"Space Ball"...Apexx Diss...check ya boyeeee out
 

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^Click on "Space Ball"...Apexx diss


Verses 1 & 2: Q
Hook: Q

Outro samples from the movie "Space Balls"


Concept: FUCK APEXX...



Holla atcha boyeee


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229537
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229540

no hate Q but why do u always do 2 verses its something i notice any ways im listening to this track in a sec

here we go yo

i like the beat.....ahhaha i was about to think that you was gona use that Shakira beat for a second...you jokster...ya got me...hahhaa
you got good flow and everying....really gettin at apexx....

keep the hot sauce comin....

lol...damn man....

no doubt, this was nice...i was gona use this beat b4....I know me saying an't gona mean shit but honestly i think Q ate apexx on this shit man.....nice punches and shit and the alien shit was mega funny [even tho i believe some of that shit too] .. the emotion on this one was nice as hell...flow was hot too man...."those that can't do teach" was nice..armine line was good too....the mixing and all that was sick too man....

dude went the fuck off here LOL

because 3 verses are reserved for my real songs, the ones I'd put on an album...Plus, I think 2 verses is a good length for a track.








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yea shit was pretty much fiya no doubt alltho for some reason mixing didn t seem as crisp as usual hmmm maybe its me or maybe u rushed it but i can tell this is small battle in a large war

Damn....beat is sick as fuck.........

flow was amazing, this was one of the best comeback...i heard on RV

seriously..

chorus- latex apex..loooooooooooooooooooooooool funny shit b...

am lovin this track..

k you come in a lil loud....got that respond in a ny min....quality is a lil slackin....flow is sick from the start....the voice drop had me chuckle. flow is way better then his was....lyrics are at the same so far....hook is even filled with multi's its pretty sick and catchy, "kicked out of oyd?" fa real?....haha man affection.....true, he does have alot of dudes on his jock......just by flow alone i like this one better then apex's shit, but i also didnt think apex did the best to his ability, his was longer....but this was concise and to the point....round one goes to Q, cuz apex didnt come with what he should have....both good drops, this one just seemed to be better....up that quality, and its illness.....


changeing his to apex so yall can know who im talking bout there so it doesnt get confusing

^^preciate da feed homeboy












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wow...ya voice comin right in, damn almost aint recognize it was u..been so long since I listened to you...ok intro was unnecessary an sounded exceedingly wack..shoulda jus let beat play....riding the snares a lil too abrupt...not liking how ya rhyme words is ending so abruptly, sounds like u wrote this to a slower beat then switched beats...ya delivery is better than I remember...but still sorely lacks any personality...it fluctuates but it doesn't come across right..cant really elaborate...hook was ah'ight again it was a unnecessary plug an didn't really fit wit the verses...lmao@ u mentioning me...anyways..lyrically you have the idea but execute it poorly...u jus bluntantly say shit...like instead u dissing apexx u tell a story about him...examples: "u think JFK was shot by elvis u dumb as shit?" HOW IS THAT A DISS? a difference of opinion is a punchline? " job u got none?" again wheres the punch? "ya flow kept stalling like teamone"...first line that was even remotely insulting..."real estate, you real or fake?"<--was that a diss on his age?<--u had the setup then spit sum nonsense where a punch should be. u bluntly call him a pedofile wit no punch..."got kicked outta OYD for being wack?" are u kidding me?..where is the punch!!!?...lyrically it was u bragging wit a few "references" to apexx u never actually dissing him...it was like u put a conversation or should I say a monologue "influenced" by apexx over a beat...this would be insulting in a conversation but its wack in a diss track...stylistically u was alil stronger than pexx but lyrically u had absolutely nothing to offer...an ya intro & hook took away from the track as far as for bumpage purposes IMO. Both yall had decent to lackluster drops not wack but nothing to fret over neither. step it up...for all the shit ya toss at each other in LL I wanted MORE!

^^^I appreciate the elaborate feed...but, I really don't take much of what you say about my disses with a grain of salt...

#1...If my style of dissing is so ineffective, then why would 16 bars provoke Apexx to drop a 4+ minute diss track?

Preemptive Strike did that...

#2...My style of writin disses is different from yours...Ill Gramm even said that...my style is wy harder than yours triple...So, all this "it doesn't hit" is bull shit...

#3...Before you and anyone else come in here on my nuts like "Q, STFU, you can't accept criticism"...Yea I can...Im jus bein assertive about it cuz I know WTF I'm doin...

I can piss people off wit my lyrics and THAT = SUCCESS in writing it.

Nuff said.

But hey do what you do........1

lmao, oh boy @ the thick stacks of bullshit.

got kicked outta OYD = NEEEVVVVVEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR happened, AND I got asked back twice lmao so you're obviously makin that shit up FAKE!!!

some shit about something you said I told you two years ago about some shit 10 years ago?? I didn't even know you 2 years ago so FAKE!!!

