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KempoMRK 06-25-06 12:30 PM

22. Erel Avent (3-1) vs 23. Makaveli Trained (2-2)
 


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Erel Avent 06-25-06 12:41 PM

wanna pic battle?

votes:

1.
2.
3.
4.

TonyTone 06-25-06 03:17 PM

yea sure...... www.myspace.com/thatniccatonyb
post yours up

check n g' luck

Erel Avent 06-25-06 03:25 PM


TonyTone 06-25-06 03:38 PM

Edit- just match whoever drops first

TonyTone 06-25-06 04:27 PM

1 hour later, take a look at the masterpiece......

Ok let’s start this up now, sorry to say but ya resemble a horse
The best part is the background
..................................^^^n that’s where I’ll leave ya corpse
Most niggas can’t even see me, but apparently this nigga might
Cuz after u waxed ya eyebrows, u got a whole new look at life
This whore knows he’ll get dispersed, n I would get on ya sneakers
But w/ a wardrobe like urs, I wouldn’t take full-body pics either
I heard u used to be a mack son, well now your sure as hell not
Cuz w/ that Michael Jackson nose, it’s no surprise somethin fell off
I’ll b drowning your clout, cuz I can tell your poor. Am I right bitch?
The fence surrounding your house, is almost tall enough to hide it
Might as well pay for a shack, so ugly I hope u never have children
Lookin away from the camera, so his face wouldn’t shatter the lens
I been on my grind n now I’m the finest, I know these hatas hear me
Nigga you’ll be shinin, right after you replace that bronze earring
I’ll stick my foot in this bitch, betta take heed to what I just said
Mayne u look like a dick, no wonder u got that condom on ya head
You can get the gat hoe, don’t let that clean shave make u too happy
Cuz that side burn shadow’s makin u look like the dude in ya avy
How the fuck’s this nigga feared? U prolly eat pussy every min
That shit don't look like a beard, more like pubic hair on ya chin

Erel Avent 06-26-06 02:35 AM

:laugh2:


23. Makaveli Trained (2-2) & his Gurl. (i dont play fair) :thefinger
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listen idiot.

Compared to Butlers lines last week, ur pic punches are far from funny
but calm down.. that nose of yours is still giving Panochio a run for his money
I'll slap you silly, them cornball concepts will never pass the grade
with more space in between half decent lines then them ugly ass braids
I slammin the brakes, you actually got the nuts to claim that whore?
take a tweezer to that skeezers brows & nigga stop fuckin pluckin yours
You crackhead fiend lookin monkey, you need jesus's help cuz
I mean .. Jordan couldnt bring your hairline back to where it once was
Erel's by far doper than you, & you'll have flashbacks about gettin tor'
when next week ya league records the same rank u were the week before
Knockin you out & layin you down is easy so duke, you know Im at it
if ya wanna bring out the guns I'll shoot up Brown like a herroine addict
I understand being on the track of stars, but you got it backwards queer
its more like you belong on StarTrack with them imatation Spock lookin ears
Im laughin lookin at ur mug, I promise the league is lovin this shit
I've seen some dudes with fat suckers .. but you got straight Gorilla lips
So FUCK creative new concepts, I dont need to & that much is true
just lookin at ya chicks grill is gonna sway the voters to vote against you
I'll bet that filthy cunt dont even like you, so you still wont get blown
fool, Osama Bin Laden's daughter just didnt wanna go to the prom alone

and im out.

Erel Avent 06-26-06 02:37 AM

vote that shit up.

TonyTone 06-26-06 10:32 AM

omg u dumbass it's a pic battle. that means ONE PIC!!!!!! not to mention those are old. bla

$tax. 06-26-06 12:27 PM

Ok let’s start this up now, sorry to say but ya resemble a horse
The best part is the background
..................................^^^n that’s where I’ll leave ya corpse
This whore knows he’ll get dispersed, n I would get on ya sneakers
But w/ a wardrobe like urs, I wouldn’t take full-body pics either


vs.

Compared to Butlers lines last week, ur pic punches are far from funny
but calm down.. that nose of yours is still giving Panochio a run for his money
I'll slap you silly, them cornball concepts will never pass the grade
with more space in between half decent lines then them ugly ass braids
Knockin you out & layin you down is easy so duke, you know Im at it
if ya wanna bring out the guns I'll shoot up Brown like a herroine addict
I'll bet that filthy cunt dont even like you, so you still wont get blown
fool, Osama Bin Laden's daughter just didnt wanna go to the prom alone
^^lmfao at this line

\/-erel avent for more quoatables

Erel Avent 06-27-06 01:27 PM

1-0 upping ....

