***RV DISS*** Did you Get Dissed???***
 

RV DISS



Beat: some grimey shit
1st verse: ChoKahn
hook: J.Summers
2nd verse: TitoBronsky
hook: J.Summers
3rd verse: Jay286


Juss gettin shit off our chests. :shoot: We takin shots at a few kats who gettin involved in shit they got no business stickin they noses in. :thumbup:


Enjoi


links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229729

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229663

i like this beat, good choice

chokahn, flow is cool, adlibs are way off... rhyme scheme is very predictable and boring, flow falls off at times aswell and sounds worse cos of libs, lyrics are ok, delivery is lacking.... this hook is fuckin terrible, tito.. flow is better, adlibs are lined up proper but too loud, delivery is better aswell, lyrics wise nothing grabbed me though, dnt like the hook, jay, flow is ok, that "wrecklace" rhyme sounded soooo awkward and forced bitches and kitten doesnt rhyme.

meh it was ok, nothing special though.

i just meant youll be a laughing stock like her.....dont read too much into it

im not disputing the line, im jus sayin, u ended the line before with "bitches" then the second with "kitten" and they dont rhyme

Preciate the feed leady.... please keep the conversation to a minimum in this thread though.....


thanx

first verse; not bad, not your best, flow is not bad, lyrics are simple, adlibs are not good
Hook: really bad
Second:really good, love your voice, nice flow
hook: bad bad bad
third: best verse in the track, voice is dope, delivery is cool, nice one

overall not bad, just fix the hook

First verse is garbage, nothing special nothing that mind blowing just absolute generic bullshit with nothing original at all. Vocals sound weird, allmost gay, but i spose that would be a compliment to OYD :thumbup:
Quality is ok, but meh, fuck'a quality dude sucked.

Hook, NO! Its wack, J summers is a ok emcee but wtf @ this hook.

second verse is ok, but again very generic and nothing original at all. Boring as fuck. Obviously better than first verse, btu still nothing dope in this

Hook, well what can i say? NO!

Last verse is the only enjoyable verse, guy came strong with it and actually brought somthing dope to this track.

overall absolute boring diss, you guys are too involved in RV.
But mind you...
"were not RV" BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

lol...@ that................

i'm not gotta break the whole entire thing down becase that'll take to long and i want to go to TJmaxx and shop for curtains.....but this was real nice...all emcees came correct....hook was alright to me....solid.......i'm the jugganaut bitch...

this is a cool track...the beat is tight...totally nice....all uh y'all had nice flows BUT chokhan to me went off at some points but ugh he was gd there.....lyrics were pretty decent too from all 3...nice nice...nothingelse to say!

wun

preciate the feed yall


see YSDAT..... was that so hard????

valid feed will not be delted... even if its hate......



:thumbup:

first verse is cool flows cool delivery is cool too dont unsderstand how ppl hatin on u....hooks cool jus needs to be mixed better .tito flows cool lol @ the seaman line deliverys cool gud shit....hook again yea it coulda been better....last verse is cool proly the best flow but tito aint to far behind him nice diss .....gud shit...

^^^ leady just calling shit how he sees it, and i see where he is coming from...don't completely agree but i see his points...on the other hand, Ysdat is just bitched up about board arguments and seen a opportunity so decided to talk trash.....thats wusup w feed for my verse as i see it, can't speak for others.

verse dude blew... i like the chorus.. second cat be G, adlibs kick good... next guy decent... over all didn't hit very hard

I like how textcees comment on people's songs when they've never dropped a track, EVER.

beat works

Cho...like what u said more than how u said it...You're getting lazy with your flow...You need to elevate it.

Hook: J Summer...u need to stay off the fuckin drugs bro...this hook was ass

Tito: love ur rhyming/flow...But, dawg, you gonna have to stop using "faggot" in your raps, esp. since u have a gay guy (me) in your crew.

