Knight SirRebral vs Nick Fletcher
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


ummm.....yea....o.k. :thumbup: Good Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-03-06 at 03:08 AM

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Expired battle close - win

Nick Fletcher has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-06 01:01 AM.

That’s right you piece of shit, bring your wackness. I hope you’re better than you were on your Blackmage name… not that it matters because I’m gonna whore you this time as well.

Keyed verse to own this wack motherfucker.

Wack faggot. I’m rippin’ it up and endin’ this bout too fast
And I know ya can’t stand a loss. .
. . so I’ll plant you dead on ure ass!
Honestly, I don’t care if I lose… u ain’t worth my shit
So I’ll make this a brief case – and then beat ya to death with it.
Kid, ure fucking wack… but a lyrical assassin first
And its true ’coz ure wack lyrics. .
. . have assassinated our chance of seein’ u drop a decent verse
I see you accept visa, discovery, mastercard. . well, look. .
I don’t care ‘coz son in this battle. .
. . you’ll just be credited as being the WACK FUCK!!
But yo, I’m winnin’ this. . losing to you is sumthin I can’t afford. .
Plus, I’m known to drop Knights… and the entire fucking chess board!
Now look, and listen up. . I’m about kill this off quick. .
‘Coz Knight’s a thorn in my side,
. .so watch me pull out and toss this little prick!
Lets philosophise, ure girl’s a bowling ball of a whore. .
Ya see, I rolled that bitch into the gutter. . and she still came back for more!
I owned that bitch, now onto you. . and you know that I’m able. .
I’ll murder you knight, and every motherfucker at ure round table!
I’m keyin’ this verse, and it’s game over… call it a hunch. .
I’m coming with a verse that lacks luster. .
. .ure just comin’ with one that lacks a decent punch.
Faggot. I’m done with you. . and yo, I was actually being nice
And yo, we cud say this is a duel. . I mean, now I’ve whored you twice!

Done.

Knight SirRebral has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-06 09:11 AM.

O.K.....

I battled mimesis 2 days ago, ask me if i'm surprised to see him dude
it's not enough you stole his style you gotta steal his wins too
for real dude you eat off mim like you stole his edible drawers
and i'd beat you BLACK and leave you red, but we'd mistake his avy for yours
really miminick SnickER Bars aren't more than wack weak piles
but you're gettin fat off mimesis, you should bite fat free styles
you wanna wile homie i'll show you how
you fire? Well cool i'll make a wish then.....
.................................................. ...................when i blow you out
I would name who mod's LBL but that's gettin played like your raps and gimmicks
Know how i know that leagues for the best.......
.................................................. .....................cause you don't even battle in it
Now it's RV's permanant league so don't ever rap into it
didn't you used to mod a text league? yea, whatever happened to it?
Your lucky these fuckers like you, they all know you're played, you're just ass man
Nick Fletcher finally had King Solo throned.......in the nearest trash can
all his flo comes out of his cheeks, he's the shit...yea that's a played 2 bars
sorry i was distracted by that dick in your ass with the tatto that says "and you are"
I'm tired of rap congrats you've killed another's spirit, get out of my face-book
aren't you in college or DOING SOMETHING with your life instead of crowding my space look

You're done, get off mimesis's dick before you call me wack

good battle homie yea we both keyed but let's see how it plays out good luck

oh damn i didn't know you were in NOK, that's a fuckin punchline waiting to happen, how come you don't tell me these things.

You are a stupid nugget. You said I don't battle in the LBL... how stupid can you be? I'm in the Championship Match this week fool.

I'm a stupid nugget? for real? lol, yea it's cool, whatev, it's just a punch besides, you voted for mim in our battle and half his punches were made up. relax

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

black mag = u had a verse that was full of mimesis this mimesis that but u aint battling him, its ok to drop like 1 or 2 personal about him biting or copying hes style but its wack or should i say it gets wack and gets the reader not wanting to read the rest of u'r shit since i can predict the rest of ya verse is all about him trying to be mimesis and i think that really fucked u ova, originality is good, a bounch of personals about the same thing in u'r entier verse is weak good try thou...

nick: u was more original and wasnt focus on just 1 thing u hit him with random punches was on a few different topic and i thought it hit well and flow good decent drop..

my vote: nick

Voted For: Knight SirRebral

nothing

vs.

