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word yo... this is most deff one of our deeper tracks.... spittin wit a message... droppin knowledge on kids and shit... solid fellas....

i really like the beat...."real hip hop" shit......

tito - good flow like usual...ha i liked the puerto rican flip thing....haha its sweet

talkin - maybe q shud do a lil harmonic hook with laced with the talking like in the backround would sound good....

tony - prison subject, is pretty good, your quality doesnt seem as good as usual tho...

q- good opener....your voice sounds good on this kinda track....im not even gon break down the lyrics cuz then id have to listen a few times....pretty good shit tho....i really like this song good shit


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Listen'n

like the beat...

1st: Open flow is nice....voice sounds good over the beat...rhymes prison terrorism good talk....nice shit...

2nd: Flow pleasant presence an engery was there...rhymes nice...

3rd: More complex like that...flow nice...delivery, presence an energy there...good shit yo

over-all dog im feelin the track something to smoke a beedie too.... :thumbup:

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hmm..idk about the beat so far....

tito comes in nice, like how u worded terrorisim...lol nice message here bro, KICK SOME ASS ! u twisted a few words real nice their, fit ur message in well

tony comes in real smooth man, baby powder flow n shit, american dream was fucked up, rushed it, Q come in real smooth, jugsaw, lol, flows nice, im not really feeling this beat, but this was done well....

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Word....feelin this shit. Tito....I don't know what it is, but I really like your whole flow/delivery you got going on. Makes me wanna do more tracks with you :D

Tony....your voice didn't sound the same. I didn't even realize it was you....lol. Shit was nice though.

Q had some nice shit as well.....flow and everything.

No real complaints on this one fellas.....good shit from everyone :thumbup:






PS.....Ya'll gotta get me on more of these hip hop feeling beats you guys are hiding....lol

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Tito...i love your flow man,its really unique,thats what i love about your tracks,its always something noone on RV has heard nah mean???This is the kinda track im feelin...feelin ya delivery,its not laid back but its not hard,its fluid and smooth comparing to the beat,really fits in,your voice owns.....ahh i like your rhyme scheme a lot :) its changes and is keeping me interested so thats nice....like when you stop....lyrics are really nice,deepat least they got a nice meaning to them,feelin em,your presence is madd dope,feelin it,sound mad confident the way you spittin like you aint afraid to do shit! word.....im feelin this verse mad,flow dont fall off at all....flawless,emotions koo,i like the way you present your voice.....


Tony...Ok man,flows nice you sound madd different lol,i like how you mixed this,quality lets out your voice more i think,suit it,ahh your flow,its nice most times,real smooth and shit,but it falls off a lil...you pick it back up really nice....delivery is madd nice,i always lik your dlivery its got that weird aura to it,which suits you!!!....Emotion is proly your weakest point,try to upp that as it seems your like yeah! but not meaning it,nah mean???? yea yea!...I like it,its jus too monotonous and could be made to impress the listener more if you get me??Well your lyrics are madd nice,im feelin how you express your feelings in 'em...got a nice touch to em,like you thought hard to write them,im feelin it......


Tha Q....ok nothing wrong at all,from when i heard that "This life 2006" i think you have madd steeped ya game up,its unbelievable,your flow is real nice,i like the way it changes and your multis are dope man,keepin me interested with all this,your flow is madd complex....good shit,no problems there,emotion again is nice,your voice has a melody to it which makes it seem natural for emotion to come to you..its nice and harmonic....i think you suit these beats man,deliverys dope,i like how its not that laid back,its fresh and makes me feel like its summin i aint heard before...you get me??Yeah your mic presecnec is exxelent...real nice with that as it seems you are next to me,i love it real confidence shines through in your voice....Versy nice verse

Good shit fellas!!!

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