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The Creator 06-06-06 01:15 AM

.Theory. vs Raw King
 
Battle Rules:

16 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3 days to drop
win system......

3 - 0 > ko

4 - 1 > tko

no beef or swaying for votes...by this I mean trying to downsize each others verse unless u are just asking to explain something...no shit talking....
violation of these rulez will result in a lost of one vote...ps...if one of us is 2 to -1 from losing a vote...then it becomes a ko...

good luck...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-09-06 at 01:15 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - expired battle win

System 06-06-06 01:16 AM

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-06 01:16 AM.

The Creator 06-06-06 01:48 AM

Theadore...u on the wrong side of the road, so stay in ur lane....
cuz I beat u so bad as kings that u had to go and change the name....*
but u still the same....wak as ever, dawg we take this outside...
u aint an American Idol, bitch...u just a desperate house wife....
u not a factor, just an acter who dont know his role...
u just a theory, a hypothesis no one even cares to know...
and u'll never elevate...I broke ur will...now ur just a crew hoe....
ur RV's cheerleader fucking every player just to get some crew votes...**
but dawg aint u get it?....ur still pathetic wit ur prewrittens...***
but me...I spit on the spot just so u can see(sea) sickness...
please beleave this fake mc needs jesus.....
if people dont vote on this battle, its cuz they know I dont leave witness..****
cuz I'll NOK ur soul out...while ur body stands lifeless...
u from color-ado...but theres only one color amongst the white kids...
thats for the me wanting to be black line...dawg...Im latino...
u probably think thats a jello-jellotine flavor...u fucking goldito nino....*****
and ur rhyme style is garbage, along wit the rest....
but never the less....ur punchlines is dial up....kid It'll never connect....
I bet u wont be original, u'll dig for dirt to see wat the best like...
but just to stop ur life from progessing...I'll log u off this fucking web site...


good luck dawg....


!!!!If u got entire verse and dont need the explanaitions then dont read below....some people actually get annoyed by this.....!!!!


*- we battled befor and his name at the time was kings and after he changed it to .Theory.
**- for some reason he tried out for like every crew out there....its like russian reullette to em...1'll let em and like 5'll give em nothing...
***asked for 3 days to drop and gave some bullshit about having to go to work @ 10.40 pacific time which is 3 hours behind eastern time and plus he's not legally old enough to work late hours like this...I know its bullshit.....
****on our last battle we barely got votes at all cus this site is kinda dead on votes...not our faults though....I was just lashing out a bit.....
*****goldito nino is spanish for fat kid...

System 06-07-06 07:13 PM

.Theory. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-06 07:13 PM.

Valerie 06-07-06 07:48 PM

Lmfao @ this wack shit.

Lets get down to buisness.

your wack seriously even you can see that.
your lines are nothing but jokes man..
connect'n the dots proves nothin but chit chat.
you wanna see how bad you fuckin suck.
I would give you a punch..
but you would just fuck that up.
see theres a difference between you and me.
I can write five punches minutes..
to your three lines that you write daily.
you say'n you a king but you suck at everything.
besides the dick rides you forgot your cock ring.
cus if you murk me until it hurts..
you gotta be elavated first.
you say that your the best of your kind.
what is there to choose from..
wack'n shitty or in your case those are combined

Valerie 06-07-06 08:01 PM

Uppin this . :thumbup:

dazy 06-07-06 08:43 PM

Voted For: Raw King

i voted for raw king his lines rymed and had better flow and structure his best line was:

I bet u wont be original, u'll dig for dirt to see wat the best like...
but just to stop ur life from progessing...I'll log u off this fucking web site

theory ur lines didnt really ryme and everything was terrible but structure was ok ull get better
best line :

you say'n you a king but you suck at everything.
besides the dick rides you forgot your cock ring

vote: Raw king

no hate

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Valerie 06-07-06 08:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Green Rulla
Voted For: Raw King

i voted for raw king his lines rymed and had better flow and structure his best line was:

I bet u wont be original, u'll dig for dirt to see wat the best like...
but just to stop ur life from progessing...I'll log u off this fucking web site

theory ur lines didnt really ryme and everything was terrible but structure was ok ull get better
best line :

you say'n you a king but you suck at everything.
besides the dick rides you forgot your cock ring

vote: Raw king

no hate

wow lmfao another wack fuck voteing a dick rider for King oh well if i lose i know its from dick riders.

The Creator 06-08-06 01:00 AM

dawg....did u actually read the rules...I'll let this slide cuz I really want a fair battle since u think I got dick riders....I appreciate homebois vote but it really aint too cool for u to call him a dick rider becouse he voted for me....the next nigga might vote for u....does that shit make him a dick rider too? all Im saying is...lets keep the beef shit out of this battle dawg....if u dont like me for some wierd reason...thats kewl...thats all u player...I aint gonna lose sleep over it...but lets keep this shit clean dawg....

PS....I aint never had no dick riders befor...If I did...Id dq the vote myself like Iv done befor in other battles under other rap names....theres no point in battling in a website if u need another nigga to win for u...plus I never even seen buddy befor....good luck in this battle nigga. 1

Ysdat 06-08-06 02:05 AM

Voted For: Raw King

ok.
raw king won this. Theres no debate,none,ziltch,numero uno, 2 below 2.

dont have this vote DQ's, cause its straight fact that you lost kings, so yeh.
dont act up and bitch about it. Just be happy my eyes layed sight on your verse:)

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The Creator 06-08-06 02:45 AM

just one more and this'll be shut down in hopefully less then two days but uppin for either my last vote or his first wich ever comes first...