I would name who mod's LBL but that's gettin played like your raps and gimmicks
Know how i know that leagues for the best.......
.................................................. .....................cause you don't even battle in it

didn't like any other lines on this shit...u came too hatefull and forgot to put good lines on this shit...all u both did was write a lot of shit that didn't go to far....no beef...just do ur thing man... could u hit up my battles below wit an honest vote please thanks..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228394
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229492
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227954

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Lmao @ that faggot vote. You don't even know proper text battling.

That vote is getting removed.

wow at how people take this shit to the heart....thats a faggot vote? u got ripped cuz ur shit was wak man....its all my opinion only...just cuz I didn't like ur stuff...there is absolutly no reason to get my shit removed...ur just one of those guys that think that ur record is the shit if its like 100 to 1 even if u have to cheat or some shit man....I voted like how I thaught....I dont got no beef wit u so its not like I really want to cheat u man...instead of erasing my vote cuz its only one vote out of a possible 8 votes....why dont u just ask me to explain better...doesn't that sound like more of a better idea then saying, " hay...u dont know shit...cuz I think my shit was tight so it must be"? truth be told...ur verse might be alright to every one else and wak to me...thats how shit goes...deal wit it...people vote against me and people vote for me just like any one else...and they also say the oposite shit from each other...I dont just DQ they shit cuz I dont like they vote and I thoaght I should've won man...grow up...u make this site look rediculouse wit that shit man....

Uhhh, first off you said his verse was better... even though he has that newb style and fucking stretches his shit. You are an audio head, you don't know how the text is done really.

^But fuck that.

The fact that the only bar you quoted was a FUCKING FAKE PERSONAL makes me question your voting ability. The bar says about me not battling in the LBL when you know damn well that I DO because you are in it to. And not to mention that he had another bar of similar style that was completely fake. So clearly, you do not know what the fuck you are talking about.

I see wat u are saying...but I took it in another more lyrical manner...ur verse was ok but nothing special for u to brag about...it bore me to tell the truith so I didn't even wanna read it all...and Im not an audio head but thanks for saying so cuz audio is the real shit so if I could do it...id probably merk some of the best...but w/e...if u want...get my vote taken of man...I dont want be wit u dawg...u str8 to me even though u voted againse me on a battle cuz nigga said ur name but I didn't say shit...I took it like a man should and congratulated ol' boy on beating me fairly rather then bitching about every vote he got on me.....wether u erase the vote...I wasn't feeling ur shit and thats the bottom line to me so I wont sell myself out cuz u want me to....his verse was wak but he had one decent line and so I voted on that.....sorry if u get offended by this...its not wat Im trying to do but u should stop acting like ur god cuz u live on this site since 04 and win a lot...even the best loose...sometimes to niggaz that aint half as good man....no beef or hate..just my opinion but do wat u do and good luck on ur battle.....1

oh and I realized u didn't get rex's vote erased....I followed that link to see wat votes should look like but his looks nothing like wat it should....it kinda looks like my vote in a way....wow....thats coincidence on the real....

LMAO!! You are just digging yourself an even bigger hole here. Saying that you voted for him because he had one bar that you liked... and that was a fake line. If you had any idea about battling then you would know that no matter how good a line comes across as... if it is completely fake then it is regarded as utter bullshit.

That's like me wording a punch so dope saying that he has never won a battle in his life and having someone call it dope. It would be fucking idiotic because he has a 4-0 record so clearly he has won a battle.

You are a dumb fuck. Get the fuck outta here.

And once again, you make yourself look stupid by trying to look cool. I pm'ed strobe to remove your vote because I didn't want bar vs. bar votes. If anyone else drops one in my favour... it will be removed.

