iRise vs Sangre
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
30 min to drop
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Swaying

fuck you..lets go :cussing:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-24-06 at 03:01 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

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Sangre has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-06 03:03 PM.

iRise has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-06 03:04 PM.

Aint no way that your drillin me, so protect yah neck from my flying guillotines
You killin me? sangre retarded but still ain't got no diss-abilities
I'm billin this nigga, with scripts that'll be sure to leave you disabled
Hell..sangre spits nothing but scrambled lines like pirate cable
Shit, you rolling with rockers, and in class get pushed in lockers
While i'de have sangre's carrear drop online faster then nervous rope walkers

iRise..Hmm sum up in 1 bar that weak shit he'll bring
multi, Wack punch, bolded and squiggily lines in between
Its seen, Sangre's great you carnt back this..
Yeah Urise....
.... straight into the league of wackness
I like to give credit, You aint a rapper or a clone
Your styles a unique mix...
.... Of everybodys else but your own

Blah enough for this fag

uppin for votes

This was feedback posted for iRise
 

polls............................................. .....

Voted For: iRise

Aint no way that your drillin me, so protect yah neck from my flying guillotines
You killin me? sangre retarded but still ain't got no diss-abilities
1ST LINE WAS A REALLY WAK FILLER BUT THE 2ND HAD GOOD WORDPLAY

I'm billin this nigga, with scripts that'll be sure to leave you disabled
Hell..sangre spits nothing but scrambled lines like pirate cable
WAK LINE. i GOT THE PUNCH BUT IT WAS STILL WAK

Shit, you rolling with rockers, and in class get pushed in lockers
While i'de have sangre's carrear drop online faster then nervous rope walkers
OK BAR i GUESS. NOTHING SPECIAL

ur verse was str8. u put in a punch here and there but u killed urself wit the filler lines. try making each line mean something good specialy in a battle wit only 6 lines


iRise..Hmm sum up in 1 bar that weak shit he'll bring
multi, Wack punch, bolded and squiggily lines in between
WAK

Its seen, Sangre's great you carnt back this..
Yeah Urise....
.... straight into the league of wackness
WAK

I like to give credit, You aint a rapper or a clone
Your styles a unique mix...
.... Of everybodys else but your own
WAK

ur verse was just wak man. elevate dawg. thats all I care to say.

V/irise - please return the favor wit an honest vote on one of my battles.

Voted For: iRise

Well
Sangre
iRise..Hmm sum up in 1 bar that weak shit he'll bring
multi, Wack punch, bolded and squiggily lines in between
Nuttin Serious couldve been worded better
Its seen, Sangre's great you carnt back this..
Yeah Urise....
.... straight into the league of wackness
to predictable man
I like to give credit, You aint a rapper or a clone
Your styles a unique mix...
.... Of everybodys else but your own
your best bar and yet its not so effective

Overall I think you shouldnt lighten up on anyone no matter who bcuz if ppl expect you tto drop strong and you drop weak even if its better you let certain expectations down I never seen ya stuff b4 but this def could use some work stay up man

IRise
Aint no way that your drillin me, so protect yah neck from my flying guillotines
You killin me? sangre retarded but still ain't got no diss-abilities
The second line was very well put together ..nice

I'm billin this nigga, with scripts that'll be sure to leave you disabled
Hell..sangre spits nothing but scrambled lines like pirate cable
..Hmmm Not nuttin sweet jus average...

Shit, you rolling with rockers, and in class get pushed in lockers
While i'de have sangre's carrear drop online faster then nervous rope walkers
...Good...

overall you didnt do too bad you actually came strong compared to Sangre although you could use some work in some areas you did very well and thats why my vote goes to you ......

my v/ ARise

This was feedback posted for Sangre
 

checking the score.............................................

Voted For: Sangre

One Sided Battle.Sangre Really Didnt Have Much But Also Didnt Need Much.What He Did Bring Was Enough To Take The Win.iRise Came With Weak And Played Punches.Nothin That Was Enough To Make Any Difference In The Battle.Im Sure If Sangre Actually Tried This Woulda Been An Over-Kill

v/ Sangre

Voted For: Sangre

like to give credit, You aint a rapper or a clone
Your styles a unique mix...
.... Of everybodys else but your own
vs
Shit, you rolling with rockers, and in class get pushed in lockers
While i'de have sangre's carrear drop online faster then nervous rope walkers


overall this is a onesided battle. Irise you dropped very weak and didnt really hit in any aspect of the battle, you ropponent definitly out shined you this time.

Voted For: Sangre

Sangre:
iRise..Hmm sum up in 1 bar that weak shit he'll bring
multi, Wack punch, bolded and squiggily lines in between
3/10 - OK Opener.
Its seen, Sangre's great you carnt back this..
Yeah Urise....
.... straight into the league of wackness
4/10 - OK.
I like to give credit, You aint a rapper or a clone
Your styles a unique mix...
.... Of everybodys else but your own
5/10 - Niice Closer.


iRise:
Aint no way that your drillin me, so protect yah neck from my flying guillotines
You killin me? sangre retarded but still ain't got no diss-abilities
5/10 - Niice Opener.
I'm billin this nigga, with scripts that'll be sure to leave you disabled
Hell..sangre spits nothing but scrambled lines like pirate cable
2/10 - Meh.
Shit, you rolling with rockers, and in class get pushed in lockers
While i'de have sangre's carrear drop online faster then nervous rope walkers
4/10 - OK Closer.

This was feedback posted for iRise
 

Better verse overall.. seemed more focused on winning and agressive... flow seemed kinda sketchy sometime but shit was iight coulda been better i guess....

Voted For: Sangre

I vote for Sangre. It was kind of hard to decide which one to vote between but Sangre got it. I like the last bar of your verse. That was a nice closer. U also had better punches than Irise so that's why you get my vote.

Voted For: iRise

v-iRise

srry Sangre this kid stomped u, thats the best u could come up with in 30 mins...serious son, u need to get some skillz if u wanna say on this site...he had u on the multis, personals and on the flow, u got brutally murdered on the punches...my vote goes to iRise

Voted For: iRise

irise-your lines were a bit long but still effective pretty good use of the rhyme scheme good punches in the verse could use some harder punches but you got the job done none the less good flow...brought out ur punches good.

overall: 5.5/10

sangre:Your verse was structured weird but flowed okay.....you had some okay punches not enough to beat your opponent..never underestimate ur opponent then u come weaker then him.....i think you should stay fluent with punches through out and not die down.....keep elevatin....

overall: 4/10

v/irise

rtf on my battle verse rexless once he drops...peace.

This was feedback posted for iRise
 

i like ya name but yu need to elavate ........5'z p0ppin

Voted For: iRise

Both ppl need to elevate. There was no personals......

But iRise's shit was easier to read. So he had a better flow.

Plus, he had better wordplay.

So i'm gonna go with iRise.