Wat do u think of these lyrics?
 

wat do u think???

these r a random rappers lyrics

rate them 1-10

lyrics are simple. nothing great, a kid on Rv could of written them.
As a song,they would need alot of deep emotion in the voice to make these sit anywere near dope. But yeh, very simple,but with good mic presence they could work.

yea well for all u mainstream haters

dis is Nelly

This life is temporary but the soul is eternal
Separate the real from the lie, let me learn you
Not strong, only aggressive, cause the power ain't directed
That's why, we are subjected to the will of the oppressive
Not free, we only licensed
Not live, we just excitin
Cause the captors.. own the masters.. to what we writin
Not compassionate, only polite, we well trained
Our sincerity's rehearsed in stage, it's just a game
Not good, but well behaved cause the ca-me-ra survey
most of the things that we think, do, or say
We chasin after death just to call ourselves brave
But everyday, next man meet with the grave
I give a damn if any fan recall my legacy
I'm tryin to live life in the sight of God's memory
Like that y'all

I wrote anthems from antonyms
Harmonies from homonyms
Created cinema from synonyms
Was livid to eliminate
that illustrious life you're livin in
Wrote rhetoricals in rhythms
i could paralyze with a parabole
Make rhymes out of religion
crucify you with a prefix
Or suffocate you with a suffix
Wrote lectures so infectious
They're known to infect the listeners
Who dissin us
Yo punks you wait, I punctuate
My karmas the comma
That put you inside of a coma
Hyphen, dot dot, semi-colon,
Leave you semi-swollen
Question Mark: You pregnant?
Oh you're not? I love you, Period.

mos def and chino xl > nelly

die slow

lol.

whats your point?
these lyrics are simple. You didnt prove anything excpet re-inforce the simplicity in the mainstream.

chino shits on nelly.

he thought the nelly lyrics were dope so he tried to get someone on rv to agree so he could be like AHA! i told you mainstream is dope, but it backfired on him horribly

and yea chino xl is classic :)

Yo, why is the ripper so ill?
That would be a unpardonable breach of confidence for me to reveal!
He said "One of these days, all eyes would be on me
when they look up in the sky and see the neon C"
Rhymes inscribed on a nickel disk encased
in glass with an ion beam for longevity
For more then 10 centuries, impressions and memories
the first time the machine inventor will mention me
Canibus was a visionary indeed
he believed light could travel in multiples of C
The organic supercomputer that solved the mysteries
of Clan Calusa with 2 blue metric rulers
Liked Cool J, but thought Stephen J. Gould was cooler
and he never liked to propagate rumors
Smoked Canary Island cigars
liked America, luxury cars and beautiful Asian broads
He had a strong mind, he used to philosophize
about rhymes while he was pruning his Banzai
He claimed that he had written the greatest rhyme of all time
but he would never take it out his archives
He wrote 2 songs per day
and was constantly was experimenting with his wordplay
In his youth he did a report on the Sloan Digital Sky survey
he got an F but he deserved an A
I followed his career from the first day
it seemed the lack of support contributed to his inert ways
I seen him pull in 24 hour workdays
with deferred pay, undeterred by the word "shame"
Public humiliation was the worst pain
he was spinnin out of control like a class 5 hurricane
He said he wouldn't want another MC to suffer the same
Especially when there's nothing to gain
He was the illest alive but nobody would face it
he spit till his toungue was too torched to taste, it
properly funded corporations carbon dated his latest creations
to extract the information
They found it utterly amazing
they claimed the body of his work was the same thing as a priceless painting
Never mattered to him, the art galleries hated him
cause Thomas K.K. called, said he would take 10
Complete enigmas wrapped in puzzles encrypted in language
with sound but without shape or signature
Kept files in his garage, on MS-DOS
in a fire-proof pod, he thought it was odd
Outside there was a shed with an Oppenheimer lock
he apparently kept more wax then Madame Tussaud's
We were in total awe, cause it blew our minds
so many rhymes that were intricately designed
He WAS Poet Laureate of his time
and if you dont mind, Id like to share some of his rhymes

[*beat switches*]

