XJenxIsxAxBozzX vs .Theory.
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no Hate votes.
No Dickriders
people who cant vote or a auto win for me
Spul
dr punchlines


Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 06-25-06 at 03:53 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

XJenxIsxAxBozzX has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-06 04:20 AM.

faggot, think u're cool cuz u got some net friends
im not here to bond wit u, u're here just to make amens//
u ugly fuck, i buck shots, u buck teeth
the fitted to big for ya head, like a magnum on a Chinese//
You cryin bout bein more ghetto then a black man
u're garbage, ya jamacian urself wack, don't know how to act man//
You may see me as a concided little bitch
I guess I am cause I want a dude wit more than a 3 inch dick//
no1 respects you, in this battle...u're a gonner, er'yone fears me
droppin u from long stories, cuz it seems er'yone has taken Theory//

Can someone please delete that post....I posted my verse in the wrong box....please.

lmao .

itz all good.

uppin this to delete for Jen. :thumbup:

.Theory. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-06 06:19 PM.

Lmao 2 this Wack shit.

fuck this slut.

lets get down to buisness.

Fuck jen she aint nothing but a fuckin slut..
only proves why you dickridin so much..
Afraid to use punches cus it’ll fist this cunt.
Last time you were in the hood you was under a car..
Cus if you were as ghetto as what you say you are..
That watch would of costed you more than that fuckin scar.
Your in a street crew and the only chick in the gang..
Pretty sure they only let you in cus..
Of how known you are on the block for suckin cock for fame.
Fuck this bitch yet its like a taste of rapverse with her.
Cus with all the bullshit you talk you your mouth..
You wonder why we follow the leader in the cyphers.

uppin this for votes fam . :thumbup:

uppin this for votes fam :thumbup:

Little pussy gotta lie to a chick to get his info for a battle....fuckin faggot. Shit is on again!

uppin this for honest votes fam . :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for XJenxIsxAxBozzX
 

Both of you need to work on your punches a lot. Very simplistic from you both... Which is ok, but you need to read some battles, in order to get a feel for what a creative punchline is.... Because if you are too simple, then anyone can write like you. Although I could've sworn theory was a lot better than he dropped, maybe he dropped below his normal. either way, I felt Jen came with slightly harder punches and actually had multies rather than one syllable rhyming.

This was feedback posted for XJenxIsxAxBozzX
 

i cant vote or theory will say its hate...

but worddd

Voted For: .Theory.

theory takes this to be honest cos he had a better flow and structure was way better...jen plz learn to count ur syllabs..b4 u fuck with any1 in a battle fuck with the cyphers first...no hate juts and advice..theory had more creativity...his lines made more sense...both came wack a d threw more swear words than punches..but at least theory saved his ass for the lil creativity in the closer...and dude 'fame' dosent rhyme with 'gang'..ok?...u can do way better than this tho...i guess this is just another nubee win right here...ugh w/e

jen neva show ur prewrittings...let the wackness or dopeness comeout once..which is in the battles!!!

:thumbup:



hit my battle...thanx


...and be honest...thanx again!

Voted For: .Theory.

man, dis must of been a personal thing cuz dis was a average battle

im vote'n for Theory cuz he jus overral seemed like an actual rapper

no really need for an explanation

yo, i was kind enuff 2 vote on u two, plz do da same my battle which is up right now

Voted For: XJenxIsxAxBozzX

faggot, think u're cool cuz u got some net friends
im not here to bond wit u, u're here just to make amens//

^
Not a solid opener, but it was ok. Could of dopped ALOT better for your opener though.

u ugly fuck, i buck shots, u buck teeth
the fitted to big for ya head, like a magnum on a Chinese//

^
Ok personal, and good meta. one of your better punches in this battle even if it is slightly played.

You cryin bout bein more ghetto then a black man
u're garbage, ya jamacian urself wack, don't know how to act man//
^
kind fo a persoanl, but wasnt excicuted properly, should of been alot better, turned into more of a filler.

You may see me as a concided little bitch
I guess I am cause I want a dude wit more than a 3 inch dick//
^
ROFL! cool punch


no1 respects you, in this battle...u're a gonner, er'yone fears me
droppin u from long stories, cuz it seems er'yone has taken Theory//
^ meh, closer should of been alot better, but it done the trick i spose.



Theory your verse doesnt rhyme at all.
well with the exception of car,are,scar. Basically dopped weak as fuck and didnt do anything in this battle,except link to her posts but still didnt excecute the linking properly.

meh.

weak battle, both dropped fucked up.

This was feedback posted for XJenxIsxAxBozzX
 

wow this battle was wack as fuck. I don't have enough posts to vote but here's the breakdown:

NOTHING

v.s

u ugly fuck, i buck shots, u buck teeth
the fitted to big for ya head, like a magnum on a Chinese

^that line wasn't even good either, closest to being quotable tho.

OVerall, ehh @ this battle. Theory I don't know wtf @ how you got 10 wins dude, no hate, I could easily take you. but i mean wtf HOW MANY LINKS DO YOU REALLY NEED KID?!?! that shit was played out way long ago. you just said shit, NO WIT at all.
jen, you had about the same, you had some played ass wordplay attempts. BUT ATLEAST that shows you thinkin' and trying to get something going. but overall, you need to elevate too

overall, weak ass battle but Jen got it

v/Jen

uppin this for votes fam .

hit my battle with honest votes u two or my vote is getting off...



and dats a promise!!

This was feedback posted for .Theory.
 

The fuck are your random three-line bars...eat yourself before you meat yourself, fool.

This was feedback posted for XJenxIsxAxBozzX
 

wow..............suuuuuupper wak on both side...at first I was gonna vote but whos' got the least wak verse would just be waste of time really...theory..u just need to work on ur flow and structure. ur rhyme style is too basic and I feel like I could get more from reading a lil kids story time book then one of ur verses man. just come more complex and keep ur line to 2 lines equals 1 bar concept dawg and u'll be str8.
Jen...u did a lil better then theory but u had a line that just killlllllled it for me. " ya jamacian urself wack"? u just made urself wak by saying that shit. I liked some parts of ur verse but that one line just fucked it up. u both came too commen wit the she's a girl so she must be a slut and he's a guy so he must have small dick shit. thats for niggaz that cant spit. try harder next time both of u. 1

w/e word tho . :cool:

uppin this for votes fam . :thumbup: