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31. Malicious (0-1) vs 32. Ken`Pho (0-1)
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nike.
and lets go 12lines, is that fine? my links* http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803765 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803775 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2805133 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2805861 |
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Look ima drop early and first, cuz i aint got time for you later on. so here's 12...
Listen bitch, ima boss who gets props for slayin these wacks Cuz ya raps fuckin shitty, like prostitutes sexing the ass its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher ...I'll expand ya whole body See man ya skills equal nothing, i'll saw off ya limbs Leave Mal like engineers with the tools ....but no ability to use them Faggot, only bump in the road u get is genitle warts Cuz Beating u was a nail in the coffin, ...Like 6 feet deep fuckin a corpse *finishing this faggot* After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings & ya my punches miss you...Mal, they use to hittin ya face It's walk n the park, so Mal drops hard... ...only cuz he forgot to tie his shoe lace (lol) BITCH!!! |
Too Easy...
I'm like Angelina Jolie, i like helpin poor ppl i'l be a friend to ya But just remember my plane of punches, is flyin India, get your gettin pwned in dis battle, but i geuss im gettin an L too Cuz see your losin the battle, and im losin respect for you kids been duckin me for ages, but he cant avoid this loss, Cuz We aint near the final stretch yet, kens shits play'd off kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when, The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses, There is a reason for everything, but even cheatin too? I'm simply tired of the d/r....... so i go to the bottom of all shit, s'how i ended up battlin you We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage, Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs... but we already take your words for granite, 12. |
After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings ^only one i liked... barley. Ken - wtf, ok first of all ..your problem is you use the word "like" as a comparison way too much. "like" disses aren't really that creative, and can result in many ways. cuz you could've said "like homo weddings" or "like homos getting married" or "like faggots protesting" ...and since it can resuly in so many ways and probably HAS resulted in these ways, this makes it sort of basic/played. so putting the word "like" in all of your punches and always using obvious comparisons is kind've wack to me imo. vs. get your gettin pwned in dis battle, but i geuss im gettin an L too Cuz see your losin the battle, and im losin respect for you ^barley a quotable. more of a statement/self respectish punch. We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage, Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs... but we already take your words for granite, ^good, but its played. i've seen it on RB like 7 times with the granite wordplay ..i've seen it on a couple other sites as well. I've heard rappers on mainstream shit even use granite wordplay. since it's not original it makes it non-creative. Mal - meh, you came pretty original, the problem is your wording. the way you word shit is just not harsh to anyone. and dunno about here, but on RB you're too stingy and high and mighty to listen to our tips. so listen, YOU NEED TO WORK ON WORDING! be more harsh/direct. be meaner to the opponent. cuss @ the dumbfucks. be aggressive! re-read your lines and ask yourself if they'd effect you in any way ..or if they'd sound like a lame overused diss. (also goes for ken`pho). you guys'll get better. i got faith in ya ..just keep working on shit, take hints. shitty battle but ..winner imo was, v. Malicious, for more originality. |
^so you think i loss cuz of me saying 'Like' to much for punches?!? :rolleyes:
cuz thats basically the onlything you're explaining. but w/e 1-0 mal's direction |
its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty
Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher ...I'll expand ya whole body After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings nice... vs Too Easy... kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when, The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses, 1st line nah, 2ed i was kinda feeling.... P.S it really wasnt that ez!! vote: ken' pho...... |
its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty
Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher ...I'll expand ya whole body After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings vs kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when, The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses, mal i wasnt digging the india wordplay, the granite wordplay is played but those wouldve took the battle for you ken chill with the like comparison you should be aiight v/ kenpho |
aight coo, 2-1 ken's direction
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Nothing
vs kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when, The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses, Ken had played lines the wedding line was meh but i didnt think it was worth quoting v-Mal. |
After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings vs kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when, The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses, We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage, Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs... but we already take your words for granite, v-Mal. |
Up over no-shows.
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After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings Vs. Nothing Both came pretty weak - I could not find anything worth quoting in Mal's verse so... Vote - Ken Pho |
aight 3-3, ken'phos direction
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Ken Pho
Listen bitch, ima boss who gets props for slayin these wacks Cuz ya raps fuckin shitty, like prostitutes sexing the ass this was wack. its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher ...I'll expand ya whole body ehh See man ya skills equal nothing, i'll saw off ya limbs Leave Mal like engineers with the tools ....but no ability to use them ok Faggot, only bump in the road u get is genitle warts Cuz Beating u was a nail in the coffin, ...Like 6 feet deep fuckin a corpse blah *finishing this faggot* After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings Cuz i'm ringin this faggot, ....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings blah & ya my punches miss you...Mal, they use to hittin ya face It's walk n the park, so Mal drops hard... ...only cuz he forgot to tie his shoe lace (lol) deccent Mal. I'm like Angelina Jolie, i like helpin poor ppl i'l be a friend to ya But just remember my plane of punches, is flyin India, decent wordplay. get your gettin pwned in dis battle, but i geuss im gettin an L too Cuz see your losin the battle, and im losin respect for you ha, okay kids been duckin me for ages, but he cant avoid this loss, Cuz We aint near the final stretch yet, kens shits play'd off blah kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when, The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses, lol, this was funny There is a reason for everything, but even cheatin too? I'm simply tired of the d/r....... so i go to the bottom of all shit, s'how i ended up battlin you this was strectched like Kens whole verse. We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage, Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs... but we already take your words for granite, decent closer. vote - Malicious. easily. |
thank you for your honesty^
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yup 4-3 mal's directions...good battle
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Malicious wins 4-3.
Malicious wins (1-1) Ken `Pho loses (0-2) |
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