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Kontroverzy ft Taniesha - Im Dying/Hustlin'
Kontroverzy ft Taniesha - I'm Dying/Hustlin' Vocals: kontroverzy & taniesha Lyrics by: Kontroverzy Production: Yessur productions Mastered by: Kontroverzy lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4216647&q=lo hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4216647&q=hi http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4216647 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231912 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231882 |
singer is ok some parts where she sounds off key but pretty good
damn beat comes in maaaad loud lol maybe tone that down a little presence delivery is good flow is really good switch up pretty nice really like this track pretty good shit |
alright thanx. i appreciate it ma. And welcome back
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also the first track probably will go on the mixtape aswell
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LMAO@ me hearin the intro..jus nice n soft..then i let my gaurd down..then..BOOM! :shoot: :shoot: heres the beat...nice song by the way :thumbup: |
LMFAO yeah yo. i appreciate it. famz.
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your delivery is tight Lyrics tight flow, good shit What's coo: singing, had some good points and some bad points What's not: beat. lol iunno not my style man. iunno but overall shit was a nice lil jam tho, man. f'real. good shit 8.5/10 RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232068 |
appreciate it. I will return the favour in a few.
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oh shit i was gonna use this beat ahhahah its up on yessurs page dammmn son peepin it now
I love this beat..its just FIRE ya feel whats hot:pressense and emotion plus beat Whats ok:flow and lyrics whats not:quality is straight but needs a lil improvement!!! Overall i like this shit tho...ur flow is a lil choppy in some spots tho..... the singer is straight ya feel......just sounds like an avg. singer..its good shit......i'm feelin it...keeep it up A.I. Till the death of it |
thats whats good..yeah the hook was a real simple part.....nothing fancy...she just did her thang i did mine..i appreciate it.
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RTF foo!! :mad: :shoot:
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shit my bad. i keep falling asleep. alright i will soon
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intro singin sounded like Janet Jackson at first
lol feelin this beat vocals mixed well...cud be amped .75 decibels flow is good delivery fits this beat lyrics aren't bad Hook sounds nice...would be even doper had you ad libbed it is that a beat switch?...hmm vocal quality seems compromised on this beat switch... still slick tho was feelin this production |
thanks i appreciate the "Choppy" feedback bruh. Nice Shit
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Presence was illy dilly yo...flow was of the heezy fo sheezy u elevatin like hot cakes neggggggaaaaaaaaaaaa..lol also hook was nice..like lyfe's song..lol Shit that i didnt like- the weird beat switch or its like that ..i dont know |
lol yeah i know. its basically two incomplete songs put into one
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aight wassup lil niggy.
first joint the intro was ill. When she was singing at first shit was hot, but the hook.. she need some help on lol... yea about the that *BOOM* when the beat come in lol.. that needed to be chilled out :P .. lyrics was aight in my opinion. real simple like, thats coo. i like them type tracks. but rhyme schemes need to be payed more attention to when you spit a simple joint yah'mean ? jus real talk. Flow was gravy, ya dig. a few times you almost fell off but you was back at it like bunnies and shit yah'mean ? second joint i thought this was the best of the two. some aight punches/wordplay in there. Flow was on point. a it short, but i do the same shit so its aight :P. overall a nice lil collage and shit. keep it pimpin ;) |
the girl sounds hella sexy....
but she needs to polish her overdubs the production needs work learn to pan my ninja parametric EQ, De Esser, Chorus, Synth Boost L40, Center, R40 pending lol flows a lil off but you'll get there what's with the change of beat? didn't really understand that |
ok and the feedback on the actual track ^ LOL. but yeah i appreciate the feedback
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good track kontro keep it up :D
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wait wait. what does this panning do? you could use this on cool edit? |
kontro...aint heard u in a min kid...but anyways typign as I listen...singing in the opening is a nice touch fits build of beat...I heard this beat before its tight son..ncie choice here kid...liking how you opened....you delivery has gotten ALOT!!!better...lyrics is tupac simple but has that tupac writing style kinda pacish flow...but shit is working with ya flow...hook is ncie shawtie can sing...ok going into next beat..ok spitting on a mid 90's west coast beat...got that slow pronounced flow going it was alil robotic...u miscounted ya syllables in spots but all in all it was tight...good delivery u def stepped ya game up kid.....1
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appreciated it famz. i will get at that track in a few and i appreciate the feedback
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a bump bump bump
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