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"Hold ya Head" ft Q
This some Real Shit for the Hip Hop Heads out there This some deep shit...the Intro Chorus and the Lyrix explain it all Remember its only my 2nd Track ya Notice the Elevation im 1st Q 2nd *Nuff Said* "Hold ya Head" ft Q |
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yeah the intro is from a good movie.........
Beat is good......i like the sampled marley hook first up flow is good lyrics is good quality is trash gotta pick up a better mic man lyrics flowed well wit beats good shit Q your quality sounds like it fell offa lil I was feelin luciano's pressene more and his multies Your flow was better tho....so it was easier too listen too this song is pretty straight..not too bad keep it up |
Thanx bro...........
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:( yea...I admit, I got lazy on this one... but, Luciano held it down well... preciate da feed 1 |
This not the last u gonna hear from us
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hahha i like the American History X intro
the beat is ill..i heard it before...dope shit....bob marley that is i think? luciano..comiin in..you got dope ass lyrics...ill sounding voice and flow i'm loving it.... only thing here is that the quality could be upped a tad bit.. Q you come in....nice lyrics as well...riding the beat good and everything...good shit overall this was a nice little track yall did...good shit.. |
appreciate it bro
yea i gotta learn some more shit bout mixin |
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ima a bit busy but i felt this way too nice my dudes Q stand tall my friend and Luciano my man keep em comin. nice flow and creativity |
Thanx Bro...Uppin ya
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The beat is dope *thanks me* :) bob marley sample on the hook is nice
Luciano comiin in ya flow alot better then ya first track..im feelin it ya quality better then ya first track i can understand everyword ya sayin and nice job on the add libs homie..overall yo verse was nice and you elavatin quickly fam..keep it up Q comes in nice lyrics also..flow is nice delivery is nice as well riding the beat good and everything...good shit but yea like PT said it sounds like ya quality fell off alil but other than that nice verse homie overall this was a nice track..keep um commin |
Thanx Fam...im Elevateing on every track
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This shit was hot on both sides of the track. lyrics was nice. Im guessing Luciano was on the 1st verse and Q on the second. Luciano had one line that he kinda rushed through and seemed like he tried to force it in but it was'nt that big a deal. His Intro was tight and on key and his verse was on point wit good multies and energy that brings the biggie beat to life. Sounds a lot different to his 1st audio...thank god...lol..jk.
I like Q's style cuz its slowed down so u can get into wat he is saying more and feel it. His voice is tight for trax too. didn't see any flaws in his verse at all. like Past tense said the quality is turned down a bit compared to the tracks on his Myspace shit. His Multies was still tight too. Keep bring tight shit to the table both of you...this text shit is only for kicks and giggles...if niggaz can't do audio then they shouldn't be spitting at all. I give the song an over all score of 8.5/10 "1" |
I told u fam ...that 1st track i did was trash
im elevateing .... but appreciate the feed |
listening
The introduction is koo from american history X. word. sick movie. Anywayz. onto the track. The beat. hold ya head beat. Thats whats really good. anywayz onto the verses. Luciano Yeah the quality is fuckin booty. but i can understand your vocals clearly. The lyrics on this shit. is hot fo real. im feelin shit. The flow is alright. kind of off beat. but on beat at the same time. you should of chose a different flow but this shti came off tyte. the multi's were deadly in this. nice shit. the volume was good. overall verse 7.5/10 Q. word at the wanna go to heaven. iw as waitin for somebody to say that. Shit was sick styll. The lyrics is on point and the flow is fire. Im feelin this shit fo real. Multi's also good but thats typical for the q. good shit overall verse 8.2/10 overall. this track is FIRE. luciano is a fuckin DANGEROUS FACTOR look at what man is doin with only 2 tracks? damn good shit |
*Dangles the AI Chain ova these ni99az*
Troop & Kontro Collab comin soon Ai n the Buildin Appreciate the feed Fam |
Thats whats up. AI audio. we got this shit on lock. Just when you thought it couldn't get any worse. We aint goin for the KO we goin for the kill
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AI Collab COmin soon....
