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Ike - Goodnight
word...im bout to drop my feedback links...so dont close this n shit...
havent dropped a track on RV in a while.....so yea... www.soundclick.com/youngike Goodnight listen closely...its a nice lil story track |
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the knife to the wrist line seemed off, but the hook was banannas...very thought provoking, deep, and well preformed....effects on it just added to the ill ass appeal of it, there are parts where the verses can be upped, honestly i say you work on that n take this to a studio n try n get it on a demo...this is the kinda hook that can get you noticed....
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I love this song
I downloaded it and i'm puttin it on my ghetto ass mp3 player :cool: the story is tight...hook is ill..verse is good..this is the dopest shit i've heard ina while on here |
Listening...
I loved this beat...I used this beat for Birds in the Metal...lmfao... Flow is nice. I'm liking it a shitload. Lyrics are deep...I'm fucking loving this track. I'm loving the hook as well...true shit true shit. And what's even better...I can relate to this track. Wow...this song is amazing man. WOOWWW at that closer. :shocked: You are one talented mu fucka. That's all I gotta say man. Amazing track. Best I've ever heard on RV, period. |
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Lol... beat is dope man, with the guitar strumming shit in the background.. dope man. Flowed on point, good shit... da fool was muthafuckin fed up!.. word :). Someone's gotta be happy somewhere, right? Right... Lyrics were good. Nice lil story here man. The hook I was feeling... niceness man.. keep it up on these tracks, foolio! Overall song is dope man... give me this beat. -_- Might do me a lil story track on it also, hoe! Keep droppin tracks... 8/10 Now gimmie your damn mic! haha, just kidding... ...no seriously, give me it. -_- |
aight....
the first verse... the reverb sounds heavy but the flow is good..the lyrics is good too and i can feel the emotion that comes wit it.. hook..i like this hook it sounds good man... 2nd verse.. the flow is still on point and everything..i think the second verse is betta then the first verse IMO.. Hook again... 3rd verse..flow is still on point and everything..the emotion is real good yo i can feel it i can really pick up on how u wanted it to feel and everything.. I like this track man its real nice..i like the beat too it fits the concept of the whole song perfect to me man..good job.. can u hit this up and leave some feed man... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230364 |
^ favor has been returned....thanks for the feed people
and i just uploaded a louder version...the one i had was a bit low |
intro is niiice
1st verse comes in nicely. mayne i can really relate to this. i dont know about me goin emo n shit takin a knife to my wrist but i'm really feelin this track. delivery is good, lyrics are deep....nice emotion. i dunno if you produced this or not but it's good none the less. hook is raw as fuck. ya know, there's really nothin i dont like about this, seriously. i'm likin the little voice samples n shit too. i gotta download this.....pz |
hey think you could RTF - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479
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Good beat choice man, I loved the shit LE did to it as well. Your intro was kinda weird, I disliked the echo type you gave it man. But when you start rappin it was ill fa sure, You had a insanely good emotion. You delivered nice a meaningful also with deadly lyrics. The story was appealing to me, it had a solid influence to it. Good job man.
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feed has been left...dope shit... uppin to the fuckin top |
always great with the topical tracks, definetly a dope ass track, period |
Returning the feed
Playing..... these guitar rifs remind me of a ben harper track. Intro vocals are cool, dubs on it are a good effect, production and quality are fucking solid!! Emotion is solid, flows on point, lyrics and content are nice. hook's solid bro, this entire track is deep as fuck, feeling it!!! Feeling the concept of her writing back bro..... your a fucking beast bro!! Solid track. |
beats not really my type of thing...but i'm feeling it...
intro is cool so far...beat kicks in real nice man, like the mellow vibe here...u come in way nice...maybe a tad loud...rhymes r tightness, flow is hot, kinda like where ur gooing so far, wow, heavy man...diddnt see that coming...hook comes in hot, think it's to loud tho....got my noddin my head though, ohh sample is sickness yo, damn bro....deepness here n shit, some mood altering shit !....like it a lot..your delevery is great here man, emotion is flawless, liked this a lot man....your deff one of my fav rappers on RV manyou been on some mushy shit..lol...I like this one a lot though, seriously |
thanks................uppin to the top...leave links and ill rtf
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all i gotta say its pretty dope even though its not my style.