Alone in my room, looking thru the 32X telescope zoom
adjusting the focus of the moon
One should not assume the philosophy of David Hume
is nothing more then a subjective conclusion
What is the maximum field rate application?
the run away glaciation surrounding the ocean basin
affects the population, fluctuation
on a continuous basis but thats just the basics
The juxtaposition of Canibus's position
the precision something no other has written
Way above and beyond what was intended
the unparallel Malleable annunciation of a sentence
You didnt go to college obviously
I can tell by your ungodly unintelligible terminology
A remarkable odyssey, the rhymes of modern speeds
when the brain orders the body not to breathe
Incompetency is not up to speed, you not in my league
you couldnt possibly be hotter then me
Or oppositely your minus 25 degrees, you'd squeeze
but the condensation makes rifle barrels freeze
Allow me to speak figuratively, nigga please
my intellectual properties are about the size of Greece
Your counselor advised you not to speak
my counselor advised me to keep rhymin until they stopped the beat
In the words of Joseph Heller, "I learned how to write better"
even though it sort of urked me
He said he didnt understand the process of the imagination
but he felt he was at its mercy
Which exploits my point perfectly and certainly reinforces
the reason why nobody's probably ever heard of me
Couldnt understand what I mean by ill
unless you try to translate what I print to film
This is the line of will, the circle of time
the cycle of eternity, the emergence of 1 line
Academic phonetics render critics tounge-tied
Ive personified dry humor of cum-laude alumni
A wise man sees failure as progress
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
And loses his soul in the process
obsessed with nonsense with a caricature that has no content
My style is masterful, multi-lateral
I could battle a fool and be naturally cruel
Words of scourn are a disasterous tool
from an existentialist's view, I'm a better rapper then you
Grab the mic and rip your physical fabric in 2
my attitude is fucked up but abrogable
Different methods interpreted into different forms
from entirely different perceptions and seen from different norms
Not to spit in the palm theres much more involved
theres much more pieces of the puzzle for you to solve
48 orders of mechanical laws
and rays of creational cause, enhance the cadence of my bars
Maybe I am self-obsorbed
but thats the effect, to find the cause you should ask my A&R
Today is what it is, but only because yesterday was what it was
permitting you heard of Beezlebub
A tale of demons and drugs, pissy drunk in the club
with the DJ doing the needle rub
Chances are you'll never see me son
yeah I know my names Canibus but I cant help you if you need a dub

[*beat switches*]

I came to holla at some big booty bitches
and listen to the speakers thump, where you get conceited from?
Im so nice on the mic, they wanna beat me up
its deep as fuck, I aint seen it all but ive seen enough
Really unbelievable stuff
theres a lot of times where I wanna speak but I'm stuck
I should leave this rap shit alone
and kick my incredible in rhymes in the privacy of my own home
My imagination is my own
delibity to speak to freely lyrically on the microphone
Wit a pen in my hand, I bring motion to the enyogram
and become "Cani-millenia man"
Grave my back with the emperor's stamp
been spittin scientific rap since the 17th century began
Tryna' escape the wicked empire of Def Jam
and the land where lyrics are bland and heretics hang
Every warrior has an axe to bury
but he has to learn to discern between enemy and adversary
I said to myself, "Germaine this is insane
It's suicide its controlled flight into terrain"
I fought to regain, control of the plain, but went up in a ball of flames
and got banned from the hip-hop hall of fame
For two bars I kept hearin in my head
over and over again, it cost me everything

[*beat changes back to the original beat*]

I'm convinced now that more then truth is at stake
Where people create language that pretends to communicate
Euphamisms are misundertood as mistakes
but its a bi-product of the ghetto music we make
From an extroverted point of view I think its to late
Hip Hop has never been the same since '88
Since it became a lucrative profession as a misconception
in the movement in any direction as progression
Even though of the potency of it lessens
big money industries writing checks to suppress the question
And nobody gives a fuck no more, no one goes to the book store
ever since the influence of Moore's Law
But I stay in the lab, like Niels Bohr
his son Aage, Edward Lawrence, and Leo Szilard
Lyrically I take rap music and turn the knob
to the right full throttle and added panache
Why would I argue with my own conscience over the truth?
That's like me telling myself don't tell me what to do
Dialysis and analyses of battle MC's
sometimes I say things I myself can't believe
My lyrical is so skillfully eliptical
I can understand how it makes you miserable
You wonder why I never let you play your beats for me
or why I keep my studio shrouded in secrecy
You wonder whats my infatuation with Alicia Keyes
"Canibus why dont you speak to me?"
Yo, I meant it when I said no one can shine on a song that features me
That's why I said it so vehemently
You need to replace the hate with respect
I'm probably the best yet, Poet Laureate!!!

lol, who da fuck cares about chino xl???

y'all niggaz is so stupid, like any1 cares about these ppl except u rap board losers, go outside n ask any nigga on da street about chino "got dissed by Pac" xl

word, cause were so wack we take sides in other peoples beef that dont involve,affect,worry or even have one single thing to do with my life.

who gives a fuck who dissed who, im not ryding with either of them, so Ill listen to pac and chino you fucking stupid peice of shit.

but yeh, i bet you were playing ja rule untill 50 dissed him huh?

rofl, do you know, ANYTHING about that little beef?
pac said "Fuck Chino XL"

chino xl did the rest of the dissing, the only reason people say that is cuz pac was in the mainstream and chino wasnt

and werd @ ysdat bustin out the canibus :) raw shit

lmao
"fucking stupid piece of shit"
yo dats classic son, u really care about dis dont u, FUCK UNDERGROUND HIP HOP, niggaz talk about "emotional feelings and spiritual shit" fuck that
nigga go for yours, get ya money, fuck u pay me, its all about that paper kid
I spit clips at u niggaz that try n stop my shine
n by the way, fuck white rappers

and who da fuck r u to decide wats real hip hop n wats not

ur a no body white kid on a no body rap board

since wen did u get any kind of power?
oh my bad, ur a moderator,lol, i c u my nigga

lol. kid had no legs to stand on so he got racial. Nice way to show your point of view reflects a broken pencil.

