Who Dat?...Quick 16
 

*Link's*

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232023
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232375

beats hot man...feelin it...

shoulda kicked in sooner...took too long...quality is ok...flow is nice for a new audio head...lyrics are straight...delivery is cool as well...finger fuckin bar lol...

but ye...keep doin ya thing man...keep droppin :thumbup:

RTF in my sig (I'm Talking To You)

4sho fam

i was droppin drom some quick 16

Minus all hate, because I would say this to anyone, most of your punches are ollllllllllllllllllld flips and shit or fucking off the wall concepts that have no particular relevance. Basically you write your audios like you write your text which isn't a good thing.Your flow is iight but you rush sometimes and it sounds bad, other than that and your quality, this was iight.

I exspected u 2 hate

but i see u do got an ounce of Maturity n u

Thanx 4 the feed i guess

by the way i didnt write shit on this track

I aint hating on shit except for the fact that your style of writing makes room for creativity but most of it is bland and tired and played or streched. The thing about your flow is just a problem that almost everyone on the site has so it's not even you, just a common thing, flow is hard to master. I said it was iight so of course I have maturity. :confused: You just need to expand what you do because as of now you sound like a boring mixtape artist. Your voice is too generic to do anything for you so everything else you do has to make up for it and as of now, it doesn't. That's not hate, that's feedback and just honesty. I would NEVER intentionally demean someones track if it was actually good because I respect hip hop too much and know what it takes to drop a track, I'm just trying to help, once you can drop your ego and the superficial beef you'll be able to see that. -_-

I see wha u sayin....i aint holdin no grudges

i cant get better with out constructive criticisim

shits straight yo. Im feelin dis. Good flow. Punches are cool. The quality is gettin better with every track. Reppin Ai to the fullest. No doubt the rookie of the year. Haha good shit famz. Keep em comin. your emotion is pretty good. im feelin dis'

7.3/10

4sho fam..............

dats some smooth shit
dat intro is hella cool

ya got some nice punches here and there........up ya quality thoe...but hey work wit wut ya got......ya got a nice flow towards the end i think u rushed a part......but not bad.......aiite.......

pz

~1~

Good stuff.

Down for a callab?

4 sho get @ me

thanx 4 the feed....

was that supposed to be a diss cause if it was I said all I needed to say in the audio battle to shut this clown/fag up its said the real ROOKIE OF THE YEAR FOR THIS AUDIO SHIT IS HERE

lol u gone come in my Thread Hatein?

did i add a post 2 yo shitty ass songz that nobody commented on?

no...so thankz 4 givin me more posts and views lol

Bitch,,,

Nigga I got nothing but 8/10 and 9/10 on "Thump" which would own this bullshit freestyle again the real ROOKIE OF THE YEAR is here and again you got owned

u have 4 views on thump

thump yo ass out my thread

u full of bull

lol...........im sicker wit wordplay when im jus talkin shit

More like 59 views and no you make me sick

my bad i got u and your wack ass Momma track mixed up

but i have wha 3 less views and 1 less posts than u

and dropped this yesterday and u dropped yours last week?

lol...u not no rookie of the year..u started doin audio here in 05

lol its 06 bitch...and No one Appointed u rookie of no year

Nobody even KNOWS u do Audio

give it up kid.....u cant fuck wit me

go play with your Playschool Label and gettin ya shit robbed

In chicago....

Nigga I just started doing audio what 3 weeks ago and I proved I'm ROOKIE OF THE YEAR WHEN I OWNED YOU...and have you even listned to "My Mama' to know if its garbage I actually listened to your tracks and you aint garbage but you can't flow and with audio flow means alot more than lyrics

Im suprised u said that

I guess u do got some Man in u

Fuck tha Beef Ni99a its Senseless

Ill see u in the Battle

Best of Luck 2 u

Same here but before you call someone or thier track garbage at least listen to it

now would be a good time for me to go...

RTF on my track i'm talking to you with Kontro...

~Luciano~...spare a min?

I got u Fam............

And if you can do the same for my mama too

yea you shoulda started rapping wayyyyyyyyyyy sooner.....
turn your dubs down alot, your stuffing a lil....flow its a lil forced at points, but your new to the sayin it part....
go read a tut on quality....n shit you could benifit alot from quality.....
you got no where to go but up but try n polish it all up tho.....

rtf on myspace girls yo - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232428

Appreciate the Feed..........

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upppin this shit 4 some feed

Will do thanx fam

what's hot:
nice beat
lyrics pretty hot yo
got nice voice

what's coo:
delivery, emotion and flow. they all coo, but could be upped bit. but you just startin' out so it's all good nah mean?

what's not:
lol quality

overall, this a nice lil joint man. you really comin' up in this shit yo. props yo. stay up. 8/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650

beat was nice... down south vibe...

verse.. some ya punches were played fam... but i dunno when you wrote or recorded this..

A1.. tight like pussy... you get me


lmfao @ the outro




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on another note wordplay was str8.... the other punches were nice... lol @ the tony dungy line... ya flow sounds like it can be upped compared to that other track of yours i listened to.. but u got the basic idea so i can't really say much on that... overall pretty consistant verse my man.. keep droppin

Thanx ya..i appreciate the feed

only way i can grow and elevate

appreciate it