TonyTone 06-28-06 11:00 AM

Lmao i really dont even think u got the MJ line entirely

Out Writechas 06-28-06 11:56 AM

wasn't really feelin this...Mak had a bunch of weak lines and the punches didn't even connect, it was bland and pretty much a boring verse to read...

EA...ur verse was eh at time, some played concepts with the pic disses, like the pinochio line and space between the braids....n i don't agree with the other voters, the closer was pretty off...wasn't even hard..but

v/EA, not for consistency but had better punches overall

N.Tavarez 06-28-06 12:19 PM

I'll slap you silly, them cornball concepts will never pass the grade
with more space in between half decent lines then them ugly ass braids
Knockin you out & layin you down is easy so duke, you know Im at it
if ya wanna bring out the guns I'll shoot up Brown like a herroine addict
I'll bet that filthy cunt dont even like you, so you still wont get blown
fool, Osama Bin Laden's daughter just didnt wanna go to the prom alone


vs

Most niggas can’t even see me, but apparently this nigga might
Cuz after u waxed ya eyebrows, u got a whole new look at life
This whore knows he’ll get dispersed, n I would get on ya sneakers
But w/ a wardrobe like urs, I wouldn’t take full-body pics either


erel just came better
but for a pic battle this was decent
tony just needed more consistency
v/ erel

Rae Report 06-28-06 02:06 PM

Compared to Butlers lines last week, ur pic punches are far from funny
but calm down.. that nose of yours is still giving Panochio a run for his money
Knockin you out & layin you down is easy so duke, you know Im at it
if ya wanna bring out the guns I'll shoot up Brown like a herroine addict
I'll bet that filthy cunt dont even like you, so you still wont get blown
fool, Osama Bin Laden's daughter just didnt wanna go to the prom alone

Vs

Most niggas can’t even see me, but apparently this nigga might
Cuz after u waxed ya eyebrows, u got a whole new look at life

V/Erel this was onesided erel came wit a solid verse wit some nice quotables..mak you had that one line that i liked but ya verse wasnt consistent enuff to get the win

rexless 06-29-06 05:32 PM

vote: ereal for more consistent punches and better disses that hit harder
maka verse was aight just not consistent and need it a few more celever lines....

KempoMRK 06-30-06 03:28 PM

Up over no-shows.

M&rk 07-01-06 01:47 AM

I'll bet that filthy cunt dont even like you, so you still wont get blown
fool, Osama Bin Laden's daughter just didnt wanna go to the prom alone
I slammin the brakes, you actually got the nuts to claim that whore?
take a tweezer to that skeezers brows & nigga stop fuckin pluckin yours
vs.
How the fuck’s this nigga feared? U prolly eat pussy every min
That shit don't look like a beard, more like pubic hair on ya chin
Might as well pay for a shack, so ugly I hope u never have children
Lookin away from the camera, so his face wouldn’t shatter the lens
^^wack and played out, dont do that.
I’ll b drowning your clout, cuz I can tell your poor. Am I right bitch?
The fence surrounding your house, is almost tall enough to hide it
^^kinda like this one.
..
vote- erel

JTR 07-01-06 02:27 AM

Most niggas can’t even see me, but apparently this nigga might
Cuz after u waxed ya eyebrows, u got a whole new look at life
This whore knows he’ll get dispersed, n I would get on ya sneakers
But w/ a wardrobe like urs, I wouldn’t take full-body pics either
I’ll b drowning your clout, cuz I can tell your poor. Am I right bitch?
The fence surrounding your house, is almost tall enough to hide it

vs.

Knockin you out & layin you down is easy so duke, you know Im at it
if ya wanna bring out the guns I'll shoot up Brown like a herroine addict
I understand being on the track of stars, but you got it backwards queer
its more like you belong on StarTrack with them imatation Spock lookin ears
^^ LOL @ the spock one
So FUCK creative new concepts, I dont need to & that much is true
just lookin at ya chicks grill is gonna sway the voters to vote against you
I'll bet that filthy cunt dont even like you, so you still wont get blown
fool, Osama Bin Laden's daughter just didnt wanna go to the prom alone

v/ Erel Avent

KempoMRK 07-02-06 07:03 AM

Erel Avent wins 7-0.

Erel Avent wins (4-1)
Makaveli Trained loses (2-3)


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