NEW SPuL!!! "Fronting" ft. Triple_N (Diss track!!)
 

word, Jay Murdah who go here, i'm coo with dude. But uhh dude from his school saw my myspace took shot @ me randomly dissed me, so this reply back. so just know uh:

-he 13 yrs old, tries to rap gangsta about poppin' shells and shit
-On Jay's dick BIG TIME
-Name is Qwan rap name is Carnage black
-Lives in philly

basically....

www.soundclick.com/spul

Intro: Triple_N
First verse: SPuL
Hook: Triple_N
Second verse: SPuL
Beat: "What Goes Around" By Lloyd Banks ft. 50 Cent

LINKS:
1.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228324
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229730

Yo before I listen I hope you rtf unlike the last billion times :(...

beat is str8 and bumpin...intro is nice.and SpuL you vocals a lil low...but im feelin your delivery, nice cocky and light hearted..lyrics are good too...hook is crazy too..2nd verse is better punches decent..haha ray charles line is nice..emotion is nice..u cant do a drive by with yo mom in the car haha lol..haa this lil diss track is hot...trip hit tha hook up real tight...nice jawn 9/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230623

can you please return the favor???

*listening*


neva heard something from spul b4 i guess...anyways nice choice on the beat..u got a nice voice and i'm likeing ur flows quite a lot..punches r cool so far..hahaha mayne the hook is so lively..yeah i like this shit!!...i like the 'pr' stuff..lol..tight one here...yeah i enjoyed this...



hit my sig and rft...thanx

^aiight i promise I got y'all when I get back from my driving time. but thanks for feed.

y u need trip on this?

but yea...trip is mixed down really nice, hook works - ur verses r a little low, and not as clear, sum EQ'ing issues, the dissing and lyrics are solid, a couple of extra syllables here and there...overall its a track well done, wudda been pro if all atthe same level of sound quality..

bless

beat is pretty cool, spul gets in nice, flow is pretty dope, quality is not bad too,mm you seem like reading off some paper a lil bit, am I right?you need to feel more confortable, hook is pretty dope, quality is pretty good,second verse still comes in nice, pretty dope verse ,i prefer this one, word at this track, dope lyrics and all, good looking, holla back when youll have a new track

^aiight thanks to you too for feed. uppin....

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hol up


am I being dissed in this track?





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alright i'm listening now

the beat is hot

nice intro

I like it..i think that your vocals were a tad low....but tight flow and tight voice..i like this..good punches..

Hot Flow on the hook by triple.......

his vocals were just right........

second verse...vocals were a lil louder...i like this a lot more....sounds good

looks like you hittum hard...

keep it up

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not sure I'm big on your gratuitous use of the word "faggot"

but...neway

beat is butt...stank...chitlin...collard green FUNKY

ugh

Spul...I'm not being offensive, but, is Triple N your mentor?


1st verse...flow was on...levels cud be a touch louder

Hook sounds good...like the ad libs on it

2nd verse...delivery is on

Lyrics...seem coo...To be honest, I wasn't paying that much attention to them...I tend to listen more for flow/delivery/rhymes/etc


good drop


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lol are you 13? lol

but haha thanks for feed same to you PT

oh, and to answer your question, well he basically is dude who helps me the most with my audio. So I guess you could say that. but word...

uppppp

playing...

beats ok, trips intro sound good.

vocals are very low, could do with a slight up. flows good, lyrics are cool.Dubs and adlibs are good.

Hooks cool, nice multis in it.

Second verse is cool. But yeh, couldnt really focus seen as its a diss to a 13 year old kid on the net.

ahaha.

Should of just jizzed on him


Hit up - I cant wait-

^thanks for feed. I got you, just need to make a trip out quickly. then i got you...

returing the feed on the battle track i forgot i had posted...haha....but all feed is apprieated, so theeeeeeeeeee song now....

k i liked the whole flow of it all n i didnt pay much attention to they lyrics but right off the bat ima tell you you need to up your vocals, and you sound a lil over compressed, it makes your quality seem way behind triple n which is making the song seem like it doesnt mesh too good....but i also left feed on your text battle haha, ie i owned the kid

^aiight appreciate the feed man. uppp

listened to this yeterday

i liked the beat choice was cool delivery was nice...lyrics were aight but can't really say much on them coz i don't personally know the kid you dissin...but if what you were spittin was true (and i have no reason to doubt that it wasn't btw) then this was an aight diss...could of been better but then again there's always space for improvment...

keep droppin and RTF in my link (The Madness)

^aiight thanks for feed man

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ehhhh... omma lot more critical than everyone else... it was aiight but lyrically it didn't really grab me.... the beat was cool... the hook was straighth but that echo stuff needs to go... it mad e the track seem.. i don't know... kinda like ya got tired of mixing it down... flow was ok from both... not really too many quotables besides the drive by line... i'd expect a comeback for this simply because i don't think it was damaging enough... both came with a different level of quality... spul... up ya vocals a tad, man... first time i really listened to ya stuff... not bad... but unlike others... i concentrate on the lyrics and how ya put ya werds and thoughts together... to me, as a lyricist, that's more important than the beat (which is a close second)... content and how you get ya point across are what make or break you on a diss track... delivery has gotta be convincing too...

i wouldn't have wasted time on a 13 yo personally, unless he happened to spit some flamage that i just HAD to retaliate, nah mean?... kids that age gon talk trash regardless...

but yeah... decent... nothing extraordinary, but not a bad track...

ez

^aiight appreciate the good feed, man. thanks. upp

JEEEEEAAAA

Triple with the intro, sounds all gangstery and shit :love:

Spul comes in a little soft, so UP YOUR GODDAMN EMOTION :angry: But lol at 13 year olds thinking their gangsta, hahaha..Hook is fucking raaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww...2nd verse, much better than the first..Lmfao @ the full of shit line..Haha, man, this is owned.

^lol appreciate the fedd man. upppp

fuck you weres my feed back :cussing: :love:

Lol... the shots have been fired @ a 13yr old biznitch.

*listening*

Beat is pretty nice, and both flowed pretty nicely on it (even though Triple only did a hook). Triple N should've dropped a verse, forget a hook! But anywayz, quality was nice, came hear you clearly n' shit. Punches were pretty coo. Didn't think you needed Triple on this bitch, but it was straight though.

Put this shit on ya myspace (if aint already on there). Lil kid aint gonna have nuttin to come back with, poor sap. :/ Anyway... overall this diss track was pretty nice.

*runs*

^lool word. thanks for feed man