Moving on, whenever you pm strobe to remove votes he looks at all votes anyway and removes others that he deems unacceptable as a real vote. So fuck you, you fucking herb. Come back when you have a little knowledge of how this site works you faggot.

wow....ur really mad....ok....u win....now relax and stop cursing at me in every other sylibal...u stoped making sence about 15 fucks ago....and nobody talks like that no more...herb...wtf....thats the gayest of all played out old words ever man...just relax dawg....I dont care for beef man....do wat u do....Im done speaking dawg...I did wat thoaght was right and u said no...its not and changed....it happends...I still aint like yo shit so i aint gonna ride yo dick like other niggaz who just look at your record instead of wat u wrote man...onec again.....g'd luck in ur battle...and do ur thing...no beef...its no more...

This was feedback posted for Knight SirRebral
 

Word @ me being mentioned. WORD @ IT!

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher
 

checkin the polls .

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

nick fletcher son. BRRRRRRRRRAPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^Word to this gay ass motherfucker... whoever he is. :rolleyes:

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher
 

polls............................................. .

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Wack faggot. I’m rippin’ it up and endin’ this bout too fast
And I know ya can’t stand a loss. .
. . so I’ll plant you dead on ure ass!
OK OPPENING NOTHING TO GO WOW OVER BUT GOOD

Honestly, I don’t care if I lose… u ain’t worth my shit
So I’ll make this a brief case – and then beat ya to death with it.
GOOD PUNCH...AGAIN REALLY NOTHING SPECIAL BUT GOOD.......

Kid, ure fucking wack… but a lyrical assassin first
And its true ’coz ure wack lyrics. .
. . have assassinated our chance of seein’ u drop a decent verse
NICE LINE BUT IT REALLY KINDA STRETCH SO I HAD TO READ IT TWICE TO GET IT DOWN

I see you accept visa, discovery, mastercard. . well, look. .
I don’t care ‘coz son in this battle. .
. . you’ll just be credited as being the WACK FUCK!!
UR WORST LINE SO FAR

But yo, I’m winnin’ this. . losing to you is sumthin I can’t afford. .
Plus, I’m known to drop Knights… and the entire fucking chess board!
A PERSONAL BUT ITS LIKE A BIG FILLER BAR

Now look, and listen up. . I’m about kill this off quick. .
‘Coz Knight’s a thorn in my side,
. .so watch me pull out and toss this little prick!
i KNOW WAT U MENT BUT I WASNT FEELING IT

Lets philosophise, ure girl’s a bowling ball of a whore. .
Ya see, I rolled that bitch into the gutter. . and she still came back for more!
KINDA WIERD CUZ UR GIRL JOKES ARE DEAD BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD

I owned that bitch, now onto you. . and you know that I’m able. .
I’ll murder you knight, and every motherfucker at ure round table!
WAK LINE ON THE REAL...JUST A BIG FILLER

I’m keyin’ this verse, and it’s game over… call it a hunch. .
I’m coming with a verse that lacks luster. .
. .ure just comin’ with one that lacks a decent punch.
WOULDV FLOWD BETTER IF U DROPPED THE DECENT AND LEFT THE PUNCH...BUT IT AIEGHT.

Faggot. I’m done with you. . and yo, I was actually being nice
And yo, we cud say this is a duel. . I mean, now I’ve whored you twice
OK ENDING. COULDV BEEN WORDED BETTER.

ur verse was good but it had a lot of fillers especially on the first line and u talked about ending the battle about 6 or 7 times through out the verse. ok punches. about 1 or 2 good personals. decent flow. u killed ursefl wit the ur girlfriend jokes and that intro that made u sound like if u were protecting some kind of reputation on this site. dont beef over a battle. thats just wak man. but good verse.....8/10



I battled mimesis 2 days ago, ask me if i'm surprised to see him dude
it's not enough you stole his style you gotta steal his wins too
REALLY WAK OPPENER. U MAY HAVE JUST WORDED IT WRONG

for real dude you eat off mim like you stole his edible drawers
and i'd beat you BLACK and leave you red, but we'd mistake his avy for yours
FIRST LINE WAS WAK, 2ND LINE WAS OK

really miminick SnickER Bars aren't more than wack weak piles
but you're gettin fat off mimesis, you should bite fat free styles
UR BEST LINE SO FAR BUT UR PUTTING TOO MUCH INTO THE WHOLE HIM TRYING TO BE LIKE MIM SHIT. LET IT GO.

you wanna wile homie i'll show you how
you fire? Well cool i'll make a wish then.....
.................................................. ...................when i blow you out
GAY PUNCH

I would name who mod's LBL but that's gettin played like your raps and gimmicks
Know how i know that leagues for the best.......
.................................................. .....................cause you don't even battle in it
NOT A SMART LINE REALLY CUZ HE DOES BATTLE IN IT.

