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Czar Bishop 07-22-06 05:51 PM

631fl0w vs Czar Bishop
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-25-06 at 05:51 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-22-06 05:52 PM

Czar Bishop has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-06 05:52 PM.

System 07-22-06 05:54 PM

631fl0w has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-06 05:54 PM.

631fl0w 07-22-06 06:09 PM

It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....

Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high

Oh yea he's real hard..the home of the gay cowboys and lonestars
Only time he comes up with major figures is when he dials his phonecalls

Joined in Feb. and dont have a record..why should i fear ya?
Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror

631fl0w 07-22-06 06:10 PM

why u made the drop date in like 3 days......i told ya to make it real quick

631fl0w 07-22-06 06:13 PM

"It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period)....."

EXP.- told him to drop verse quick n he kept tryin to push tha time back

"Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high"

EXP.-bi-shop..self explanatory as the rest of the bars

Czar Bishop 07-23-06 04:37 PM

Fuckin with my 'psalmns' should be a 'sin'*
Fuckin with me like he thought I had a wack twin
I pull punchlines, your lines are 'pickups' without the 'sticks'
I'm amazed he can say 631, he can't even count to six!**
Prolly cuz he can't think of anymore lines to drop
When I hustle on my corner is the only time I get 'Writer's Block'***
You 'call the cops', and I call it 'takeout'
Cuz, when the pigs come, I eat ya and call it a 'steakout'
Okay, stats raised. Well this merkin was fun
I see your still finishin ya 'circle', not even on 'square-one'.

* - psalmns = in the bible. sin... well you get it.
** - he only dropped 4 lines when the minimum was six.
*** - I'm calling myself a writer and my neighborhood is my block. Therefore, its Writer's Block.

Czar Bishop 07-23-06 06:19 PM

you edited your verse. cheating? i think so.

mods, please close this and take it off our battle records

631fl0w 07-23-06 07:32 PM

U dumb bitch i didnt edit it those were my explanations.........

Czar Bishop 07-23-06 11:11 PM

No, Mr. Cocky. No. ,

631fl0w 07-24-06 10:12 PM

votes..? .

GKillaz05 07-24-06 10:30 PM

Voted For: Czar Bishop

Czar Bishop:
Fuckin with my 'psalmns' should be a 'sin'*
Fuckin with me like he thought I had a wack twin
4/10 - OK Opener.
I pull punchlines, your lines are 'pickups' without the 'sticks'
I'm amazed he can say 631, he can't even count to six!**
5/10 - Niice Personal.
Prolly cuz he can't think of anymore lines to drop
When I hustle on my corner is the only time I get 'Writer's Block'***
2/10 - Nah.
You 'call the cops', and I call it 'takeout'
Cuz, when the pigs come, I eat ya and call it a 'steakout'
2/10 - Nah.
Okay, stats raised. Well this merkin was fun
I see your still finishin ya 'circle', not even on 'square-one'.
3/10 - Meh.
16/50 = 32%

You had some ok lines, and some weak lines, your flow was pretty good.



631fl0w:
It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....
4/10 - Meh.

Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high
2/10 - No.

Oh yea he's real hard..the home of the gay cowboys and lonestars
Only time he comes up with major figures is when he dials his phonecalls
2/10 - NO.

Joined in Feb. and dont have a record..why should i fear ya?
Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror
4/10 - OK Closer.
12/40 = 30%

Your verse was pretty weak, didnt really feal anything, flow was iight.


OVERALL: This battle was pretty weak, I give it to CZ because he had the more creative verse. His punches where ok in some parts. 6 on the other hand didnt really have anything that good. Work on ya punches/wordplay.

Czar Bishop 07-24-06 11:21 PM

Thanks for the honest voting.

'Movin on up... to the eastside... to a deeeluxe apartment... in the sky-high'

UP!

blazinballa421 07-25-06 07:08 PM

Voted For: 631fl0w

VOTE - 631

"It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period)....."
9/10
^line was crazy had me laughin but wasnt personal

Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high
7/10
^ Nice personal sick with the crackhead off tha high

Oh yea he's real hard..the home of the gay cowboys and lonestars
Only time he comes up with major figures is when he dials his phonecalls
6/10
^ aight u tried to make it personal cause hes from texas..its aight but the second line was clevers so props


Joined in Feb. and dont have a record..why should i fear ya?
Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror
9/10
^ best "flowing" line overall and nice punch

total = 30/50

Keep goin 631 and get ya record up....potential


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Fuckin with my 'psalmns' should be a 'sin'*
Fuckin with me like he thought I had a wack twin
3/10
^ first line was whack second was OK


I pull punchlines, your lines are 'pickups' without the 'sticks'
I'm amazed he can say 631, he can't even count to six!**
5/10
^OK atleast a personal
Prolly cuz he can't think of anymore lines to drop
When I hustle on my corner is the only time I get 'Writer's Block'***
2/10
^NAH..
You 'call the cops', and I call it 'takeout'
Cuz, when the pigs come, I eat ya and call it a 'steakout'
2/10
^NAH AGAIN...
Okay, stats raised. Well this merkin was fun
I see your still finishin ya 'circle', not even on 'square-one'.
2/10
^nah ...

631 shoulda dropped a couple more bars he woulda murda'd him but he still took the win easily
CZR's flow was the only thing that kept him in the battle...his rhymes are childish...

