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GKillaz05 07-26-06 06:03 PM

GKillaz05 vs Wordz Ahgod
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-26-06 at 06:33 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

System 07-26-06 06:05 PM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-06 06:05 PM.

GKillaz05 07-26-06 06:10 PM

Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT
dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house
you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work
I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'

System 07-26-06 06:16 PM

Wordz Ahgod has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-06 06:16 PM.

Wordz AhGod 07-26-06 06:32 PM

I battle against legends who would merk you more then twice recent
If you battling legends. . .
. . . It'll be the legend of you actually drop'n something nice or decent
In other words, in a text battle, Gs'. . . I still murder em'
I would drop more personals . . .
. . . but honestly, him being wack is all I really heard of em'
so I'll make G switch his flow like you pee'ing on seats with plastic covers
the only time you killing G's. . .
. . . Is probably while you fags are inside each other
'Coz man, Your whole style is outdated, lyricaly you still a bitch
you been here since 04 repping 05, Coz you getting murdered on the 6th
you aint the 1 -2 champ, but you can get knocked by a pro
So understand you not original. . .
. . . I checked, he logg'd off a few minutes ago

GKillaz05 07-26-06 06:39 PM

word, good battle.. uppin..................

Speats 07-26-06 06:46 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

G'Killaz: okay your shit was decent, really nice, damn funny lines like this one

"and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses

Structure wasint that bad, it was pretty good
Flow was not bad, could be better,sometimes it dosint work, but some lines does
good drop

Wordz Ahgod:
Mmmm i dunno man, it was good, but not enought to beat G'Killaz, the structure was bad so as the flow,punch's were weak, i dont know man, just wasint feeling it, flow was off

this vote goes too G'Killaz

better not hear you say that im a dickrider, im just an honest voter

Wordz AhGod 07-26-06 08:27 PM

wtf? why would I say you dick rider? Im not 12 man. thanks for the vote and feed dawg.

I rushed the last bar coz I was at work. 1

Go0niez FuKCaz 07-26-06 09:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Wordz Ahgod
 
aight battle....................................chea

Wordz AhGod 07-27-06 11:07 AM

uppin for votes...............

Stanza. 07-27-06 01:04 PM

Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Gkilla
Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT
dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house
..........nice wordplay..........
you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
............LOL nice punch and terrific wordplay....
GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work
I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt
.....so..so.............
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
......weak.....
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'
....Good...

overall your lines were good and your punchez were on this was a good battle and hard to decide i liked your wordplay but its like you came hard in the begining and then you slacked off near the end I think thats what cost you my vote dont take it personal jus a thought

Wordz Ahgod

im not gonna breakdown your verse you know that your verse was kinda sloppy with the lines and I dint feel like dealing with them lines .......................overall though your punchez were constans and strong and I think thats what gave you the edge in this battle you came strong all the way and you held it and you toke it al the way /.................

my v/ goes to Wordz

please RTF in a battle link in my sig in 24 hrs or lesss or this vote will get removed

CherryBluntZ 07-27-06 03:49 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Yo im votin for GK, i aint got no loong ass explanation or nothin i jus think his punches r betta, more creative an shitt. I like how Wordz lines were put togtha but i think u workin more on tryin ta flow fancy then on ya punches. 6~3~1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Dickard. 07-27-06 06:48 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Wordz ahgod-You came weak brah...no hate but i just wasnt feeling your flow/punches/personals....your set up was a diff. approach from wat i read from you before i believe...but it just didnt piece together..it seemed u were in a writers block or had a lack of punches on ur mind....gotta stay up and fresh...once again no hate...
overall 4.5/10

G.K.-Came pretty decent and fresh i liked your verse...had some good wordplay and punches incorporated into your verse...structure was good and made the flow more appealing to your punches...as for personals...a lil low but ur strong punches took up for that overall i think you took this 6.5/10

you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'

vs.

In other words, in a text battle, Gs'. . . I still murder em'
I would drop more personals . . .
. . . but honestly, him being wack is all I really heard of em'


v/G.K. easily.

Dickard. 07-27-06 07:13 PM

by the way, Gkilla wanna rtf with an honest vote ....link in sig.

GKillaz05 07-30-06 09:23 PM

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GKillaz05 07-31-06 10:04 PM

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Stanza. 07-31-06 10:36 PM

cmon man you aint gonna rtf in my battle thats fucked up ...really

Kriptic 08-01-06 11:06 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

His punches were harder i think, nice flow..and words a god felt.. like he was tryin too hard..forcing his shit...nice battle tho

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

GKillaz05 08-01-06 11:18 PM

I was about to Oz, but then I realized that I just joined up with N.O.K. today, so I cant return the fav, sorry mayne.

Valerie 08-02-06 12:29 AM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
peepin the polls and i think g's got this one hands down.

GKillaz05 08-03-06 10:53 PM

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GKillaz05 08-04-06 12:38 PM

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Lyrically Gifted 08-04-06 04:57 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

VOTE G

I battle against legends who would merk you more then twice recent
If you battling legends. . .
. . . It'll be the legend of you actually drop'n something nice or decent
ok but self glory didnt help

In other words, in a text battle, Gs'. . . I still murder em'
I would drop more personals . . .
. . . but honestly, him being wack is all I really heard of em'
you should have droped more personals alywas helps...

so I'll make G switch his flow like you pee'ing on seats with plastic covers
the only time you killing G's. . .
huh??

. . . Is probably while you fags are inside each other
'Coz man, Your whole style is outdated, lyricaly you still a bitch
you been here since 04 repping 05, Coz you getting murdered on the 6th
ok

you aint the 1 -2 champ, but you can get knocked by a pro
So understand you not original. . .
. . . I checked, he logg'd off a few minutes ago
mehh...





G's verse
IP:


Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT
dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house
ahh.. ok i guess theres a simile in there makin it bettter

you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
ok

GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work
I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt
self glory

I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
meh
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch
aight..'


yea yea i vote G

Wordz AhGod 08-04-06 05:24 PM

u broke my lines down wrong...oh well. w/e uppin...

Lyrically Gifted 08-04-06 05:39 PM

how are they supposed to be broken down then.... ill redo it.. dont really matter it was all still self glory and nothing hard hitting.... show me how you want it done ill do it....?

Wordz AhGod 08-04-06 06:06 PM

Its cool dawg. dont really matter. it just that my verse goes something like:

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxx. . .
. . . xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
1 bar
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxx. . .
. . . xxxxxxxxxxxxx
2 bar

you broke one of my lines down like

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxx. . .

^but you left out the last part of that bar. thats all. your feed back was str8 and adequate enough.

Lyrically Gifted 08-04-06 06:13 PM

haha no i didnt ... i broke it down right liek this...

I battle against legends who would merk you more then twice recent
If you battling legends. . .
. . . It'll be the legend of you actually drop'n something nice or decent
^ ^
ok but self glory didnt help

i believe thats right .. but its dont matter i voted.. it was a good cloce battle...word

Wordz AhGod 08-04-06 06:49 PM

so I'll make G switch his flow like you pee'ing on seats with plastic covers
the only time you killing G's. . .
huh??
[B] Im talking a bout part ^ u was confused coz you didn't read it right but I would have still caught the L from your vote regardless so its str8 [B/]
. . . Is probably while you fags are inside each other
'Coz man, Your whole style is outdated, lyricaly you still a bitch
you been here since 04 repping 05, Coz you getting murdered on the 6th
ok

GKillaz05 08-06-06 02:05 PM

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GKillaz05 08-08-06 02:15 PM

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GKillaz05 08-15-06 12:04 AM

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