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Aighht..i love this beat,nas owns
intros nice


Flows real nice,rhyme scheme is mad different,nice i like it,emotion is koo,i like the whisperin..then it gets more flashy,like shh....YO! nah mean??real nice,love the delivery how it changes likei said with the emotion,mad energy differentiates intro different ways,the way you present your voice is mad nice cause its got so much difference,makes the listener not get bored...yeah you already know bout the lyrics,i told you on msn they are fire,liike how its got a deep meaning ot the track,like it,the dubs really add to it....damn@ brother line.....worrd man..feelin this a hell of a lot,proly your best,you need to do more story type tracks,cause you can keep the listener interested in the story by the way your voice,delivery and emotion changes and that to me moulds the song....the hook was also dope,it was the finishin touch to a great song...proly your best for real...im downloadin this...peace 1

Damn thanks alot fam

Uppin.............

I like the beat

flow is on

like the rhyme scheme

put a mack to ur what?

Hook needs to be mixed better to differentiate from the verse


Solid soundin track


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Thanks fam............

Upppin...........

yo... i'd bump this.... matter of fact... omma nominate this joint right here.... shyt was solid... hook was cool... only thing is like what q said... didn't know it was the hool until after the fact.... other than that... real dope piece... flow was straight... had the ug / mainstream appeal... double audience here... good shyt... went well with da Nas beat... ya did him justice for a yungin...lol... be easy... omma dl this one for realz... easy

Thanks alot fammo

*listening*



this is d first track i'm listening to today..and i must say the beat is mad tight!...your flow is so ick man..u really came tight on this..lyrics are cool too..delivery is cool..presence,emotion is just adequate..no too much pf this and too lil of that..nah mean?...just gd!!...dis must be the best i've heard from you eva...tight as hell!!!


have u hit my sig?

Yep Iv'e hit it up and thanks shorty fo the ffeed

typin as i listen

I LOVE THIS BEAT that song is dope
Your flow is really solid
You def. upped your game since the last time I heard you
Lyrics are solid...........
Nice emotion.........
Hook was cool
notta bad song..one of the best i heard from u

stay up

Thanks fam.......

Good beat choice fa sure, i could tell you went with the same flow as Nas. Lyrics were decent, didn't really seem like a story though man. some what it did but not overall, the delivery was very hot on this one. Your energy was felt very well man. the hook is pretty catchy as well man. overall I thought this was a very solid drop man, do some more of these.

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Thanks fam............

Wrd................

yeah this shit is hot You've improved alot. each song you impress me. Damn nice shit famz straight up. koo storyline. the beat is pretty good. i like this shit. The chorus. is pretty good aswell. im feelin the storyline. shits hot b. The flow is nice. the lyrics is good aswell. Overall i give this 7.9/10 hot shit b

Thanks alot fam ...

listen'n

Solid dog...

Nas beat course u gots to feel it...

1st: solid like'd how u put it down flow presence an all was tight

2nd: Solid like'd the flow metaphors dope

3rd: Flow on point like the surprise ski-mask ish was tight dog like'd how you played it out feel me...


over-all dope track keep it comin' holla
*used chronic soso*

Thanks Vato i apreciate that