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GKillaz05 vs T.r.oo.P
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Goodluck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-26-06 at 05:38 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-06 09:01 PM.
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I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me...
Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery... While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic... Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'... Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop... kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup... |
T.r.oo.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-25-06 05:32 PM.
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*Comes 2 the Stage Late...Grabs Mic*
Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks .............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet |
This is why i dont battle here no mo.....takes 29 months 2 get a vote
on a 6 line battle Wtf |
no shit, what the hell is goin' on.. lets get some votes in this bitch.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
*Comes 2 the Stage Late...Grabs Mic* (JUST WANNA SAY..INTROS ARE GAY AS SHIT...i THINK SPUL WAS THE FIRST ONE i SAW DO THAT SHIT AND ITS BEEN GAY EVER SINCE) Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs WAK Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks .............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax WAK And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet TERRIBLE CLOSER AND UR PUNCH WAS DELIVERY WAS ALL WRONG TRHOUGH THE WHOLE VERSE I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me... Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery... KIND OF WAK BUT THE 2ND LINE PICKED IT UP... While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic... Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'... i DONT KNOW ABOUT THIS ONE...I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE IT. Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop... kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup... 1ST LINE WAS GOOD BUT THE SECOND LINE LOOKED LIKE U RAN OUT OF WORDS TO RHYME WITH HOOP... OVER ALL i LIKE GKILLAZ VERSE BETTER ON THIS ONE. EVEN THOUGH BOTH VERSES WERE OK AND REALLY SHORT TOO...i THINK G JUST PUT A LIL MORE EFFORT INTO HIS VERSE WITH HIS 1ST BAR...THAT REALLY WON IT FOR ME...REST OF THE VERSE WASN'T TOO GOOD ON BOTH SIDES. V/ GKILLAZ05 |
This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
seeing why my name mentioned in this thread ~_~.....
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This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
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Voted For: GKillaz05
GK: all lines flowed nice, but nothin really too special... the net like a hoop line was my favorite.... Troop: i'm guessin that it flows, but can't really tell cuzz of the structure and spelling i only got that GK was into hockey or somethin, which would've been kool if your lines were hotter... best line was the mime spittin on wax... overall: GK cuz he came hotter line-wise, but very mediocre with that soup line, if Troop came hotter, u would've lost it with that one... |
ok, uppin for more votes... lets get this other with.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me... Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery... lol 6/10 While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic... Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'... meh 3/10 Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop... kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup... nice closer 7.5/10 16.5/30 TROOP Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs wack 2/10 Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks .............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax COOL 6.5/10 And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet no dude 3/10 11.5/30 i give this to gkillaz wittier and more creative punches..decent battle thought guys v/gkillaz |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
I wasn't really feelin this battle but i would have to go with Gkilla on this one. I didn't really have any notables though, a bunch of near misses but both seemed a bit played. The best would proly be the pizza delivery personal, the poopa scoopa punch was pretty lame to me and the soup punch was ehhh. But troop's best to me was his mime punch which was weak to me, cause making fun of canada's played. we all know canada's wack:thumbup: just joking but seriously though..... v/Gkilla rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=225369 |
This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
Get back in the loop bro..
This shit might be called good two years ago.. |
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
[Lucky Luciano]
Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs ^^meh, nothin hard hitting, attempted personal...2/5 Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks .............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax ^^nope...not feeling at all, and you contradicted the first line of this bar by sayin his Audio lacks then sayin you never heard his audio...1/5 And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet ^^decent ending, another personal attempt...strongest bar....3/10 overall 6/15...work on mulites(multiple rhyming words in one line), similies(make your punches much more complex), both of those would make your personals stronger .................................................. ................ [Gkilla] I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me... Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery... ^^nah, not feeling...pizza shop/delivery line is played...1/5 While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic... Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'... ^^nope, again not feeling...elementary rhymes 1/5 Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop... kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup... ^^your best, but not strong...2/5 overall 4/15...you need just as much elevation as the other guy. Multies, Similies, personals...the only thing you two had was structure and flow...but meh...weak battle vote = Lucky |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
strayt battle, I liked it.... close, real close. Luciano came out strayt, bars was in tact, but sum of his punches were hard to get. GK punches were a lil harder though, flowed a lil better (bothe flows could been a lil better)... but overall ya bothe did a goode job. not ya best wurks but I was feelin it... gotta hand it over to GKillaz05 |
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