Now it's RV's permanant league so don't ever rap into it
didn't you used to mod a text league? yea, whatever happened to it?
GOOD PERSONAL BUT NOT THAT GOOD REALLY

Your lucky these fuckers like you, they all know you're played, you're just ass man
Nick Fletcher finally had King Solo throned.......in the nearest trash can
GOOD PERSONAL

all his flo comes out of his cheeks, he's the shit...yea that's a played 2 bars
sorry i was distracted by that dick in your ass with the tatto that says "and you are"
WAK

I'm tired of rap congrats you've killed another's spirit, get out of my face-book
aren't you in college or DOING SOMETHING with your life instead of crowding my space look
NOPE...WORST LINE. i THAUGHT IT WAS GONNA BE GOOD BUT i WAS WRONG.

basically u put down a lot of wak lines wit some good personals but u couldnt pull this one off well enough to get the win. u shouldnt stick to on personal for like 4 bars, that shows u dont have too much to say and then u use a lot of fillers just to reach the max. but good try on this battle. it wasnt a total let down like a lot of other battles usually are.

personals - NF
Flow - NS
Structure - NS
Punches - NF
Metas - none
Multis - none
worplay - NF
Vocab - none

V/Nick Fletcher

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher
 

I'm going to vote for Fletcher because he had better punches. More coherent, easier to understand, more direct and straightforward. A little bit more creative as well. Creativity is probably the most important thing in any verse, in my opinion.

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Honestly, I don’t care if I lose… u ain’t worth my shit
So I’ll make this a brief case – and then beat ya to death with it.
But yo, I’m winnin’ this. . losing to you is sumthin I can’t afford. .
Plus, I’m known to drop Knights… and the entire fucking chess board!
^pretty decent.not harsh tho'.
Lets philosophise, ure girl’s a bowling ball of a whore. .
Ya see, I rolled that bitch into the gutter. . and she still came back for more!
^ROFL.

vs.

I would name who mod's LBL but that's gettin played like your raps and gimmicks
Know how i know that leagues for the best.......
.................................................. .....................cause you don't even battle in it
^Awfull structureEww..

overall/-Nick took this..pretty clever punches,seem'd like he held back a lil..but Knight,that was alot of statements,and personals that didnt connect at all...Imo..the structure was fuck'd,and the lines were stretched.

Voted For: Knight SirRebral

i vote for knight..i expected nick to win...but...straight up nickj..your rhyme scheme was fucking unexcusably bad..not that it matters a whole lot..but besides that...you had about 3 decent punches..the rest of the shit was a stretch...and just wasn't that cool..knight sir rebral had a lot of played punches..and seems to only talk about mimesis...and that was whack as shit...but, his best was better than your best...and he was more consistant..even the repetitive personals involving mimesis was better than anything i read from you...i don't know how you're 4-1...i think people might be on your dick a little bit..or there hatin on knight


don't get it twisted though...knight..your verse wasn't all that great either

and nick..refrain from stating that you keyed shit up...all that is, is a horrible attempt at creating an excuse for any votes or losses...it's a played out tactic..and frankly..if i wasn't the objective guy that I am...i would have voted against you soley for saying that shit

if i cared i would get that dat don perrion vote dq'ed but it doesn't really matter that much too me. im really a audio head at heart anyway.

But thanks for all the insults Nick

In any event, good battle and good luck on all future events

Nick insults everybody he meets man, its his way of saying hello I guess.lol.

No i've been here a while, i know me and solo are still cool, I was just poppin in to see how all the arguments are turning out.

I'm just going to pm strobe to have this closed.