Said I had sex with a minor?? FAKE!!!!

"conehead"? oh yeah..that was the supposed "diss" you put out that not one single person agreed with lmao FAKE!!!

here you go saying I'm not fat: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...at.#post2744724

^^yet...in this rhyme where you're hard up as fuck for some material, you say I'm fat. Are you fuckin serious???? Sayin I'm fat, dog are you for real???!!!!! That's like saying you're straight. FAKE!!!

^there go your 5 uhh....would-be "personals":rolleyes:


Oh yeah here's your feedback:

your flow is as redundant and as run on as ever you still sound like a cheap knock-off biggie smalls as always, which is a disgrace to biggie. You can't formulate or throw a punch to save your life as usual, and your "disses" aren't "disses" they're just blabber that goes nowhere. you sound the exact same on every song, just saying differnet shit, nothing new here and conicidentlaly nothing true here either.

At least your quality doesn't suck <---stretching to find the "silver lining".

hmm.. yeah originality points for "gaypexx" and "latex" that's complex rhymin at it's best, looks like those 7 years you spent rappin on the internet has finally paid off. lol.

you'll get the hang of it someday. try starting with the basics like writing a hook that's at least appealing.


try again man. I say in 1 rhyme what takes you 3.

keep em comin

errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr up






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no offense to apexx or nothing, but none of that was really feed, just a defense.....and if the feeling is necissary to put up a defense, then uhh, obvioulsy it hit him a lil harder then he would like to admit.....

wait...

yup you OYD too...

meh shit was ok beat choice was ok flow was aight but i listened to Apexx's track and he DID get you imo...but not like it'll matter to you coz i associate with Apexx but it's straight facts...the only real piece of feed was Trips in here so far...and a lot of what Trip said i agree with...

meh on a whole pretty regular style Q dissing ish...lose the hooks...if you dissin someone then we don't wanna hear someone repeat themselves...ya get me?

yes i am oyd too, but what i said has a valid point and you can't ingore that....

he did the exact same thing in my thread, so I figure I'd return the favor, just with real feedback. dispelling bullshit is far from a defense fool. You made a big deal when I posted in his thread, why didn't you make a big deal when he did it in my thread?


yeah..impatrial my ass.


50% of OYD is bitches in disguize.

tell a friend.

dude if the shit wasnt true then it lacks credibility true, and it lowers the quality of it, i agree, i said that in your thread ill say it here toward q, i didnt make a big deal of it, my comment was more in response to triple n saying that it wasnt hard hitting, cuz with the response you left to it, it showed you were more affected by it then you lead on, so really whos in disguise here, its not like im sayin q wasnt affected to your diss he responded like that as well.....im just sayin your the bitch in disguise if your gon pretend the diss didnt get under your skin....and any comment you make to this is just prooving my point even more....so shut up man....even the only "impartial" person here still said q got this round.....so drop it, move on, and if it bothers you which obvoiusly it does, make another fuckin track, and try take him in round 2....thats all i gots to say

^^so check it out...here's your logic:

"since you posted here...uhh...you're offended"

me: "dog these "punches" never happened and aren't real. at what point in that would I feel offended?" seriously... put your self in my position and ask your self that. how could I be possibly be bothered... by something that never happened?

exactly.

doesn't even make sense arguin dog. I'm gettin the fuckin facts straight, and you're goin off on some pussy shit. what are you like 14??? "ohh shit son..if you respond you're hurt ooohh" lmao this can't be real lmao.

q already saw me saying that none of this is true. he didn't respond to my post because he knows he can't respond. how are you gonna argue with something you know you're lyin about?


that's exactly my whole point, like...this isn't even a "diss" to me, it contains 0 facts. so..what was the point of droppin it?

first off if you had half a brain 286...month year....so yea im fourteen....another, the urge to respond in any matter shows it got to you, cuz if it wouldnt have bothered you, you woulda just laughed and moved on......simple clear cut answer.....you dont need to explain yourself if it doesnt affect you.....n what i was sayin was TO triple n not you, sayins that if you felt the need to "straighten facts out" you were bothered by the diss more than you lead on....and how could you be bothered other then punches....simple his flow coulda been better then yours, the sound of the track coulda been better, beat, idea....lyrics, metaphors. multi's, tons of things could have made you jealous that yours wasnt up there with his, hence the bothered, there are plenty of reasons and its funny that you are fronting like it didnt get to you when you are still posting....

^^lmao, bro... i dunno what the hell you're talkin about and I really don't think you do either

kkkk... yeah intro.. was a lil over the top.. but got the point... quotables like a mother fucker in this one... punches was keeellllinnn.... love the obie beat...shit was hot dawg...