Jay: verse a tad too compressed...Your flow/delivery was clean tho...


decent fellas


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no doubt......... preciate the feed yall..........


and q....... it wasnt no disrespect toward you .... i'll mind that next time

da boogie woogie

lmfao @ the hook.

beat straight west coast


first dude - i like his flow a lilbit. slurrin your rhymin words a lil bit.

chorus - eh - its aight

Tito - When you came in, you come in good. adlibs is real real nice. like the rhyme scheme. best verse on track.

third verse - eh, your flow is shaky. rhymin words arent really getting my head bobbin you know ? just work on the flow of your verse. you'll be straight.

over all an aight track. chorus lyrically was bringin it down a lil bit. but aight drop. 5'sh/10

first dude was ok...fell off tword the end...should have punched in

second dude rapped about gay things...like gargling semen..."lips around my dick"...and "ur getting hard with this"...wtf...please stop rapping...garabge...and fuck a adlib...ur production skillz wont get past someone with a good ear for content

3rd dude same mainstream bullshit flow...boring..."speaking real talk"...when ur whole verse was dissing what your doing by posting this track...cheezy

p.s. i thought this was suppost to be a RV diss....you know like we would hear some names called out...instead it was a diss directed tword the entire site or whoever posts music on internet rap boards...so in a way...you were kinda dissin yourselves on ur own track :huh:

the best thing about the song is the hook...HA

and if anyone is hating on my opinion...you know like thinking some random person is hating on their music...call me out in a battle...im not like these kids on here judging or hating on other emcees tracks...i speak on what i know about

you dont need to agree, i mean afterall everybody has their own opinions, people know me by now and i think have started to accept that no matter my views on a person, i allways tell it how it i see it, i got respect for anybody as an artist, but that doesnt mean i respect them as a person get me, anyways uppin for these guys to get sum feed.

.............................

This was...pac and biggie collabin thats just unfuckable wit it..haha

Cho- came tru nice...quality is upped b and u gettin so freaking comfortable on the mic wow....some nice lines here and there...

El Padrino- i have to say teach me how the fuck u do yo addlibs..lol am lovin it..man...

Hook- is nice...but not catchy...but i think since its just an rv diss instead of a deep song ya'll intentions was not to make it catchy...

overall well done yaddadadameannnnnnnn

1st verse: Dope line was "now it's OYD, to hell with the other crews" only cuz it's so true. Only people getting feed is OYD from mostly OYD.

Hook: WEAK

2nd verse: semen wordplay = played. I liked your flow n' energy, but really generic.

Hook: Who did this? It's lame....am I not RV? lol

3rd verse: this guy had the best verse, flow fell off a bit n' was awkward, but lyrically it was the best....

overall: wtf did the juggernaut sample have to do with anything, seemed like y'all put it on for the fuck of it. beat choice was kinda boring. pretty lame diss cuz y'all only mentioned like 1 or 2 names.

ok ok ok
cho your flow is good, for the most part it is. your dubs are off though man. one thing I noticed you hardly dissed anyone, you babbled on to much man. Get more lyrical and diss some faggots man, make it really mean somin.

the hook was really pathetic, no offense but it didn't make sense. "your not rv" wtf does that mean? and it was off snare in the 2nd hook.

tito man, your voice is mad ill, but you didn't diss anyone, I'd expect you to diss me but you didn't. You had nothin but g-unit type lyrics, like nothin was goin around lyrically.

last cat, not bad but as well nothin goin on lyrically, no punches. Not many people mentioned either.

-BP

Paranoid... lol... you juss mad cuz you got DROPPED from the roster....

dont take it personal.... its Business.... lol....

you shouldnt slap a lion in the face if you dont want your arm chewed off.... so i suggest you calm your overzealous ass the fuck down and play your position lil nigga...


Werd

The first verse wasnt all that good. Nice choice of beat,but the hook ruined it.
The lyrics wasnt all that good,i guess it flowed ok.

Not a very good diss track in my opinion tho.