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KempoMRK 07-16-06 12:02 PM

13. Untold (2-0) vs 14. Ace Heratoga (5-1)
 


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Ace Heratoga 07-16-06 01:37 PM

why yes hello..

Untold 07-16-06 01:59 PM

yoz..

how many?

Ace Heratoga 07-16-06 02:16 PM

16? I dun care really

Untold 07-16-06 02:22 PM

k.. lets drop today or tomorrow.
i don't feel like waitin all week.
but it's ur call. get @ me.

Ace Heratoga 07-17-06 12:14 PM

Werd didn't see you drop...

I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Tough as nails? Homie you keep spittin with me
I’ll crucify you with ya shirt on, get you fitted to a T
Left hand hits hard, but my lyrics’ll leave ya shit scarred
He OD on Xanex… this dudes dead by the 6th bar
I really rap… so I don’t wanna keystyle ok…
voters see where ur coming from but hear what I say
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated
Won’t post a a pic, evidence you’re a fuckin herb dude
I’ve had three courses of ju jitsu, so let my foot serve you
Nice with the hands… boxin skills I can live by
So when Ace connects with 4, it’s a straight guy

Quote:
Originally Posted by KempoMRK

13. Met-A-4 (2-0) vs 14. Ace Heratoga (5-1)
I’m gonna go out on a limb though and say that Ace will scrape it.




I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb

Untold 07-17-06 05:07 PM

i'll leave ya 6 feet deep.. i'm scary bruh
but this battle'll be a walk in the park.. to find a spot to burry ya
'n where i hide ya body, i'll never tell, hoe
cause u'll be harder to find..
..then the lost season of chapelle's show
i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death
bitches hate ya game, it's weak 'n real lame
Jose no so much.. you'd think it was your real name
'n ace is poor 'n lame, buts it cool in the same
s'while i get the picture.. u can't even afford the frame
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools

Ace Heratoga 07-20-06 08:05 PM

uppin this bittccchhh

King Solo 07-20-06 08:46 PM

I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated
I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb

VS.

i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools


Aight, this battle was decent. I felt that Ace had a pretty decent verse although some of the punches just seemed boring to read to me. The concepts were there, but the wording just made me think "God, this is boring!" Mets had a pretty solid verse I thought, the bars were mostly cool... a couple of wack ones that shouldn't be in there, but overall he came with more punches for me to quote... not to mention that fucking gangster shit line made me fucking crack up.

V/ - Met-A-4 (aka Untold)

D.Stroyer 07-20-06 09:35 PM

I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated
I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb

VS.

i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools

this was an iight battle, like some of both but untold won this, nik came iight with some iight punches but untold came better the crap line mad me laugh but pretty good battle

V/Untold

Ace Heratoga 07-20-06 09:46 PM

jeez i didnt know Nick was in this battle... hmmm

King Solo 07-20-06 10:20 PM

My punches were ILL f'real... :laugh:

Untold 07-20-06 11:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace Heratoga
jeez i didnt know Nick was in this battle... hmmm

OH SHIT.. NICK WERE CAUGHT!!!

we gotta KILL all da witnessez!!! :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

Sik Wit It 07-21-06 12:07 AM

Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated

vs

ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

Meh ...

v/ Met

Trade Mark. 07-21-06 12:37 AM

I doidnt like any of aces punches because he came extremely played and i felt that he had more statements than punches

vs

i'll leave ya 6 feet deep.. i'm scary bruh
but this battle'll be a walk in the park.. to find a spot to burry ya
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap



dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

Flipped From

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=TayTay
TayTay's last bar

v-Untold

Untold 07-21-06 12:47 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Original
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

Flipped From

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=TayTay
TayTay's last bar

v-Untold

fuck you, you lil cunt!

i didn't flip shit. 'n fuck u for accusin me of that. i admit, their similar as fuck, but i've NEVER flip'd, atleast not intentionally, bitch!

'the fuck out'a here.. and u voted for me.

Untold 07-21-06 01:58 PM

man.. up this shit.

N.Tavarez 07-21-06 02:01 PM

i'll vote on this soon as some votes come in on mine and pp2

N.Tavarez 07-21-06 04:16 PM

I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb
I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated

PRETTY GOOD VERSE OVERAL

VS


i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death


GOOD VERSE AS WELL

I GOT TIED IN QUOTABLES
BUT WHEN I COMPARE QUALITY OF THE QUOTABLES
I GOT UNTOLD WINNING
WHEN I COMPARE QUALITY OF THE NOT QUOTED
I STILL GOT UNTOLD WINNING
SO V/ UNTOLD

Ace Heratoga 07-21-06 05:28 PM

lmfao... iight well I'm outta this battle but i can't believe you dudes are quoting toga lines... shits been played since before i came here... and that wasn't even a good one... good battle I guess but this shit is crazy lol

btw...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
Haha, dog. . it's like. . I got a surprise but I don't wanna spoil it now
My victories keep building. .
. .while you're just the janitor hired to clean its toilets out


i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools

Untold 07-21-06 06:45 PM

^o word.. nice job @ swayin and tryin to say i flip'd somethin as well.

thats cool, just like toga lines are play'd, so are undefeated lines. but yea, if this is the case, i'll start findin lines of punches of urs that might be flip'd.

pz.

SlicKnife 07-21-06 07:53 PM

Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated

Vs.

i'll leave ya 6 feet deep.. i'm scary bruh
but this battle'll be a walk in the park.. to find a spot to burry ya
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

Not really close, I expected Ace to come with much more fire...Untold came pretty dope, and took this comfortably....

Vote - Met-a-4

Texxus 07-22-06 12:24 AM

I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb
I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated


VS


i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death

vote- Ace cuz he came on top at the end to me....`pz

Untold 07-22-06 03:07 AM

^wtf.. get out'a here with that shit.

HATE VOTE. that mutha fucka signed out the league anywayz.. shit don't count. BITCH!

Texxus 07-22-06 03:16 AM

^actually i didnt sign out, and actually its not a hate vote. i dont even know you stop trippin'. `pz

So.Rell 07-22-06 10:35 AM

Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated

Vs.

i'll leave ya 6 feet deep.. i'm scary bruh
but this battle'll be a walk in the park.. to find a spot to burry ya
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

Ace you struggled to throw a punch I can tell you didn't try but you shouldn't have lost to Meta4...Meta you came pretty straight with creativity some punches didn't land but all good.

Vote - Untold

Erel Avent 07-22-06 02:23 PM

^ wtf

v_ meta

KempoMRK 07-23-06 09:58 AM

Untold wins 8-1.

Untold wins (3-0)
Ace Heratoga loses (5-2)


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