Chris Stylez vs Mimesis
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-29-06 at 05:50 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

Chris Stylez has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-06 12:58 AM.

You sayin you can own me, I know you dont mean it
..........................My flows high and hot
To leave you burnin like the phoenix
Leave your heart racin, makin ya time fly by
Time racin ya evolution and elevation
But still cant reach a new lyrical high
Internets your thing so stay in ya place
Come around my way and get more slugs in the face
Than armless boxers not swayin day face away

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-06 03:19 AM.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-06 03:20 AM.

Good battle and no beef. Word to "Semper Fi" as your custom title. I'm enlisting in the Marines in a little over a year. Good shit.

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Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis:
Chris sucks and I don't. . so you best believe you'll get left dead, kid
There wouldn't be a Shining thing in your verse if Jack Nicholoson read it
5/10 - OK Opener.
Readers expect shit, you still astound them. . sound the alarms quick
Cause when voters say Jesus, Christ. .
. .is cause they weren't even expecting that amount of garbage
7/10 - lol, niice.

Back down. . you ain't a fucking savior. . so I'm keep ripping this fag
This'll only be the second coming of Christ cause that's where he's finishing at
3/10 - Meh.
Shouldn't have come. . I'll throw punches till this guy is dead n'. .
. .I'm just known for burying more Tyl than the bombers of 9-11
4/10 - OK.
I'll keep exposing your wack ass until when you post. . nothing's read
Then make this Lez,bo enough to shoot apples off anybody's fucking head
5/10 - Good.
You aren't respected. . no matter how you put it, you'll still lose guy
So I'll keep cutting Rist's. . with the hope that you finally commit suicide
5/10 - Good.
Save the site, with a blade in sight I'll take your life. . I drop pests
By bringing one punchline and nameplays. .
. .and still leaving my opponents flawlessed
6/10 - Good Closer.
35/70

You had a pretty good verse, seen better, but you used some niice wordplay, and some ok nameplay.


Chris Stylez:
You sayin you can own me, I know you dont mean it
..........................My flows high and hot
To leave you burnin like the phoenix
4/10 - OK Opener.
Leave your heart racin, makin ya time fly by
Time racin ya evolution and elevation
But still cant reach a new lyrical high
3/10 - NO.
Internets your thing so stay in ya place
Come around my way and get more slugs in the face
Than armless boxers not swayin day face away
1/10 - BOO.
8/30

You had a really weak verse, nothing creative..flowed iight rhymes iight, but didnt hit Mim worth shit.


OVERALL: Mim took this battle for sure, he had the better punches, his personals were better and he flowed better. Stylez you didnt do that many lines and nothing was hitting to hard.

Vote - MIM


RTF in SIG

I've been beefing with T.r.oo.P lately, man. I don't want to vote on that battle and get accused of hate voting (assume that I think you won). Get at me if you get in another battle sometime.

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Yeah i know you have this. I have alot 1 brother and 6 friends in the army and im most likely going to be enlisting next year as well when i turn 18. Stay up

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Wow Mim won this by far .

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That's tight, man. Good luck.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

merkage.
You win
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Votes. .

Voted For: Chris Stylez

Nothing

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Shouldn't have come. . I'll throw punches till this guy is dead n'. .
. .I'm just known for burying more Tyl than the bombers of 9-11
You aren't respected. . no matter how you put it, you'll still lose guy
So I'll keep cutting Rist's. . with the hope that you finally commit suicide

not ya best verse Mim...u halfassed this one...but i see why

chris...do wha i did...go read the battles in LbL...learn how 2 put a punch and a personal into one....and go from there
jus study the battles...i was left behind b4 i found the new style of battleing...you still kinda goin oldschool...you got some ok concepts..but your gonna have 2 elevate...keep battleing..dont let kids tell you 2 stop and leave the site...jus keep workin on em
go read some tutorials and jus try to craft ya own style

V/Mim

*Nuff Said*


Vote switched

Oooops...i put it in the wrong box....pm strobe Mim and get it changed


my fault

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Voted For: Mimesis

...this battle made me sad... Mimesis takes this easy, and not just cuz it's longer... i counted maybe 2 punches in Chris's verse, and the first wasn't too hot, the second didn't flow right to me... come on, man, i've seen hotter stuff from u, u can't half-ass it against cats like mimesis playa... mimesis... pretty good, but i got a little lost w/ ur flow too... probably all the .... in between... keep writin... 1...

Voted For: Mimesis

Chris sucks and I don't. . so you best believe you'll get left dead, kid
There wouldn't be a Shining thing in your verse if Jack Nicholoson read it
Readers expect shit, you still astound them. . sound the alarms quick
Cause when voters say Jesus, Christ. .
. .is cause they weren't even expecting that amount of garbage
Back down. . you ain't a fucking savior. . so I'm keep ripping this fag
This'll only be the second coming of Christ cause that's where he's finishing at
Shouldn't have come. . I'll throw punches till this guy is dead n'. .
. .I'm just known for burying more Tyl than the bombers of 9-11
I'll keep exposing your wack ass until when you post. . nothing's read
Then make this Lez,bo enough to shoot apples off anybody's fucking head
You aren't respected. . no matter how you put it, you'll still lose guy
So I'll keep cutting Rist's. . with the hope that you finally commit suicide
Save the site, with a blade in sight I'll take your life. . I drop pests
By bringing one punchline and nameplays. .
. .and still leaving my opponents flawlessed

vs.

absolutly nothing

Chris u need to elevate dramatically dawg...mims verse started falling off halfway but the first few lines were enough to do ur 4 bars in easy....u got skillz but u need to become more of a battle rapper on this site...no beef dawg...

my vote goes to Mimesis

could one of u return the favor in one if not all of the battles below wit an honest and fair vote...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227954
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228394
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229492

thanks...I apreciate it...

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Nice to see Mimesis still battling newbs.. LMAO.. Your record at respected.. fucken chump.. get outta here

This was feedback posted for Chris Stylez
 

work on your punches homie and get more personal with your opponent don't make it seem humble but let's some cut throat material

Lmao. I've beaten the best people on this site. I've champed LBL.

You don't know what you're talking about.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

mimesis just came with that illy shit. it just made me wanna touch my penis and jack off all over the place. that's how ill it was. While chri's verse just made my peepee get really small and I couldn't even find it. but basically, mimesis came harder. speakin' about hard :hump: