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Ca'lam - Everday (full song, with me singing hook)
www.soundclick.com/calam
yo. this joint is heart writen. real talk, every word i said in this track is straight up just - real. i made it for my family and friends cause im goign away to college and i dont htink i'll be movin back to my home town. ever summer i got a apartment deal where my college is and after i graduate im bouncin. so this is like a goodbye track to my people. me on all verses and me singing the hook. shits hot. Drop ya links..... Feedback Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showp...302&postcount=6 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...920&postcount=7  Ca’lam – Everyday [Intro] ayo you know when its time. [Verse] growin up was kinda easy, no hard times.. two parents working 9-5’s, I had charmed life.. until I hit junior high, hit a rough patch.. I didn’t fit in, it got under the skin of my rough back.. But no matter tho, fucka friend cause I had a home.. Had a father to teach me, and a mom to hold.. Didn’t get in trouble much, I was a silent kid.. Until I got with my cousins, we always in some violent shit.. Ultraviolet kiss, that’s what moms was special-for.. Didn’t listen to dad when I was small. I was skeptical.. Late snack runs, dad came to check on you.. And never failed to wake up, to get you safe school.. And if I needed something, mom had the check book.. And never forget, the way dad taught me left hooks.. And how to dodge coppas, and how to chin check crooks.. And a whole bunch more that took time and stress…look!.. [Chorus] you the letters in the words I say.. you in every single prayer I pray.. you in ever single breath I take.. thank ya lord. For sending me some angels.. you the letters in the words I say.. you in every single prayer I pray.. you in ever single breath I take.. oohhh, I think of them Everyday.. [Verse] So now im highschoolin, kick-it with otha kids.. And I wanna go out today, but now I gotta ask the papa bear.. Appreciate it now, but back then I thought it was not to fair.. I Come home 20 minutes late, he sittin in the rockin chair.. Thas how it goes, tough love to make you discipline.. But he don’t know, it aint like he ever been a kid.. Watch the wind blow from my window, A grounded Child.. guess it was for best, my friends are all convicts now.. Never got a perfect grade card, but had the brain to.. Couldn’t hang my head high, my performance shameful.. Dad was always mad, slackin off he wasn’t into.. He wasn’t mad at me, but pissed off cause I had potential.. Nothin major here, choir concerts and papers.. I was one talented kid, but couldn’t master playbooks.. Never made a team, didn’t get the politics.. Graduated now, Still cant deal wit politics.. [Chorus] you the letters in the words I say.. you in every single prayer I pray.. you in ever single breath I take.. thank ya lord. For sending me some angels.. you the letters in the words I say.. you in every single prayer I pray.. you in ever single breath I take.. oohhh, I think of them Everyday.. [Verse] So now im 18, and im looking little older.. Yes im going to college but I got a block upon my shoulder.. My sister cakin, moms and pops man they both made it.. Still messin with the basics, declaring my ultimatum. So im takin as it comes, im tryna play it cool.. But this feelin is a new one, revolution away at school.. Time to be a man, get off the floor, get on my own two.. No longer look for confirmation, when makin my own moves.. It’s a hard thought, im almost on my own man.. All the friends I used to have are gone be gone damn.. sister miles away, no more kickin with my closest homie.. visitin days are far and between, so guess im gon be lonely.. but not matter what outcome, guys im still gon love ya.. you taught me all I needed to fight and to get thru struggle.. ima ya last seed, and im like you in everway.. don’t worry bout my loyalty I’ll think of you everyday.. |
1 word this shit is DOPE
this is the dopest song i've ever heard on this site I aint even gonna lie this right here is the BEST SONG Dropped on the net i've heard seriously...damn.....that hook is amazing this is an amazing song fam WOW thats all i can say lol i def. wanna do a collab with you :D WOW this is beautfiul shit man gave me goosebumps i'mma have too download this!! WOW |
DAMN!!!! added to radio Holy fuck. this tops any RV track i've heard. And homie. YOU CAN SING! You deserve to get accurate/Honest feedback. So here i go Production Alright the production. the Quality was real Good! damn man. i enjoy listening to this music the quality is music to my ears. Your vocals arent too loud. Nope they perfect. first perfectly over the beat. again. Music to my ears. The mixing was good bruh. No flaws no mess ups. Perfect. Good shit. You must record in a studio or atleast home studio? this shit sounds nice. But damn the production on this joint was crazy. Real nice shit bruh. overall i give production 9.9/10 Vocals Damn. The vocals actually touched my heart. Like i only know you from this site and it feels like i actually knew you off this site. Damn bruh this shit is deep. got me touched right now. Im listening to this like DAMN. yeah the concept on this. Is real nice! your a good man bro. Doin your thang going to college and a song dedicated to your family to show your appreciation. You have to be a family role model. not to mention your a good rapper. ok. the flow was GREAT didnt mess up. Didn't mispronounce anything. a perfect joint. your emotion and pressence on this was Excellent for this kind of track. And the breathe control was good YO. im likin this alot. And when the chorus came on i didnt know what you meant when you said you were "SINGING" on the hook. i was thinkin maybe harmonize. But NOPE. DAMN!!!!. you can really sing bruh. this shit is serious. you really hittin them notes. Hot hook bro vocals 10/10 Overall Yo, this is my favourite track on Rapverse. Your not on that Bust a nigga up tip. Your straight shouting out basically to the people who made you. You know what im saying. this had me touched. Im like damn this track is hot. and your flow is serious. especially on the second verse. Started speed rappin a bit. this was amazing. Damn famz. Good track the production was good. No mess ups. no half assed job. this was the full deal. Yo man this is added to the radio for sure. and will be my Number one. Got Damn! nice track yo overall i give this a 10/10 |
word up to what everyone said. shit was dope as fuck. word up, man. real talk righ thtere, shit is really dope. I'ma nominate this in the uhh RV hall of fame audio section. f'real. dope shit, man. 10/10 WORDDDDDDDD
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Before I get started I want to say that this song was DOPE. However, I just kinda want to point out a few things I didn't like/thought could be better, only because everyone else is just gunna come in here and ride your dick saying everything was perfect.
The first thing I noticed was that the vocals kinda didn't sound mixed much, it might have been my speakers to be honest, and your vocals were a bit too high for the beat, it might be good for the effect but as a song it sounds......different. Then I dunno how many times you recorded the first verse but the delivery and emotion on that verse wasn't quite up to par with the second verse and the second verse wasn't quite up to par with the third verse (which you fucking KILLED by the way). About the singing, it was good, not great, but good, which for your family makes no difference at all because they'll love it whether it was good or not, for me though, it was kinda awkward because the song would sound even better if the singing was great. IMO your flow slipped a little when you said "when I was" in "Didn’t listen to dad when I was small". I also think you should have added dubs, not loud ones but just enough so you can feel it. I hate critisizing it because this track was dooooope but that's what I think could have made it better. As far as I know, you understand that so you know I'm just being honest. On a scale of 1-10 this is like..........8.9/10. 10 being like, classic hip hop from pros and shit, so yes that's a compliment. :o We need to collab whenever I have better equipment and you have time, k? k. |
flow with delivery is nice...lyrics enunciated well, with a quality rhyme scheme
beat is appropriate for the theme of the track Singin was decent to good...wud be better with better mixing DUET? haaa lyrics very personal nice track bro 1 |
word up ^. good lookin on the feed ya'll..
word up Kontro. good looks man. im really glad you felt what i felt. that why i write music man. so i can share that feelin you know ? thas wassup. like to be real. thanks tense. really appreaciate it man. its real. spul you know i lub you nugga :).. thanks soc. i appreciate that you criticed as well as gave me props. really appreciate it man.. Q say the word nukka :shoot: :shoot: :).. i redid the ending cause i felt it didnt math to well. so i redid the last chorus's. but uppin ya'll.. i thought shit was hot. leave links |
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Yo listenin', beat is pretty perfect for the topic, you ride it perfect b, lyrically this is personal as fuck and i love it how u do it..damn from every1 that singin on rv you tha best haa and fa'real u as good as the proper singers haa so that shit is tight...multis are hot, calam's style is written all of this song, delivery is hot fam..and im def feelin this fam congratulations of graduatin by the way, and i feel how it gon be hard to leave ya fam nah mean, this track production is hot, everything in this track is crazy, you can tell this is from heart...
10/10.. Amazing...speechless |
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ayo good lookin on that feed man.. yea it was real. s'all i can spit yahmean ? good looks on that tho, really do appreciate it. i gotchu on that return..
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I'm feeling this shit man. Quality is fuckin fire. Your flow is on that old school Scarface tip....I like :). Hook's bad as hell man. You got a really good singing voice man. Lyrics are heart felt. I can tell you put a lot in this man.....a little look into the life of Ca'lam. Not really much to pick apart in this one man. Good Fuckin Job!
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ladies and gentlemen. Chris Tucker....i'lll leave some real feedback later son
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WORD! I was just thinkin that! DOPE!!!!!!!!!! 100/10 |
Listened to it...
Great track man. Really personal lyrics, I was feeling them. Flow was nice...it was different, but I liked it. Quality was awesome which really helped the listenability of the song. Vocals were nice...could have maybe used some dubs? They're straight though. Hook was awesome. For some reason on the hook, you sort of reminded me of Akon. Awesome track. Keep it up man, hit me up for a collab some time. |
haha akon ^. thanks man. really appreciate the feed. im down for w/e :).
thanks nygma :shoot: :shoot: .. and good looks bishop.. leave ya'll links if you want some feed :hump: |
my momz said she loves this joint she added it to her ipod LMFAO *thumbsup*
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lol..my heart is beating fast.. this was quite touching...mad time... beat was perfect for the topic...yeah ur presence was str8 ok.. did u sing the hooks?...boy u mad got a lovely voice if that was u... quality was tight...nothing went wrong mayne...ur flows were dope as well... props...and i wish u mad luck! |
this was a good song only thing negative i could point out is the line where you say time to be a man you come in a little too loud thats all really lol
flow loved your flow you switched it up throughout the whole song which was dope and kept me interested your chorus is amazing you sing better than any male to hit rv and female for that matter really lol chrous was definately felt i liked all 3 verse but i felt the 3rd one more i mean i cant imagine what its going to be like leaving my sisters your delvery and emotion were all good too props i think this is the best song to hit rv i downloaded it :) |
this shit is sick man.....really feelin tha track.....graduated this year too.......flow wuz nice.......tha singin wuz good too...liked how u peiced together ya story man........this shit is nice........
pz ~1~ |
now i know who u sound like Ahmad of pharcyde like that back in the day song he did.....both verses was cool they flowed real well theres really nothing bad i can say but ur vox seemed a lil loud n i do think u should dubed ya verses...the hook was aight but it seemed sumthing was missing overall nice drop....word :thumbup:
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playing...feeling the beat.
intros cool. anything from the heart is dope. flows cool, emotion is nice. Lyrics are cool bro. Hooks nice man, fucking solid track bro. RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233055 |
damn...this is a cold as joint...I like your flow a lot..real hot...lyrics was nice n ur singin was good on the hook. Real nice...Few minor flaws, but still really hot shit.
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good looks yo ^.. appreciate it man.
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damn like everyone else said, this is a hott track.
Although everything was on point I think what really made this track was the emotion you had on it. Lyrics were meaningful and good. Your quality is really nice. Singing was very good too. Damn theres really nothing wrong with this song. I think i'll have to DL it too. Keep the great work up man. |
k..typing as I listen...beat is corny lol but works with what u spitting bout...okay back to old dubless calam, delivery wise you on point...I can tell coming from a real place...hook is tight, can tell momma had you on the choir lol. flow is on point jus held same one too long in verse 1, verse 2 same thing good flow but its unchanging...delivery still on point...this beat an subject really befits you tho...this is borderline christian rap...if you made a rap video...I see you spitting to ya family in church while they watch from the pews...but this is real son an u hit the nail on the head where you needed it most which was emotion. I feel where you comign from son, def can relate to what you saying...an thats the key to making hit songs....establishing some type of connection with the listener an you did it hear. Keep it up man, smoothe introspective shit is where you shien fo real....1
Rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233115 |
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