^^Preciate da feed


holla








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intro made me bored...

do you have a lisp, or is it just me?

gaypexx....haha, that's original...
'sarcasm'

i really agree with triple on this, and your still on his dick...

but here's your breakdown from a non oyd, for once.

flow...6/10, really boring
delivery...4 to mr lispy
lyrics...5 no quotables in my opinion, you had 0 wordplay that hit.
manaffection was the most decent line...to me.
shouldn't you get someone else to do your intro, if your saying fuckem up q...
quality...6, voice too loud
extras. 0/10

in my opinion ppexx got you.

seems he's in a different league than you.

word, this was an ill track man, word

Preciate da feed bro ham




and LOL @ this clown Jpoll talking about a lisp...Cheap shot clown...I don't have a lisp.


on some "s" and "z" words, I have some sibilance in my vocals...But, it's not even that bad or that noticeable.

Keep the hate coming ass chap.






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Alright I listened to both tracks... the fatality and then this one.

Evaluation for Both

Apexx fricking KO'ed... Q with the punches. There were some that I plain wasn't feeling but he actually had some in his drop.

Q's delivery was better at the beginning but got boring quick. Apexx's delivery on his track was decent but I wasn't feeling none of the beats to begin with. I'm used to the APEXX that bust my ear drums when he dissing a dude. But again, the beats he used made it seem unnecessary to do so at times.

Flow - ahhh for flow Apexx got it for a diss, you need what Q would call the "stall" type from time to time in disses because you WANT your listeners #1 to hear your words clearly and #2 to get ooooohed and aaaaaaahed at the time of the punch which sadly in Q's case, he can't come up with an actual punch to begin with. Q's flow was decent, one may call cute but it got boring fast, not just fast EXTREMELY fast. Seems like Q tries to get complex with his rhyme scheme and puts unnecessary b.s. in the diss like the opener, it's prolly best not to brag right before you diss, or at least the way you did it sounded mad retarded. The hook was lame, i don't know why people edging it to call it decent, it was on beat but horrid. Apexx, when it comes to the beat switch, the beats got better and your lines came more unexpectant than the first half so that was a plus.

I don't know what's the point of the break down cuz it's obvious who won this round, but I'mma sum it up right now. Apexx's track had a few generics, but apparently Q's did too calling Apexx fat, and conehead? WTF lmfao... Seem like Q was stretching for personals. But the problem is that Q has a few personals that can make great punches but can't set them up. Apexx has good punches and the personals pretty much follow the same path as his punches. Both y'all been at it for some time now, so it's hard to hear new personals.

But with the tracks given Apexx won, I expected more from both tho.

intro is horrid....made me cringe and turn it down for a sec.

you kick in....

flow is pretty good....a lot of this is self hype stuff. no punchlines really.

stalling like teamone was the best punch. it wasnt exactly good in my opinion.....but atleast it was a punchline.

hook......just not good

2nd verse comes in. same flow. kinda gets a lot repetitive.


overall there was an extreme lack of punches and disses.....

i honestly dont think apexx is fat or has a conehead. so i would consider some of those fake.

i dunno...just didnt like it. i think apexx won this round......anxious to see what happens with the next drops if there is any

aight. i see a lot of bullshit in this thread. i aint gon name no names. but since i aint been here and i have absolutely no history with either one of you lmao, ima give ya'll some honest feedback.


i heard both cuts - fatality and now this one.

ima do Q first cause i just got done listening to his.

Q: aight intro could have been cut out untill the verse. flow was kinda choppy. you was riding the snares and shit, but i wasent really feeling the flow a whole lot. not bad, but wasent up to Q par. Lyrics was aiiight. i hear alooot of filler in their. in my opinion if i was gonna have filler id try to make it like generic punches. cause then atleast youd have some punches in their. best line i have to agree that it was the man affection. beat choice was good. i dont really rate or feed on quality, cause as long as you spittin thas all that matters to me.

but overall, it wasent a bad diss. the style was more like a song than a diss. it sounded rushed, wasent up to what i normally expect for you. still on the upper scale as far as RV goes, but thats not saying a whole lot.


apexx: aight. came right in. had a nice battle style. flow wasnt perfect, but it sounded like a battle flow. you should have stopped after the first two beat switches. last two killed ya diss. but first two was on point. even ya filler was decent. clear voice. i could understand everything you said. clear. last 1-2 minutes was kinda wack tho. pistons line = no no. so played. but i mean, Do You. not much to complain about untill 2-3 minute mark. to me there were quite a few quotables.


over all i enjoyed apexx more. more of a battle track than Q's. both had decent tracks.

p.s: i was a little more critical on my feedback because battle tracks are objective, while song feedback is more "take it for what it is" type tracks. Hope this isnt mistook by either.

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