Confucius 07-25-06 08:07 PM

Voted For: 631fl0w

u got my vote only cuz his verse sucked more than yours did....

bishop: i figured u been around long enough to have better punches no disrespect but ur rhymes were elementary u used a nursery rhym talkin bout pickin up sticks and i can kinda understand explaining a complex punch but urs were not even hard hitting u shouldnt have to explain many punches let alone weak ones

631flow: u came weak to the only line that won me over was themajor figures joint but otha than that u used a piece of a personal and one of the most played punches of all time "Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror" everybody know the u cant see me punches were played when i wad in diapers come on ur verse was garbage elevate both verses sucked

631fl0w 07-25-06 10:18 PM

propz..


UPPIN vote so we can finish this......

CherryBluntZ 07-26-06 06:51 PM

Voted For: 631fl0w

Czar..u cant rap, go bak ta sellin seashell necklaces at tha swap meet BITCH, 6~3~1 all day

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Czar Bishop 07-26-06 06:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by CherryBluntZ
Voted For: 631fl0w

Czar..u cant rap, go bak ta sellin seashell necklaces at tha swap meet BITCH, 6~3~1 all day

Okay... honest voting? No. He didn't explain and he only voted for flow cuz he's from the same city as him.

And atleast the other cat wasn't A COMPLETE ASSHOLE ABOUT IT.

Go fucking die and rot in hell.

Confucius 07-26-06 07:11 PM

i wouldnt say u cant rap just elevate and work on da punches both of ya

CherryBluntZ 07-26-06 07:17 PM

naaaah id jus say he cant rap, but dont be madd at me tootz, dont hate tha playa ~hate tha game biiiiitch, 6~3~1 all daay

Confucius 07-26-06 07:29 PM

dont worry about him^^^^^^ hez a newb anyway.............

Go0niez FuKCaz 07-26-06 10:25 PM

Voted For: 631fl0w

It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....

Niceeee

Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high
^Nice personal..

Oh yea he's real hard..the home of the gay cowboys and lonestars
Only time he comes up with major figures is when he dials his phonecalls
^Nice personal n punch all in one
Joined in Feb. and dont have a record..why should i fear ya?
Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror

OK CLOSER

overall better flow and punches then czar bishop but work on it a lil more..


Fuckin with my 'psalmns' should be a 'sin'*
Fuckin with me like he thought I had a wack twin
ehhh...whack

I pull punchlines, your lines are 'pickups' without the 'sticks'
I'm amazed he can say 631, he can't even count to six!**
OK i guess but kiddy shit

Prolly cuz he can't think of anymore lines to drop
When I hustle on my corner is the only time I get 'Writer's Block'***
....no
You 'call the cops', and I call it 'takeout'
Cuz, when the pigs come, I eat ya and call it a 'steakout'
wow...need i say more?
Okay, stats raised. Well this merkin was fun
I see your still finishin ya 'circle', not even on 'square-one'.
OK closer



Im gunna have to agree with the others on this one CZAR u have a kiddy flow and ur punches are weak

Both of yoo need work but yu need alot more czar

Czar Bishop 07-27-06 01:08 PM

631fl0w: IP: 22D6 9E30
Go0niez FuKCaz: IP: 22D6 9E30

Both accounts should be banned and I automatticly get the win. I'll get a mod asap.

Stanza. 07-27-06 02:18 PM

Voted For: Czar Bishop

631
It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....
...........Nice...........
Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high
......................Weak..............
Oh yea he's real hard..the home of the gay cowboys and lonestars
Only time he comes up with major figures is when he dials his phonecalls
..................Goood...............
Joined in Feb. and dont have a record..why should i fear ya?
Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror
..................weak...................

overall man you did a good job not all your lines were great but your punchez were good just not constant ............and your personals were average nuttin specail .......

Czar
Fuckin with my 'psalmns' should be a 'sin'*
Fuckin with me like he thought I had a wack twin
....weak....and its spelled Psalms...
I pull punchlines, your lines are 'pickups' without the 'sticks'
I'm amazed he can say 631, he can't even count to six!**
...Nice personal and nice punch...
Prolly cuz he can't think of anymore lines to drop
When I hustle on my corner is the only time I get 'Writer's Block'***
...........Good..............
You 'call the cops', and I call it 'takeout'
Cuz, when the pigs come, I eat ya and call it a 'steakout'
.....nice.....
Okay, stats raised. Well this merkin was fun
I see your still finishin ya 'circle', not even on 'square-one'.
....lol nice and new.....

Overall man you came wit some originality your first line was weak though but other than that your lines and punchez were constant and strong your personals were on and you came very original

my v./ CZzar

Can You please RTF in any of the battle links in my sig .

Czar Bishop 07-27-06 04:15 PM

I'll make an honest vote. Not just a vote for you just cuz you voted for me. Word. Thanks for voting.

CherryBluntZ 07-27-06 04:31 PM

ooooo shitt, i see how it is, u got ma vote disqualified huh??? U aint even a real emcee, ya jus a lil bitch on his comp who thinks he can rap. If u was real then u wudnt have ta run ta a mod ta get ma vote dis. cuz you so good every1 else wud vote for ya shitt, rite doggy??? Ooo an ta tha punk tht called me a newb, jus cuz i dont got a hundred posts an spend all ma fee time on this site dont mean i dont kno shitt bout rappin, i been doin this shitt for years playboy. Jus cuz i speak ma mind an dont go round complementin every shitty rappa like "oooo youll get better,dont worry baby,keep workin on it champ" dont mean ya betta them me. Im here ta jus give ma vote an opinion on this shitt, im not here ta be no1s buddy,ill jus str8 up tell u "YO, u fuckin suck, eitha go work on ya shitt or get ya fatass off tha comp an stop wastin ya time here cuz this shitt aint for u". An since in talkin bout givin ma opinion anyway, Czar.....for real.....ive seen tighta rappas on candy bars biiiiiiiiiitch, 6~3~1


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