punches were actually PUNCHES!! woo-hoo. anyway, thats basically what won you the battle. you used punchlines to insult your opponent while he was talking about god knows what. either way, yours was direct while somewhat creative (altho you need work in that area). vote - raw
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thanks feeble. was'nt u in the hall of fame and shit in the RB site? I seen some of ur shit along as time ago...it was tight dawg.
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