Konvict - Poppas (WOAAAH)
 

Links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230535
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2778282

Listening...

Always liked this beat...flow is pretty good...

Lyrics are repetitive...really extremely mainstream here...but it's nice banger...I'm liking it quite a bit. Flow is actually really good on this.

Poppa poppa...the same words over and over. Kinda gets annoying and boring...

But overall, it was nice. Keep it up.

Thanks fam......

Uppping........

Upppidy..........

Beat has always been my thing. I usually ain't that into tracks like this but it was a good track for its kind. I do agree with Ennui that the poppa shit got repetitive real quickly. I mean I see what you trying to do by repeating it but you overdid it a little. The lyrics were also good for this type of track you know, shit doesn't have to be deep...you just gotta get ppl to get crunk on this one...and I think you def did that because the energy and presence were there without a doubt...

Pz

Thanks ma .....

Aight

beats dope obviously

Hooks nice,real catchy

Verse.....flows nice,lyrics koo mainstream obviously....word @ the spin....talk like a copper...nice verse man i like your delivery in it presence dope

Hook......

Verse...............flows better,brah brah brah! lol word,feelin the delivery,lyrics are nice....presence is nice..word nice

Nice track should have had a hook again but good

nothing special as far as i heard . just alotta poppas, the quality is ok, you are young, keep at it and your work will get better, and you dont need to be thinking about shootin shit, you gotta job in a bank... but all in all good work .. just keep at it !

Lol word...it aint a bank its an office but fo real i apreciate it

I always hated dipset beats so i dont really like it, hook not bad, like how the verse starts,poppa gets repetitive,mmm flow is cool tho, quality is cool,hook is not bad like i say, Mmm i dunno man not your best, you should try i new type of track i dunno,anyway peace out

ite listenin......beat is hott....feelin it.....my typa beat....verse one is nice good delivery...nice energy on tha track....flow was on as always....hook is nice kinda catchy.......second verse again nice...everythin nice and dope.....but 'poppa' got annoyin thas tha only fault....just too repitive......other than that dope track real nice vibe.....overall......8/10

The beat is pretty ill fa sure. Your lyrics are weak man, you say nothin in this track. It's to much of a boast or w/e, it's way to mainstream man. You don't seem like your a gangsta but I guess this is money makin music. Your flo9w is solid though and your pressence is strong. You didn't slurr shit like you usually do, I could understand everything you said on this one. But it didn't mean anything man, all this track was to me was "blah blah blah blah" sorry man but it just aint creative and it aint original. But you did good on what you usually do weak on lol.

word...thanks...

*listening*


dude u got a nice voice..but ay dont u think the gunshots aint overused by now?...anyways beat is cool kinna on the usuals..ur flow was cool..neva went off and stuff...lol..mayne the 'pop' is so much...nothing much on the lyrics,guess u just had a lil fun on this cos its short and yeah nice...




hit my sig plz...'prince track'



*POP*


-wun-

Ha aight thanks, Imma hit it up

I got you man... lol

I remember this beat. loved it.

hook is tight. nice delivery too. shit is hot man. like the poppas shit. lol

verse, holy shit love the way you started out dude. fuckin' ill. damn son. you got so much better since last time i heard. quality got upped a lot too. damn son, really feeling this. this is my type of shit


hook again.... tight shit.. haha love the beat

verse 2: ill again. lol the brap brap brap!! lol shit son, killin' this. lol spit it like ether haha...

overall, damn son, you improved hella alot. good shit man. loved this. 9/10

hit me up for a collab soon

EZ

Hhaa thanks fam..and will do

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230681

rtf

I said I got you when im back son...imma get at it

Returning the feed

Playing..........

Intros ok.
beats allright.


very generic track.


Lyrics are simple. Not really feeing the lyrics and entire concept, its played.

apart from that your flows ok,and quality is good. dubs and adlibs are good.

But yeh, not feeling it based on its completly generic bro.

like the beat

like ur flow/rhyme scheme early on

held my interest

quality seems strained in a couple spots

But, this was a slick soundin track



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Thanks fam.......

man fuck rtf the favor, its been a couple of time that you didnt so please

it's done mayne I was tired when I got back long story but thre u go

im returnin the favor.



hmm..

beat is hot.

chorus - it was flowin and all, but i doubt yous a poppa mayne. you wouldnt be on the internet with a homestudio-starter kit dropping tracks on rapverse. so your tracks "real" factor just got shitted on. (and real tracks are how get you an audience).


Verses - Flow was on point pretty much whole time, presence was nice. Not to much to comment on tho. But if i overlook the content (which IS REALLY hard for me to do)...... It was a Solid Track. Had a catchy Chorus, and a Solid 3. would get some play in "gangstas" whips.

Lol thanks fo the feed but you shud know the cat before you judge