Pointless.

all im gonna say to that is not all underground is about 'emotional feelings and spiritual shit', but to the rest of what you said, just ...wow

and i never said anything was 'real' hip hop, its just obvious those verses are better then nelly's

Look dumbass. I'm a black dude from the hood, stop usin your race and location to justify stupid shit. There's a shitload of white rappers that shit on black rappers. rofl its all about that paper kid. You got alot to learn. If muthafuckas made it the new trend to have gay sex you would do it. If you don't like white rappers because blacks started rap then stop speaking this white man's language. Let's all click our tounges and beat bongos, kthx

lol, niggaz is wack son

all u underground niggaz act like us street dudes gotta respect wat u spit, like oh, they spit real, we respect that

but y'all cant never respect us niggaz who talk about wats around us, like fuck u nigga i hold gatts, i still spit, niggas wuld wish to liv day in my shoes son

stay in ya lane "moderator"

lets see...........

two white rappers who hav been active on a rap board for two years,lmao, dats classic fam

y'all niggas is wack, wait minute, one of 'em is a mod, he shuld b respected,lol

5,000 plus post on a rap site

enuff said.............................................

dont hate cuz white rappers on DIS SITE is wack as fuck, i listen to they soundlick n they all wack as fuck, i even played it for niggaz on my block n they laughed they ass off

Underground mean's not street? Have you heard of vakill? Wtf have u heard of 80% of underground rap? I'm not white btw, I could of sworn I said that.

Rofl @ playin songs u heard on the internet for your nigas on the block. Ya'll be sittin there chillin and just be like "ayo you hear that new black magik track? you gotta peep this its mad wack".

da 1st one wasnt even talk'n to u nigga

wow.

did i once say "im a mod respect me" i couldnt give to fucks about being a mod.

Your sitting there tryna tell us what hip hop is, and at the same time telling us we have no right to say what hip hop is.

see the contridiction?


ayo, why when your tryna prove a point about mainstream lyrics compared to underground lyrics, you all of a sudden try attack something completly off topic such as the color fo skin and a word in my user title?

maybe because your original argument backfired and you literally shat on your innitial statment.

kid.

your attacking us on some fucked up bullshit. You started your argument with nelly lyrics. You lost before you even started.


Fuck out of here:)

Well of course some white rappers are bad. Some black rappers are bad, why do they get the privledged of not being judged? I can understand if u like that type of music but dont sit there and slander underground music because they introduce a side of life that you aren't ready to see.

stop rapping n stick to rock n roll

Race doesnt mean shit. There are wack as fuck white rappers, just like there are wack as fuck black rappers.

Never mind lyrics though, 95% of those mainstream dudes cant even pick out a decent beat! Let alone write lyrics that arent repetetive, monotonous, and the same as every other song out. Hey, the lyrics are like the beats. -_-

And yo, what would you consider hip hop?

1st post i acuallt might take into consideration

n yes its cuz a black dude sed it

i dont care about that mod bullshit, i never said i dont respect 'street' rappers, im just sick of hearing that cuz thats all i hear everywhere i go so the topic is the same always its annoying so i choose not to listen to it, and a lot of those street guys aint street at all you gonna believe somebody if they said they shot someone etc. why would you WANT to say you shot someone in a track? if you really did that you would keep it to yourself as much as possible

yea i think y'all got it fucked up

i dont acually like Nelly i jus respect him cuz he's get'n his money n hes good at wat he does which is make muzic for the clubs

i consider hip hop, Nas, Africa Bambata(spelled wrong), dj premier, KRS-1, Gang Starr, Immortal Technique, MC Supernatural, Mos Def, Talib Kweli, Lupe Fiasco, Kanye West

black people made rock and roll, so should i be telling you that instead?

so ur saying imagination has no place in hip hop???

thats the basiss of hip hop, same way a dope underground MC can hav a hot conceept song, a street nigga can use his imagination to say he did dis n dat, no1 really killed dat many ppl

yea, you could do that, but they gotta make sure they talkin about a story or somethin if theyre sayin they did this and that or whatever, but a lot of them say that in their tracks and then they go out in real life and still act like they do it for real, even though they might not

oh iight i c wat u say'n now fam

end of the day.
young mic, mic young young scrappy. whatever you want to call yourself.

Your entire approach is wrong, you are wrong.
i dont give a fuck who a person is, if they wrong I will tell them.

lol, wat da fuck kind of name is ysdat anyway?

whys that?

its older than young:)

Your idea of hip hop is obviously completely warped. All that music you listed is rap, it isnt hip hop.

son its somethin that u have to understand..these so called mainstream artist are not all wack..but most of the time a label will demand for an artist to rap a certain way to get the LABEL more profit..heh..they say they will pay more..but they just take that shit right back out somewhere in the contract..thats like sellin ya soul..