Valerie 06-08-06 02:54 AM

omfg u lost but u got dickriders up the ass.

but whatever you win with a wacker verse then me. :wtf:

The Creator 06-08-06 03:39 AM

why do u say I got dick riders?....u know wat...thats strike two dawg...if u had more confidence on ur verse...u would let it do the talking rather then ur mouth...if my verse was so wak...then it wouldnt get votes....if ur verse was so tight as u think it is....then it would actually rhyme...its not like if u just now decided to not drop anything good.....thats one of the worst verses I ever droped and its still enough to put u down...I mopped the floor wit u on the diss the person above u cypher....I didn't have to waste good punches or lyrics on u so I didn't....just be glad I didn't actually put time into my verse and actually write something against u to put u down....now go cry in the courner like the hatefull lil kid u are...u lil cali looking mu fucka.....

P.S. for real though...its not a ko yet...u can still get more votes...if u dont think its legit vote then do ur lil DQ thing that all bitches do....it'll just prolong the ko and I know u really wanna get this thrashing over wit right....

Valerie 06-08-06 04:32 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Raw King
why do u say I got dick riders?....u know wat...thats strike two dawg...if u had more confidence on ur verse...u would let it do the talking rather then ur mouth...if my verse was so wak...then it wouldnt get votes....if ur verse was so tight as u think it is....then it would actually rhyme...its not like if u just now decided to not drop anything good.....thats one of the worst verses I ever droped and its still enough to put u down...I mopped the floor wit u on the diss the person above u cypher....I didn't have to waste good punches or lyrics on u so I didn't....just be glad I didn't actually put time into my verse and actually write something against u to put u down....now go cry in the courner like the hatefull lil kid u are...u lil cali looking mu fucka.....

P.S. for real though...its not a ko yet...u can still get more votes...if u dont think its legit vote then do ur lil DQ thing that all bitches do....it'll just prolong the ko and I know u really wanna get this thrashing over wit right....

read it again u fuckin dipshit. god now that i told u to elavate u think ur the shit but u got so much goddamn wack dickriders its impossable to beat u no matter what verse I got.

Valerie 06-08-06 04:38 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Theory.
Lmfao @ this wack shit.

Lets get down to buisness.

your wack seriously even you can see that.*
your lines are nothing but jokes man..
connect'n the dots proves nothin but chit chat.**
you wanna see how bad you fuckin suck.*
I would give you a punch..
but you would just fuck that up.***
see theres a difference between you and me.*
I can write five punches minutes..
to your three lines that you write daily.****
you say'n you a king but you suck at everything.
besides the dick rides you forgot your cock ring.
cus if you murk me until it hurts..*
you gotta be elavated first.*****
you say that your the best of your kind.*
what is there to choose from..
wack'n shitty or in your case those are combined
*****

heres a break down for all u faggish herbs.

all those * lines are fuckin punches but lines are seperated..

dont believe me ask mimesis he does thos punches ALL THE FUCKING TIME!

SO LIKE I SAID DONT GET IT DONT FUCKIN VOTE KING D/R FAGS.

The Creator 06-08-06 04:53 AM

this is violation # 3 dawg....just thought u would like to know....I tried to play the peace maker but apperently its not my role to play......dats kewl...

Valerie 06-08-06 07:03 PM

uppin this .

The Creator 06-08-06 07:09 PM

dont even bother voting for me....he'll get em all dq'd cuz ur allllllllll dick riders to em I guess......this battle will probably be up for ever like the last one and then he'll set up another one and same shit will happend....nah fuck that...theodore this is the last time I battle u dawg...this is rediculouse...why did I eccept this bullshit?

WillNova 06-11-06 03:57 AM

Voted For: Raw King

yo, this was a no-brainer.... Raw did his homework, came out hard and was ready to fight.... good punches, flow was strayt and everything was on point. Look like theory gave up before the fight started, look like it was put together at the last minute, had no meanin and no heart, it was crap, stick wit niggas of ya stature and elevate... com harder dawgy, vote- Raw King

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Magic5 06-13-06 02:45 AM

This was feedback posted for Raw King
 
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Sik Wit It 06-13-06 02:50 AM

This was feedback posted for Raw King
 
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The Creator 06-15-06 11:24 AM

uppin this old wak shit wit some good votes so they dont get DQ'd....

Valerie 06-15-06 01:47 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Raw King
uppin this old wak shit wit some good votes so they dont get DQ'd....


lmfao man if no one votedand strobe closed it theres gotta be a good reason.

plus why u re open it no ones gonna vote.

The Creator 06-15-06 06:49 PM

Strobe closed it cuz I askd him to but then he gave me a lost for it so I asked him to open it again....if no one votes on this shit for 21 dayz which probably will end up happening cuz we both dropped weak verses on it...it'll be a draw and we can move on wit out worrying about this shit...its not like I actually want it up no more....just dont want a lost unless u actually win it by votes...thats all..

Riley Freeman 06-16-06 04:04 PM

Voted For: Raw King

Raw king got this mu fucka..............................

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The Creator 06-16-06 04:09 PM

thanks for the vote but Id like u too explain it for us when u can....

Yvonne 06-19-06 06:44 AM

This was feedback posted for Raw King
 
polls....theory i've seen u do better tho....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better!!

The Creator 07-05-06 01:36 PM

vote on this wack shit please...............

In-Vision 07-07-06 12:00 AM

Voted For: Raw King

vote goes to raw king...he had a few decent lines..and theory..you don't even seem to understand the concept of battling? you had hardly any punches...and the ones you did have were whack...no personals....not even fuckin flow....that was rediculous....raw king didn't have a great verse..but definately good enough to blow yours out of the water


raw king..refrain from mixing spanish with english in any kind of battle...it's whack

Wordz AhGod 07-07-06 01:22 PM

This was feedback posted for Raw King
 
peeping pollz............................


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