Give me time 2 elevate 1st lol |
this shit was cool first dude was ight flow was coo but sum shit was rushed needs a better mic gud shit tho q your flow was like biggies on this song he was on but like in the end u switched it up delivery was like big but it was cool overall pretty tight shit man nice drop
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thanks 4 the feed bro.................
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I feel you should of cut the sample straigth after "danny" stopped talking.
marly sample is cool. troop you sounding solid bro, nice original style brought to the table. Hit me up on a collabo bro. nice flow decent rhymes. Fuck the quality bro, too many people stress bout quality on RV. mafuckers we making music from our bedrooms, too many expect million doller perfect production. Ok track. |
Ooh shit A.I on the grind..haha
movie clip is sick..it goes wit the message... wow Bob is in here...? ooh shit its him..i loved this beat Jimmy flow was grymy just need betta quality , presence was nice...it sounds more like you readin from paper..so u should get the emotions on there man...but i have to say this way betta than ya first. Q- flow was cool, lyrics was sick...on the real i have to say ya'll came together nicely am lovin the chorus dammit.. |
4sho thanx 4 the feed fam
*Hands Q His AI Chain* Itz a Wrap people |
listenin....
dope beat....delivery is comin in strong.... flow is pretty solid too....first verse is pretty nice.... this 2nd cat got waaay better quality and it shows.... yall should try to atleast get the vocals the same volume.... 2nd cat tho im feelin, coo voice... flow is straight....solid words too....nice verse... overall this joint is pretty tight |
intro was a lil long... i woulda only used the part where they started with the hip hop shyt...maybe a lil bit before that... love da marley sample...
thought you was troop at first... still kinda do in a way... not sure...lol first verse was hot... feeling the lyrics... had a menacing type vibe to it... matched the beat well... quality can be upped ...a lot more... but other than that this shyt was good.. Q.. typical Q quality... so we ain't even gonna comment any further on that...lol... not ya best verse here, dawg... i was expecting sumn more powerful from you on a subject like this... the emotion wasn't even conveyed this time around... almost like you were sidetracked with sumn else weighing on ya... either that or ya just wasn't in a recording mood... lyrics were ok but i feel ya coulda delivered a lot better than that with some projection and emphasis on certain parts... whatevers eating at you man... just remember the title of this song..."Hold Ya Head"... shyt ain't that serious.... until the government gets involved!...holla |
Listening..
Intro is dope and deep..Beat is raw. Troop comes in pretty nice, lyrics are nice, they fit the track well, quality is ehh, flow is good for the most part, just a few places where it seems a bit rushed..Lovin' the sampled hook..Whoa, Q comes in, and I swear to God I thought it was BIG. Man, that was weird. Anyways, he comes in nice, multies are nice, flow is hot like always, emotion in good in both verses, lyrics are dooooope I'm feelin' them..Overall, this shit is dope. And that's pretty much all there is to say. |
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^^Yea...ur exactly right...but, that's been resolved man...I'm ready to drop that fire. Preciate da feed yall. |
Look out 4 some more AI collabs ya...
appreciate the feed |
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What's hot:
Q's part for most part. flow, lyrics, delivery on point good shit Luciano's lyrics and emotion What's coo: beat Q's quality Lucian's flow and delivery. gotta few points to brush up, most part good tho What's not: Lucianso's quality. lol man, can't understand few parts cu your quality so bad OVerall tho track was a nice little joint. good shit to bump too. f'real... 8/10 RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232068 |
4sho fam...................................
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OK, am I the only one who thought the intro had absolutely nothing to do with the song? The lyrics were pretty random to me and I couldn't quite grasp a concept since you threw me off with the intro. I was waiting for someone to go off about racism or white people or something, but instead it was just generic rapping. I think this song would have been ten times better without the intro, cause that shit just ruined the whole song for me. It left me waiting for something that never came and I felt disappointed in the end.......
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well damn fam....how was the track content ?
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^it'd be nice to RTF foo :shoot:
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will do foo...........
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ill get 2 it.........
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