lol on last verse when you said something about you loved your son and he died or something like that, i was like ike is gay lol but then i got it. dope shit keep it up bruv. ~1~ |
Listenin', im really feelin beats like this...drums are owning this beat crazy...intro is real nice...damn "heaven was a blurry vision", flow is dope here fam..and delivery fits the track..u can tell you spent time on this...DAMN this hook is crazy...lyrically this song is amazing..production is fine..vocal levels are all fine...and I liked how you used the sample too..damn..multis during this makes the track hot too...Hook is dpe...fam this is definitely an amazing track another one of the best on rv, Ive just heard yours and Tha Q's track and im blown away..emotion is gr8 all the way thru..and im lovin the end...the story bout the child..."room surrounded by death was now clowded by life"...10/10 - 2nd ive given in a day damn
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WHOA......
i mean wow...damn..lol im loving it... The beginning seems a little off when your talkin but it picks up and then when you start your verse..i was like WOW...this is a great topical track... hook is B-A-N-A-N-A-S...holy ish..can't even..damn.. second verse kinda died down in the tone and emotion but not in the feel of the song...it was still a great verse man.. hook is still bananas lol.... third verse emotion picked up a little more and the content is still crazy, holy fuck at that ender..................... *Downloads this* Thanks for a great song.. |
What's hot:
beat is good flow is good lyrics are well thought out hook flew by...so I missed it the first time...but it's good. What's not: intro is too long...get to the point I'm still not buying your delivery, what others call "emotion" I call whining on track and it's annoying to me...It's not bad...but, it's mostly because your voice is still finding it's place...i.e., puberty Your flow becomes repetitive after the 1st verse and I lost interest. Overall: it's a good track, but not the best I've heard on RV by a long shot. Keep em rollin. **yea, same beat LE used for something... |
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beat is cool....i like it cos it a type dat wud get u to reflect u know,you sound like u forcing ur words i.e u pushing ur breathe or w/e too much..sounds like u forcing to get the emotion i feel it shud come spontaneously get me?...and as for the hook?...i like it very nice..no too much words or too much yelling and stuff..dats a nice touch there...well apart from ur forced voice and stuff,the topic was nice...yeah clare and nice wording and stuff...i liked it...quality is tight!...better than mine :mad:...lol nah u gd dawg just dat u forced u wording out...idk if u get me...w/e... overall...nice kinna got me reflecting and stuff too:thumbup: |
aiight, peepin...
beat is pretty nice. likin' it first verse is coo. Nice lil flow on this. Dope ass emotion, and as usual you bring the heat with the lyrics. so overall a tight lil verse. not much more to sayt hook is nice. is pretty catchy. so props to that. second verse, seems like you upped the emotion from first verse on this one. good flow, delivery. lyrics tight as usual. fire verse. good shittt hook again third verse, flows there, lyrics. a nice verse again overall, i liked this track a lot man. good shit. flow was there, lyrics. dope ass feel to it. I might have not said much feedback wise, but honestly, really couldn't find anything to critique on. you came pretty tight on this. good shit. 9/10 stay up RTF plz: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662 EZ |
Yo...ike can you rtf on my song "Dear Lord" down the page..please..lol
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DAMN! Ike you snapped, this is one of the illest tracks in RV history. Fa real, you outdid yoself on this one. It's rare to find me givin feedback just to give it n' not to use for a link, but I had to come through n tell you good f'in job.
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wow...
i keep being more and more impressed everytime you put out a new track Ike... this track = one of my favorite storytelling tracks PERDIOD, not just on RV... you keep comin on point man, i think you gotta be at the top of RV's audio heads... the hook is crazzzzy hot, and the verses accent it perfectly, nice track overall... |
man, this track is hot. straight up. the beats not my type. but i got used to it going into the track. i like the guitars on this though. And the concept on this track is fuckin serious yo, this is something i'd rock while i'm laying down. But the flow is nice on this. rides the beat nice. the thing that stands out in this track is your pressence and the emotion. Damn this track has you thinkin on the last verse too. this shit is HOT. keep doin what you do 9.6/10
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word...i was out in st louis last few days..so i havent got a chance to respond...thanks for the feed everyone.......270 something views?...umm...i gotta up till its atleast 300 people...cmon now
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